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Author has written 2 stories for Romance.

Hmm.. WHat to say? Let's start off with my alias.

alias: delaA.

Birthday: February

Age: 16

Personality: Messed up in so many ways.

What bothers me in a fic?

First-person fics which constantly changing POVs. Multiple main characters. Perfect main characters.

After reading many fics on this website, I've come to the conclusion that the romance here is classified into several MAIN catagories.

Hot guy meets nothing special loser girl, love, end of plotline.

Hot guy meets tomboy, love, end of plotline.

Hot, mentally tortured guy meets happy girl who changes mentally unstable guy's world into bunnies and pansies.

Hot, badass guy meets sweet innocent girl, love, end of plotline.

Hot guy, talented girl, rivalry, end of plotline

So those are the character based categories. Now. For the plot based categories.

Girl gets shipped off to expensive bording school and meets hot sexy rich guy.

Girl gets stuck with sexy step sibling (my fave lmao. Check out Myrika's version of this. It's great. It's in my favorites so just stroll over and check it out.)

Girl gets stuck in all boy's boarding school. (Fun but wayyy too overused. Especially with all the not-so-well written ones out there It ruined it for me.)

Girl falls for brother's best friend.

Mind block right now. I seriously can't think. How can that be? Maybe it's because my first group of cliches covered everything already.

Now, What does every good teenage romance need?

Constants: A popular, sexy-ass, filthy rich, arrogant, genius, almost-or-over six foot jock who happens to be one step away from owning the whole school. (Psht, that's why my guys do own the whole school. I thought, they're almost there so might as well give it to them.)

A bitch to physically and verbally abuse the heroine. Now, this is personally my favorite. Every romance needs a bitch. It's quite complex actually. A bitch becomes a direct pathway for the readers to feel sympathy with the heroine. In addition to adding the element of jealousy, the bitch gives the heroine an opportunity to get spunky and provides the dude with a fabulous knight-in-shining-armor complex, thus causing the heroine to fall for the dude even harder making it easier on the writer. wow. bad sentence. Psht. I do it and I love it. I love a good bitch. If there's no bitch in a romance, I get bored.

The variable:

Ah yes, the heroine can either make or break a romance story. She can either make it wonderful, or make you want to hang yourself from the ceiling. Luckily, I've been refining my library to the ones that won't make me think suicidal thoughts so I am quite fortunate. I would rant on, but I'm tired as hell.

Well, I must say that it is difficult to stray from this romance orthodoxy, but try to put SOME depth into the plotline. Try to make something that isn't too shallow and something that has room for development.

I have nothing against cliches, after all, romance is the trash genre after all, but once in a while I want to see some twists on this 'hot guy' thing. Of course, that's not saying that we should all start writing fics with ugly guys in them, because romance is meant to depict a girl or guy's fantasy. All I am saying is that I'm getting really sick of those plotlines where you can almost name every future event with precision after reading the first chapter.

What makes me want to wedge a hammer into my skull, send my brain through the food processor, and feed the pulp to my little brother?

Have you realized that more and more heroines are losing parents or significant others due to some kind of life threatening disease that emerges from seemingly nowhere? It would be nice to see a girl who has a father, mother, mother in law, or fourth cousin who doesn't announce an impending stroke on Christmas morning.

"Merry Christmas, sweetheart. I've got HCV Cirrhosis."
"Awwww, thanks Daddy!"

Back in my more sympathetic days, I pitied the heroine, I cried for the heroine, and felt inspired by the heroine. Now I'm reaching the brink of insanity.

Now, Issues about my writing.

Too many to list.

