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Author has written 75 stories for General, Life, Nature, Love, Humor, Song, Family, Politics, Friendship, and Young Adult.

"I Caught Fire"

Seemed to stop my breath...
My head on your chest, waiting to cave in.
From the bottom of my...
Hear your voice again.
Could we dim the sun and wonder where we've been?

Maybe you and me...
So kiss me like you did.
My heart stopped beating.
Such a softer sin...

I melting.
In your eyes I lost my place, could stay a while.
And I'm melting in your eyes,
Like my first time that I caught fire.
Just stay with me, lay with me now.

Never caught my breath...
Every second I'm without you I'm a mess.
Ever know each other...
Trust these words are stones, why cuts aren't healing.
Learning how to love...

I'm melting.
In your eyes I lost my place, could stay a while.
And I'm melting in your eyes,
Like my first time that I caught fire.
Just stay with me, lay with me now.

You could stay and watch me fall,
And of course I'll ask for help.
Just stay with me now...
We could take our heads off, stay in bed, just make love.
That's all.
Just stay with me now...

I'm melting.
In your eyes I lost my place, could stay a while.
And I'm melting in your eyes,
Like my first time that I caught fire.
Just stay with me, lay with me.

In your eyes I lost my place, could stay a while.
And I'm melting in your eyes,
Like my first time that I caught fire.
Just stay with me, lay with me.

In your eyes...
Let's sleep till the sun burns out.
I'm melting in your eyes.
Let's sleep till the sun burns out.
I'm melting in your eyes.

What I Listen To
The Used, Green Day, The Red Jumpsuit Apparatus, Saosin, 30SecondstoMars, My Chemical Romance, Hawthorne Heights, Panic! At the Disco, Lostprophets, Angels and Airwaves, Cute Is What We Aim For, Fall Out Boy, Switchfoot, Nickelback, Evanescence, Avenged Sevenfold, Staind, Good Charlotte, Atreyu, Stone Sour, Hinder, Breaking Benjamin, Three Days Grace, Flyleaf, Papa Roach, Aiden, Disturbed, Dance Gavin Dance, Coheed and Cambria, Linkin Park, Saliva, Naglfar, Through the Eyes of the Dead, The White Stripes, Amber Pacific, Tokyo Rose, Chiodos, Senses Fail, Bullet For My Valentine, The Number Twelve Looks Like You, Alexisonfire, Queen, HIM, Simple Plan, As I Lay Dying, Avril Lavigne, The Beatles, Beneath The Sky, Gordon Lightfoot, Madina Lake, Rise Against, Serj Tankian, Sick Puppies, Hellogoodbye, Boys Like Girls, Big & Rich, Rascal Flatts, Mark Wills, Audioslave, Aerosmith, Drop Dead Gorgeous, Skeletonwitch, Celtic Frost, The Red Chord, Say Anything, KoRn, The Devil Wears Prada, Job For A Cowboy, Enya, DragonForce, Black Tide, Tokio Hotel, Lifehouse, Apocalyptica, Story of the Year

L.i.f.e isn't about waiting for the storm to pass.
It's about learning to dance in the rain.

"Procrastination is a lot like masturbation.
It feels good at the time but later on you're like:
'Oh my god, I just fucked myself.'"
-thanks, kiya-

