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Author has written 7 stories for Romance, and Young Adult.

If you are a dreamer,

Come in,

If you are a dreamer, a wisher, a liar, a hoper, a prayer, a magic bean buyer

If you are a pretender,

Come sit by my fire

For we have some flax golden tales to spin,

Come in. Come in.

~ x~o~x~

~~ I lived to write - and wrote to live ~~ Samuel Rogers

~~ Be yourself. Above all, let who you are, what you are, what you believe, shine through every sentence you write, every piece you finish ~~ John Jakes

~~ Write without pay until somebody offers to pay ~~ Mark Twain

~~ Write only what you love - love only what you write ~~ Ray Bradbury

~~ You never have to change anything you got up in the middle of the night to write ~~ Saul Bellow

Aloha fellow writers/readers! About moi? Let's commencer avec this!

NAME: Carina

Well...where to start? Naturally, I love reading and writing. In my opinion, my writing skills aren't shipshape, but...just to give y'all a heads up, everything that is posted here is a first draft...which needs MAJOR editing and proofreading. See, the first draft is only to jot down ideas for me. So...it's not the the final thing, don't expect it to be, please. If you're a writer, you'll understand that you know your work is at it's best when you just feel it is. Sometimes I feel it, others I may have stories that are really dead, so don't mind me. You'll see that One Last Song and Forgotten Smiles are both finished, but...the writing style is quite elementary as I have started that once upon a time. If you want to read something of better quality, I would recommend my latest and greatest If You Loved Me Enough that I have just finished. Again the writing style is amateur in this story and need to be fixed up, but I promise you that if you muddle through it, it's actually quite good.

Please tell me what you think of my stories in a civilized manner so you can save yourself the embarrassment because anything otherwise will be deleted or reported, constructive criticism would be good, and always try to review! That's pretty much it! Hope you like my work!

BTW,

I'm sure most of you have heard of Fanfiction, so if you'd be kind enough to go and check it out:D http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2739800/1/

NOTE: Sorry to all readers, I will be taking an absence from Fictionpress as I am writing a to-be manuscript that cannot be posted. Sorry. I really love you guys!


Story Summaries:

If You Loved Me Enough (formally called I Remember): Leanna Collings is the smart, collected, studious, and conservative British nerdlette/nerdling in her school that knows six different languagues. But her past is not as simple as she lets on. She has a secret that's related to the famous British star Harmony Rachelles that's vanished off the face of Earth a year ago. Brenden Evermore is the rich, planless, jerk and player extraodinaire in the school with a dark secret, also best friends with Adam Ackerman. Adam is just like Leanna, smart, collected, studious and conservative. Perfect match? Far from it. Not if Brenden has something to do with it.

One Last Song: Dior and Devante met at a park years before. Since then, neither has loved another, declaring that they were each other's soulmate. Now Dior meets Devante again. But he is nothing but a guy who has a band with no educational background. How is a rich smart and witty girl supposed to love this beautiful disaster? Not only is their love on the line, but so are their lives. With a guy who will stop at NOTHING to win Dior's riches and love and Devante's lovesick brother in the way, how will these two end?

Forgotten Smiles: Everlyn vowed never to smile again after she killed her most beloved person on the earth with her drop-dead gorgeous smile. But tables are about to turn when Dreiden Landon-Reeves, filthy rich manipulative boy's next victim is no other than Everlyn herself. Can he make her see that it was not her fault? Or will she continue to torment herself and perhaps one day, suicide?

The History of An Angel: Angelique's always been the insecure loser no one cares about. After a harsh day, her guardian angel appears and tells her that he loves her. What's a girl gotta do? But that's not the end. Throw in a few devils, a forgotten legend, a weird plant and a few pitchforks and you got yourself a full time crisis.