~DelaA

Here's Da Vinci at Work's and my collaboration account Ace Work

And here is our story Shallow Depths

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Lighthouse Charlie by Jessie L. Star - AKA star123 reviews
The first time I had kicked in the womb it had been when Max, a baby himself, had placed his hand against my mother's stomach. It had been the first, but certainly not the last, time I'd kicked him, and now suddenly he wasn't interested in a fight? Weird. **Removed and now available on Amazon and Smashwords!**
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 20 - Words: 5,369 - Reviews: 1882 - Favs: 1,660 - Follows: 699 - Updated: 2/23 - Published: 2/20/2010 - Complete
So Much to Learn by Jessie L. Star - AKA star123 reviews
Complete After a rather hideous break up with her boyfriend due to her inability to 'put out', Talia bullies her brother's best friend into teaching her the complexities of a 'full' relationship. Turns out uni courses have nothing on life lessons! **Removed and now available on Amazon and Smashwords!**
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 34 - Words: 10,024 - Reviews: 2996 - Favs: 3,694 - Follows: 581 - Updated: 2/23 - Published: 8/5/2005 - Complete
Private Lives, Public Property by Jessie L. Star - AKA star123 reviews
It's not easy to pretend you're in love for the sake of teenagers and housewives across the country but top footballer Lucas Goodspeed and shy, romantic Isobel Saunders soon discover that convincing themselves that they're not in love might be even harder. **Removed and now available on Amazon and Smashwords!**
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 22 - Words: 8,299 - Reviews: 3186 - Favs: 3,451 - Follows: 1,430 - Updated: 2/23 - Published: 4/16/2007 - Complete
Getting Malcolm by pinkmist reviews
He stared down at me, eyes dark and unrelenting. "Do you want Malcolm?" Stupid question. But I nodded anyway. "Then kiss me." Talk about getting caught between a rock and a hard place. *SKoW Winner*
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 21 - Words: 123,950 - Reviews: 927 - Favs: 951 - Follows: 1,191 - Updated: 1/26 - Published: 6/29/2006
Brown Eyes by xoxluurve reviews
It's like we're more than just friends but still less than lovers, you're oh so tough, but I want to be your first weakness. Here we go again with the mixed signals and second thoughts.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Humor/Drama - Chapters: 31 - Words: 123,104 - Reviews: 4193 - Favs: 2,236 - Follows: 1,919 - Updated: 9/25/2013 - Published: 7/22/2006
The Contract by Bleeding Air reviews
REMOVED Katlyn, teased and made fun of all her life, meets a strange boy in a cafe. He offers her five wishes in return for herself, but as her wishes progress, they aren't what she expected. Now the boy owns her and worse yet; how will she get out of it?
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Horror/Supernatural - Chapters: 29 - Words: 9,225 - Reviews: 1789 - Favs: 1,268 - Follows: 118 - Updated: 11/18/2010 - Published: 5/15/2004 - Complete
Breathing Life Into a Statue by eleine kruez reviews
2nd Ep added -- FIN Put on the spot, rich bratty Adrienne Clarke picks a random stranger and declares him to be her devoted boyfriend. What happens when two very different people are forced to act in love with each other when they really aren't?
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 22 - Words: 71,796 - Reviews: 803 - Favs: 853 - Follows: 74 - Updated: 7/6/2010 - Published: 10/21/2004 - Complete
Swish by lovelyhead reviews
He was her rival, on and off the court. He can get any girl he wants, and she doesn’t know how to lose. In a battle of basketball and the heart, Taylor Hampton won’t let James Stirling win. Dallington High School never saw this coming. REMOVED.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,503 - Reviews: 3427 - Favs: 2,755 - Follows: 1,618 - Updated: 6/17/2010 - Published: 7/23/2005 - Complete
Dose of Your Own by Our Heartfelt Lies reviews
Hi, my name is Kelsey Sanders and I'm too nice to be mean even when I think he deserves it. Even when I'm sure he broke my sister's heart. So why give him mine to do it all over again? Big mistake, Andrew Wiser told me so and he's always right. Complete!
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 33 - Words: 236,432 - Reviews: 617 - Favs: 556 - Follows: 247 - Updated: 2/7/2010 - Published: 10/6/2007 - Complete
How To Seduce a Millionaire by Queen Anabella reviews
It was the perfect cliché plan from her radical best friend and roommate: seduce the millionaire, get the cash. But the millionaire's a bit of a bastard, unfortunately. Things never go as smoothly as planned.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 10 - Words: 36,298 - Reviews: 345 - Favs: 261 - Follows: 319 - Updated: 8/11/2009 - Published: 4/12/2007