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Women's Curse by Time To Change reviews
Pls R&R
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/20/2008 - Complete
Gethsemane by illicitly yours reviews
Hold my hand tightly and do not let go. Promise me this.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 383 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/1/2008 - Complete
Internet Japanese Name by C.R. Diamond reviews
All of you here or anywhere on the internet who have decided to make a Japanese name for your screen name or Pen Name or whatever. This my friends is for you. Enjoy.
Poetry: Humor - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 343 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/27/2007 - Complete
compliment by hellomister reviews
mechanical flattery.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 24 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 4 - Published: 11/23/2007 - Complete
Lobotomy by Death Princess reviews
Sister, darling, if only you had a heart. I'd rip it apart. (This is frustration on those who show no emotion) plz r&r. constructive criticism is welcome.
Poetry: Family - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 137 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/15/2006
More Than Me by My Bitter Swan Song
Because you loved a dream more than you could ever love me...
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 165 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/20/2006
Bush Killed Kennedy by Liikaa reviews
If you like our president...don't read this.
Poetry: Song - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 253 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 3 - Published: 12/27/2005
Sleep Easy by shes toxic reviews
Yes , this is about a certain someone . And all I have to say about her is ; What you give , you get back three fold .
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 151 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/5/2005
Ode to Algebra Teacher by wodneythewat reviews
Oh boring teacher, making us suffer.
Poetry: Humor - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 2 - Words: 378 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 10/14/2005 - Published: 10/5/2005 - Complete
This Isn't Just Another Poem by This is Da Vinci Speaking reviews
What's wrong with the world today?
Poetry: Politics - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 322 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/14/2005
The Cat Sat by Lexi Teniro reviews
Inspired by the young children's phrase "the cat sat on a mat"...with a little twist. [Stranger than funny]
Poetry: Humor - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 72 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/14/2005
Georgy Porgy by Ryan Patrick Bailey reviews
The poetic inspiration for a political change. Please know this is all in good fun.
Poetry: Politics - Rated: K - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 158 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/14/2004
Revival by OneMileAway reviews
About thinking something was finally over, and then having it thrown back in my face again. About how I tried to recover...
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 243 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/21/2001
War and Sex by LKrisNewcomb reviews
funny poem i found on bath room wall
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 24 - Reviews: 14 - Favs: 3 - Published: 10/28/2001
Light (or is it dark?) by me3gogi reviews
this is a theoretical debate. i mean, if u agree with the second verse, then u have agreed with the ending too. please r&r - k?
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 687 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 3 - Published: 6/11/2001
Star Light by Dark Impressionist reviews
Heheh... I love the way vampires think.... Tell me if I got the POV right!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 57 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Published: 6/2/2001
Untouchable by the goddess of the underworld reviews
well, the pg-13 rating is because there is a little slash in there and the last verse is a little suicidal.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 15 - Favs: 3 - Published: 4/21/2001
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Your First Appearance
the world is a stage and you are my star
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 21 - Published: 8/30/2008 - Complete
Ambition
where i want to be
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Published: 8/30/2008 - Complete
Walk reviews
oh these cool july nights
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/6/2008 - Complete
Summer reviews
who says innocence is overrated?
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 49 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 2 - Published: 7/2/2008 - Complete
Midnight reviews
everything
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 69 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/9/2008 - Complete
Raw reviews
ceased to exist
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 58 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/27/2008 - Complete
Tired reviews
and i can't get it back
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 31 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/27/2008 - Complete
Grudge reviews
destroyer of hope
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 13 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/27/2008 - Complete
Racing the Moon reviews
love personified
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 88 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4/12/2008 - Complete
You reviews
beautiful
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 56 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/12/2008 - Complete
Rewind Repeat Rewind
fallfallfall 'cause it feels so good
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 50 - Published: 4/11/2008 - Complete
Romancing the Stone reviews
i never got a chance to wear it
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4/2/2008 - Complete
Hope
and i know i can fly
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 59 - Published: 4/2/2008 - Complete
There Is No Next Time This Time reviews
i may not hear the things you whisper about me behind my back but, believe me, they reach my ears
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 147 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3/1/2008 - Complete
Butterfly reviews
almost like they've forgotten
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 33 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 2/29/2008 - Complete
Don't Sing reviews
overplayed
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 64 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2/28/2008 - Complete
Coward reviews
vulnerable
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2/28/2008 - Complete
Wish reviews
a flame holds nothing to the sparkle in your eyes
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 180 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/24/2008 - Complete
Lips Smile Teeth reviews
show the stars just how it's done