Untittled: Madeline has nothing. She wins no awards. She barely gets past school. And she's not pretty. The one thing she can always depend on? Love from her family. But what happens when that too shatters on her like everything else has? She runs away. Leaving her poor little sister to cope with it. Her little sister's last resort? Give her private, personal, be caught dead if anyone read it diary to her crush.

Magical Lists: Jaykob's sister is extremely ill. To give her the money to do the operation, he promises a rich boy in his school to stalk Carina and give a list of all the things she loves and hates to him. But this kid isn't that simple, there are things he does to these girls that Jay finds out. Will he hand Carina over even when he loves her? Or will he leave his sister to die?



Story Progressions:

One Last Song: Completed

Forgotten Smiles: Completed

The History of An Angel: Discontinued

Untittled: Discontinued

Magical List: Discontinued

If You Loved Me Enough (formally called I Remember): Completed

~~ To write is to write is to write is to write is to write is to write is to write is to write ~~ Gertrude Stein

~~ If you do not breathe through writing, if you do not cry out in writing, or sing in writing, then don't write, because our culture has no use for it~~ Anais Nin

~~ If you're going to write, don't pretend to write down.It's going to be the best you can do, and it's the fact that it's the best you can do that kills you~~ Dorothy Parker

~~ Every piece of writing... starts from what I call a grit...a sight or sound, a sentence or happening that does not pass away...but quite inexplicably lodges in the mind ~~ Rummer Godden