Luka & Shoe by King Patch reviews
UPDATED! Confrontations between insecure Constance and secretive Wolf, between cranky Luka and worried Shoe, between manic Natalie and ticked-off Shoe. A glance into Shoe's past explains some of her present. What's to happen next?
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 19 - Words: 115,770 - Reviews: 627 - Favs: 513 - Follows: 450 - Updated: 7/20/2009 - Published: 1/22/2006
Luciology by skankasaurus reviews
“Um, hello,” I said weakly, and I didn't fail to notice the way he was alternating his stares between me and the fish. “It's nice to meet you.” “...Were you just talking to your fish?”
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Humor/Drama - Chapters: 11 - Words: 40,137 - Reviews: 474 - Favs: 438 - Follows: 496 - Updated: 7/1/2009 - Published: 11/22/2007
Of Money and Mouths by mrdryrdrlngs reviews
Take a girl who cheats, a guy she can't stand, and her gay, sometimes crossdressing ex. Throw in a pissed off football player, one doozy of a bet, and more money than should be handled by people like this. Mix well. Chaos, anyone?
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 382 - Reviews: 756 - Favs: 488 - Follows: 483 - Updated: 6/8/2009 - Published: 3/29/2007
Don't Make A Scene by SamanthaNicole reviews
REMOVED. There are loads of things out there I'm not exactly fond of. For example: string beans, getting up early, doing homework, and Ryan Bradley. He was number one on my list. And he was trouble.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 11 - Reviews: 928 - Favs: 938 - Follows: 255 - Updated: 6/3/2009 - Published: 9/20/2007 - Complete
Changing his Status Quo by Da Vinci at Work reviews
When the heroine of a romance story suffers from obsessive compulsive disorder and quite a few other undiagnosed quirks, you know something outrageous is about to happen to her love life, no?
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Humor/Drama - Chapters: 15 - Words: 42,682 - Reviews: 627 - Favs: 186 - Follows: 227 - Updated: 5/29/2009 - Published: 10/1/2006
Girl for Hire by belle.nisce reviews
They're together - only for the press. But she doesn't fit in to his world - and he makes sure it stays that way. Everybody is against them - including themselves, so really, what's the best that can come out of what they have - which is nothing? CH12 UP!
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 12 - Words: 50,513 - Reviews: 822 - Favs: 795 - Follows: 989 - Updated: 1/15/2009 - Published: 4/27/2007
False Facades by Maeven reviews
Sam Westlane is the new kid in the famous all boys Crestan High School for the rich and the spoiled ... There's only one problem. Sam is a girl.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 30 - Words: 114,525 - Reviews: 7164 - Favs: 5,809 - Follows: 798 - Updated: 1/5/2009 - Published: 9/5/2003 - Complete
Losing it All by unlikely.story reviews
She thinks she lost her cell phone, everyone else thinks she lost her virginity, and the guy thought to be responsible for her 'deflowering' has no problem adding fuel to the fire.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 5 - Words: 10,987 - Reviews: 256 - Favs: 244 - Follows: 345 - Updated: 12/26/2008 - Published: 6/7/2008
Sox in a Box by Myrika reviews
She's appalled by his food choices. He thinks she's a baseball curse. It's definitely not a match made in heaven or in Boston, for that matter. //REMOVED//
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 17 - Words: 2,082 - Reviews: 1920 - Favs: 624 - Follows: 459 - Updated: 12/9/2008 - Published: 2/8/2008 - Complete
I Only Date Nerds by unlikely.story reviews
I have rules when it comes to who I'll date, and he wants me to break every single one.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 16 - Words: 36,651 - Reviews: 953 - Favs: 797 - Follows: 877 - Updated: 5/17/2008 - Published: 1/14/2007
The Tutoring Contract by pinkshades reviews
Tutoring's never been this complicated, thanks to Wes McDermott. He'll ignore you, then charm you. He'll insult you, then ask you out. With little studying going on, all Amy wants is for Wes to pick up a textbook ... before she murders him with it.DELETED
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,484 - Reviews: 966 - Favs: 1,001 - Follows: 951 - Updated: 3/17/2008 - Published: 2/16/2007
Indulge Me, Baby by lesleydevon reviews
It was simple. Meet father, whose 17 year absence hasn't hurt me at all, of course. Meet The Breakfast Club, and ultimately strike up a bet with one of the members. Since I am such a cool and collected person, I really don't care that they hate me. Right?
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 7 - Words: 15,805 - Reviews: 40 - Favs: 20 - Follows: 29 - Updated: 2/20/2008 - Published: 11/4/2007
The Informant by abridgedone reviews
Nik has a lot on her plate, like writing her next bestseller and snooping about for celeb gossip for her boss's tabloid. Enter Mason, who is broody, irritating, and has a dangerous past that ends up making Nik a celeb in a way she never expected.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 24 - Words: 83,076 - Reviews: 245 - Favs: 143 - Follows: 205 - Updated: 2/8/2008 - Published: 3/7/2007
Emery & Me by In.the.Wardrobe reviews
He looked towards my waist before groaning and looking away. “Look what you’re wearing.” Confused, I glanced down, and immediately realised the dilemma. I was in my underwear. “Oh.” [COMPLETE]
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Drama/Humor - Chapters: 18 - Words: 75,512 - Reviews: 1329 - Favs: 2,074 - Follows: 489 - Updated: 12/24/2007 - Published: 5/27/2007 - Complete
That Essay That Everyone Else Writes by JJSLAM2129 reviews
Mary Sues, Cliches, Stupid Villans, Reviewers, Bad Logic and anything else I can think of that bugs me about today's stories. If something's bugging you, chances are you'll find it here. Now with Worldbuilding. Topic suggestions welcome! Reviews returned.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Tragedy/Humor - Chapters: 12 - Words: 16,758 - Reviews: 205 - Favs: 107 - Follows: 50 - Updated: 9/16/2007 - Published: 10/5/2006
The Bluest Eyes by Vivian Locke reviews
Matthew Braun has spent his entire university career building his reputation as the main playboy on campus. That is until his friends bet him 500 dollars that he could never get the most stuckup bookworm, Rayne Johnson, to spend a night with him.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 34 - Words: 71,547 - Reviews: 638 - Favs: 997 - Follows: 272 - Updated: 9/8/2007 - Published: 4/21/2007 - Complete
Close Encounters, Inc by fazzingaway reviews
Complete! Between the three of us, we were probably connected to everyone in our year group and helped people meet the men or women of their dreams. But then one dream turned into a nightmare when I realised I'd fallen in love with the target…
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 24 - Words: 81,605 - Reviews: 635 - Favs: 934 - Follows: 117 - Updated: 8/15/2007 - Published: 7/26/2004 - Complete
Everything Changes But You by Toxica939 reviews
Kate's home from college in America for her brother's wedding. Mark was her first love until he broke her heart and she hasn't seen him since she left the country. So of course he just has to be her brother's best man...
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 11 - Words: 27,674 - Reviews: 125 - Favs: 60 - Follows: 87 - Updated: 6/13/2007 - Published: 5/17/2007
Jilted by serako reviews
Sayuri was the perfect woman. Beautiful, charming, and a successful interior decorator, to boot. So why did Eric leave her at the altar for her best friend? And why is Sayuri sleeping with Eric's sexy older brother Vincent? The story of a woman scorned...
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 22 - Words: 87,854 - Reviews: 1226 - Favs: 1,550 - Follows: 368 - Updated: 4/30/2007 - Published: 7/14/2006
Shallow Depths by Ace Work reviews
She was, as everyone considered, the most outrageous thing to happen to the city...So, what happens when this simple country folk comes face to face with the most two faced guy to ever walk the surface of planet Earth?
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 2 - Words: 7,178 - Reviews: 61 - Favs: 27 - Follows: 54 - Updated: 4/21/2007 - Published: 11/26/2006
Reason and Romance Redux by Myrika reviews
A drunken one night stand with Alex Montgomery is a complication Adrian Blake doesn't need, especially not when he's her new stepbrother. //REMOVED//
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 26 - Words: 4,795 - Reviews: 4277 - Favs: 1,774 - Follows: 410 - Updated: 4/13/2007 - Published: 1/13/2007 - Complete
Thirteenth Floor Guys by The Incredible Flying Wolf reviews
Fallon: typical guy. Thea: typical tomboy. They've been best friends for 14 years. But will he ever see her as something more? Add one track star, a crazy scottish roomie, a New Year's Eve party, and Hawk, who might just have a few tricks up his sleeve...
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 13 - Words: 46,830 - Reviews: 107 - Favs: 65 - Follows: 53 - Updated: 3/4/2007 - Published: 6/16/2006
The Red Carpet by You Are So Last Summer reviews