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Out of Order by Your Sedative reviews
Torrie Cane stumbles upon Project, an underground nightclub. After meeting Slait, the owner of the club, she gets offered a job there. Of course, once she's in with him... she can't get out. She learns this the hard way. [R/R]
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Supernatural - Chapters: 16 - Words: 49,456 - Reviews: 262 - Favs: 180 - Follows: 211 - Updated: 11/25/2012 - Published: 3/26/2005
Samantha by Mystified reviews
Samantha is a normal college student, until her apartment falls victim to a bomb, and she's kidnapped by a very mysterious, very handsome stranger, whose intentions aren't all that clear.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 40 - Words: 97,227 - Reviews: 3201 - Favs: 1,840 - Follows: 802 - Updated: 5/3/2011 - Published: 12/21/2002 - Complete
Drug Addiction Fairytale by CK Shorty reviews
COMPLETE They grew up together, but never really got along, even if they did secretly like each other. But things change over the years. People change. Jude has turned to drugs, and Katelyn is keeping a secret herself.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 25 - Words: 94,223 - Reviews: 610 - Favs: 428 - Follows: 118 - Updated: 8/26/2009 - Published: 12/29/2005 - Complete
Not for Me by tickledblue reviews
FINISHED! I'm the loner with no backbone. He's the school's favourite god. He's at the top of the pyramid, while I'm not even part of the pyramid. Somebody tell me how this is going to work out.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Drama/Humor - Chapters: 30 - Words: 159,158 - Reviews: 4792 - Favs: 2,869 - Follows: 343 - Updated: 9/7/2007 - Published: 6/22/2004 - Complete
His Mistress by Maroon reviews
He was the most powerful and feared man in the country. He used his power to kill whoever he wished with or without reason. He showed no mercy. Me? I'm just the woman who fell in love with him.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 24 - Words: 54,136 - Reviews: 824 - Favs: 838 - Follows: 170 - Updated: 8/29/2007 - Published: 7/17/2005 - Complete
Getting A Fairytale by CK Shorty reviews
[FIN] SEQUEL to DAFT.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 29 - Words: 99,161 - Reviews: 681 - Favs: 311 - Follows: 35 - Updated: 2/22/2007 - Published: 6/1/2006 - Complete
One Night by awaitinglove reviews
[COMPLETE] He was the writer, the musician, the skater, the loner. We were off to college but then one little problem stands in the way...he gets me pregnant. Preview: 'So, you lied to him? ' Kristy asked softly. Yes, I did. I lied.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 15 - Words: 30,496 - Reviews: 975 - Favs: 1,330 - Follows: 170 - Updated: 2/3/2007 - Published: 6/16/2006 - Complete
To Be A Princess by Attache reviews
She was a maid, a waitress, a girl dreaming of her aspirations- all-in-all, an independent sort until she decided to dump mop water on his head...
Fiction: Romance - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 15 - Words: 21,075 - Reviews: 137 - Favs: 33 - Follows: 16 - Updated: 10/12/2006 - Published: 12/11/2005
Quandaries of a Quirky Romantic by Secretive reviews
She's a hopeless romantic that is terrified of falling in love. Quirky? You have no idea... He's misunderstood purposely so and has a past. A dark one. So...what happens when their small town matchmaker decides they're destined for each other?
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Humor/Drama - Chapters: 26 - Words: 113,930 - Reviews: 1866 - Favs: 1,503 - Follows: 199 - Updated: 8/21/2006 - Published: 9/13/2004 - Complete
He Punks Me Not by Slideshow reviews
I'll chase and stalk him until he is mine. I'm pretty determined. Unfortunately his best friend thinks my existence is pointless and I'm unworthy. And, well, he's pretty damn determined too. / Left up just for comparison with my writing then and now.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 25 - Words: 165,111 - Reviews: 4184 - Favs: 2,454 - Follows: 202 - Updated: 6/1/2006 - Published: 10/9/2003 - Complete
When You Own the Universe by Secretive reviews
He’s perceived as a spoiled rich kid that always gets what he wants. She’s seen as a cynical loner with an anger issue. But neither are truly what they seem what happens when they begin to notice this? What happens when he “buys” her for a week?
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Humor/Drama - Chapters: 26 - Words: 112,384 - Reviews: 3610 - Favs: 3,306 - Follows: 328 - Updated: 3/25/2006 - Published: 10/16/2003 - Complete
Nothing To Lose by bulletproof.cupid reviews
Hot guys are good, right...? but what if you happen to be stuck in an elevator with one for TWO whole hours? What if he's setting you up for one grand, but falls for you instead? That's right... damn O.o [ON HAITUS. shallow shit.don't dare read]
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 12 - Words: 44,200 - Reviews: 483 - Favs: 111 - Follows: 28 - Updated: 2/3/2006 - Published: 6/17/2005
The Strength of Eternity by My Works 87 reviews
They were best friends as kids. But time brought realities that tore them apart. Now he's a school player and she's the girl no one notices. Perhaps fate means to reunite them. Chapter 17 up
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 18 - Words: 88,067 - Reviews: 1724 - Favs: 1,509 - Follows: 637 - Updated: 1/17/2006 - Published: 11/15/2003
All 4 You by You Are So Last Summer reviews
Tyler Raileveu, badass player extraordinaire, does the unthinkable. He falls in love with the one girl he can't have, his best friend. Can he make the one girl who knows all the dirt about him, fall in love with him?