A story of prep school's elite, set against the backdrop of Hollywood lifestyles and heartbreak. First loves are unforgettable, especially when it's the infuriating, charming It boy who just returned from boarding school.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 25 - Words: 96,886 - Reviews: 1008 - Favs: 1,159 - Follows: 188 - Updated: 1/2/2007 - Published: 11/3/2005 - Complete
Romeo & Juliet Revisited by Grunge Muffin reviews
Is love a tender thing? Two ex-bestfriends spend 5 years of High School hating each other. Now at the end, a sudden unexpected road trip forces them to rethink everything they thought they knew and felt about each other.
Fiction: General - Rated: M - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 24 - Words: 84,582 - Reviews: 724 - Favs: 431 - Follows: 228 - Updated: 12/26/2006 - Published: 5/19/2004
Everything For Love by The CandyCane Princess reviews
Shana has to deal with her rich boy stepbrother Kelley while trying to get the boy of her dreams to notice her. But has she got her eye on the right guy? UPDATED!
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 27 - Words: 125,403 - Reviews: 705 - Favs: 305 - Follows: 127 - Updated: 10/28/2006 - Published: 3/30/2005
When You Own the Universe by Secretive reviews
He’s perceived as a spoiled rich kid that always gets what he wants. She’s seen as a cynical loner with an anger issue. But neither are truly what they seem what happens when they begin to notice this? What happens when he “buys” her for a week?
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Humor/Drama - Chapters: 26 - Words: 112,384 - Reviews: 3610 - Favs: 3,305 - Follows: 328 - Updated: 3/25/2006 - Published: 10/16/2003 - Complete
Living with the Devil by Stellarfrog reviews
Sophia's happy. Or at least she was until her roommate unexpectedly left after hastily finding a replacement, who just so happens to be the ex-love-of-Sophia's-life and the cause of a whole lot of pain and misery. It just sucks that he's so damn charming.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 16 - Words: 65,315 - Reviews: 327 - Favs: 274 - Follows: 173 - Updated: 1/12/2006 - Published: 7/12/2005
Family Matters by Kayli reviews
FIN! Alisa's world is turned upsidedown when her mom announces her engagement to a man 9 months after her dad died. Soontobe stepbrother Jason hates the situation as much as she does. Together, can they stop their parents from making a big mistake?
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 11 - Words: 33,527 - Reviews: 234 - Favs: 151 - Follows: 18 - Updated: 10/5/2005 - Published: 5/8/2005 - Complete
Hello Kitty by Endless Dark reviews
After a drunken night, Lira wakes up next to Jude, a childhood nemesis. It gets worse when they find that they’re married. But when an opportunity too good to pass up presents itself, what will happen when they stay married?
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 33 - Words: 85,456 - Reviews: 3162 - Favs: 3,811 - Follows: 365 - Updated: 11/10/2004 - Published: 5/10/2004 - Complete
Anyone But Me by Grunge Muffin reviews
Hailey is trying to help her best friend Mackenzie overcome her boy problems. Now Mackenzies are fixed, but Hailey's got some of her own. In the forms of Ben. And Nathan...*Finished*
Fiction: General - Rated: M - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 31 - Words: 62,815 - Reviews: 190 - Favs: 122 - Follows: 14 - Updated: 7/21/2003 - Published: 4/23/2003
All About You by Melody1 reviews
Popular Devon meets and uses innocent Sophie to get his exgirlfriend back. But after it's all done, does he get who he really wants? THE CONTINUATION HAS BEEN MOVED TO A SEPARATE DOCUMENT see my profile Please Read and Review. I'd really appreciate it.
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 33 - Words: 184,953 - Reviews: 2257 - Favs: 1,016 - Follows: 171 - Updated: 4/14/2003 - Published: 4/7/2002 - Complete
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Free Fall reviews
Rynne Hartley is the daughter of the notorious town whore. Hayden Winters is Winsley High's idolized senior who wants nothing more than to break her apart the same way her mother broke apart his world. It's a game of revenge and everyone's playing.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 15 - Words: 68,388 - Reviews: 621 - Favs: 477 - Follows: 612 - Updated: 8/30/2008 - Published: 5/12/2007
Three's One Two Many reviews
She grew up in the Darling Estate alongside the flawless Darling twins. After six years of separation, they are back in her life as sexy, organic, pure alphamales. Hell runs loose, but as they say, can't live with them, can't live without them.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 18 - Words: 86,648 - Reviews: 939 - Favs: 635 - Follows: 624 - Updated: 5/19/2007 - Published: 9/9/2006
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