Fiction: Romance - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 32 - Words: 69,984 - Reviews: 1051 - Favs: 968 - Follows: 104 - Updated: 10/13/2005 - Published: 1/15/2003 - Complete
Through the Eyes of Sapphire by fire-senshi3 reviews
Aoi, a kind-hearted girl, and Midori, a cold-hearted jerk, were the worst of enemies. But when a strange turn of events throws the two teens into a new and dangerous world, they may have to become unlikely allies if they ever want to find their way home!
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 10 - Words: 27,179 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 5 - Updated: 9/20/2005 - Published: 8/22/2005
Secrets and Scars by E. Liz Collins reviews
Jessica is quiet and reserved. Tyler tries to befriend her, but something about her remains aloof. As she slowly begins to open to him, Ty discovers the secrets she has kept hidden along with her physical and emotional scars. FINISHED
Fiction: Romance - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 19 - Words: 45,352 - Reviews: 320 - Favs: 158 - Follows: 15 - Updated: 8/4/2005 - Published: 3/11/2005 - Complete
Hello Kitty by Endless Dark reviews
After a drunken night, Lira wakes up next to Jude, a childhood nemesis. It gets worse when they find that they’re married. But when an opportunity too good to pass up presents itself, what will happen when they stay married?
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 33 - Words: 85,456 - Reviews: 3162 - Favs: 3,811 - Follows: 365 - Updated: 11/10/2004 - Published: 5/10/2004 - Complete
Discontented by Endless Dark reviews
Kat's life is a total mess. She has family problems, can't decide which college to go to, and to top it all off, she has to deal with Jake, who is not exactly her favorite person. But when everything comes crashing down, he's the one she turns to.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 25 - Words: 52,472 - Reviews: 659 - Favs: 526 - Follows: 67 - Updated: 3/28/2004 - Published: 1/3/2004 - Complete
The Courting of Aviahnna Rubenne by Blazing-moon reviews
*Okay, I lied...Epilogue up* The plots of Aviah and the many doomed suitors that attempt to court her. She outwits all but one of them, and he happens to be the worst of all. (She'll learn her lessons. ) R/R! *Not meant to be historically correct* :)
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 14 - Words: 52,887 - Reviews: 1056 - Favs: 1,026 - Follows: 82 - Updated: 5/15/2003 - Published: 7/20/2002
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If You Loved Me Enough reviews
It isn't fair that Brenden Evermorepopular,flunking,playboyshould get everything he wants.But he does,until Leanna Collingsnerdy overachievercomes into picture.But both don't have such easy lives as they let on.Throw in a celeb&soulmate nerd and wait.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 36 - Words: 110,979 - Reviews: 135 - Favs: 72 - Follows: 44 - Updated: 4/8/2007 - Published: 8/15/2006 - Complete
What's Lost is Lost reviews
He loved her from afar.Admiring her beauty from away was enough to fufill his need for her.It all worked out wonderfully,until news spread through the school 'she died.' But little did he know,she loved him too,and he was the cause of her death.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,787 - Reviews: 16 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 2/28/2006 - Published: 2/15/2006
Magical Lists reviews
He needs 6 grand or his sister dies.Who should help him but the filthy rich stuck-up kid.Yes,the rich kid will help,but for a price.He must give him a list of her likes and dislikes,will he accept it?And if he does,will he only gain more than he bargained
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 3 - Words: 4,946 - Reviews: 14 - Updated: 2/16/2006 - Published: 1/31/2006
Forgotten Smiles reviews
She use to smile and laugh at everything.Her smile melted everyone's troubles away.Then It happened, she never smiled again afraid she might kill another.But then she meets another him,and he's making her laugh again...so what will happen?Will he die...?
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 24 - Words: 27,017 - Reviews: 87 - Favs: 10 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 1/26/2006 - Published: 9/15/2005 - Complete
Untittled reviews
Finally,I made up my mind, I was going to run away.Run away,and never come back.For this was what my so-called “parents” deserved.They had put me through this,and did they actually think I’d make it through,setting me up and convincing me to believe that
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 7 - Words: 5,737 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 10/12/2005 - Published: 8/27/2005
The History of An Angel reviews
Angelique hates her life. Period. She hates middle school too. But then everything changes, she finds out that she has a guardian angel that tells her about her forgotten past. She has already wasted 13 years of her life, she must complete her task befo
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Fantasy - Chapters: 4 - Words: 6,271 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 10/7/2005 - Published: 8/26/2005
One Last Song reviews
I love him more than I've EVER loved anyone.I spend 6yrs waiting to meet him again,but he was only trash.I do not love him anymore.The 6yrs I lost I'll never be able to live again,but too bad I didn't know how much time I REALLY had...
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 19 - Words: 22,899 - Reviews: 97 - Favs: 19 - Updated: 9/25/2005 - Published: 8/26/2005 - Complete
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