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2/23/2008 - Complete
Mirror reviews
lobotomy
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 54 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2/23/2008 - Complete
What Do You Do reviews
so many things hit at once
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 175 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 2/22/2008 - Complete
Mannequin reviews
so pretty it's ugly
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 62 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/22/2008 - Complete
Let You Go reviews
i miss the person i thought you were
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2/21/2008 - Complete
Drink
words onetwo&three but who's counting?
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Published: 2/21/2008 - Complete
Replaceable reviews
each day drags
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 62 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/19/2008 - Complete
You & Me reviews
everything looks perfect from far away
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2/13/2008 - Complete
ess aych ee reviews
she's me
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 51 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2/13/2008 - Complete
Smile reviews
a smile succeeds where a thousand words might fail
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 112 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 2/10/2008 - Complete
Canvas Me reviews
i gave you my heart
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2/9/2008 - Complete
Aspirin
exhausted from pain and frustration
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 31 - Published: 2/9/2008 - Complete
Laugh reviews
you know you want to
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: T - English - Humor/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 22 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2/2/2008 - Complete
Ladybug
flying away
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 32 - Published: 2/2/2008 - Complete
Alone reviews
And this is how I feel.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 51 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/26/2008 - Complete
Her Addiction reviews
I am not disappointed in you but in myself.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 182 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/23/2007 - Complete
Betrayed reviews
I just figured it out...
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 125 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 7/23/2007 - Complete
Dance reviews
I wish it would last forever.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 145 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/20/2007 - Complete
Missing reviews
But I can't forget you and your GerardWaylookalike face.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/20/2007 - Complete
Smiley Face reviews
That's where it all started.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 76 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/20/2007 - Complete
Goodbye, McKenzie reviews
There's no doubt that your death has affected us all.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 61 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/15/2007 - Complete
When The Stars Fall reviews
What would you be doing in the time that the world ended?
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Tragedy/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 304 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7/13/2007 - Complete
What You Didn't Know reviews
You wanted me to hurt, but you have no idea...
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/12/2007 - Complete
This Is The Last Time reviews
You ruined me.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 198 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 2 - Published: 7/11/2007 - Complete
Keeley Marie reviews
She's the one and only.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/11/2007 - Complete
Too Much For A Town This Small
This is a true story.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Drama - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,185 - Published: 6/25/2007
Death Is Here reviews
Death sucks.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 46 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/23/2007 - Complete
Pyro Technicality
They'd never catch you, no....
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 81 - Published: 6/20/2007 - Complete
Hey, You Guys reviews
it's just not fun to be here like this & be remembering these things, wondering if you think of them too
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 636 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/18/2007 - Complete
Untitled reviews
...and I hope that it will get better...
Poetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 162 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/18/2007 - Complete
Crawling reviews
The constant nagging in my bloodstream tells me I have to move.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 166 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5/9/2007 - Complete
For Those Who Care reviews
...this is for those who don't.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 139 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/9/2007 - Complete
You Are My Sunshine reviews
You are the greeting of my day, the warmth on my face.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 125 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/29/2007 - Complete
Sleep reviews
I just want to close my eyes and drift off to where I can dream of a better place.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 33 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/26/2007 - Complete
Government
Forget about your worries, forget about your fears. As long as they control us, the end of life comes near.
Poetry: Politics - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 73 - Published: 4/18/2007 - Complete
Mommy Dearest reviews
Isn't it funny how you see them in the way that I wish you would see me? Isn't it funny how I would kill to have to say those things about me, even if it was just once? Even if you didn't mean it...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 218 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/7/2007 - Complete
Modern reviews
Even when it seems ridiculous to you, you find yourself doing what everyone else is…Nonconformist or not.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 49 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7/28/2006
Hiding
Not real sure what I was thinking...but it's all true.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Published: 7/28/2006
Rage reviews
When alcohol destroys everything a man used to love, where does he go? This is a poem I am rather attached to so please read it.
Poetry: Family - Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 515 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 2 - Published: 7/6/2006 - Complete
No More reviews
How far is someone willing to go?
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 7/6/2006
Sleep Tight
The creak you hear while you lay awake in your bed at night...the soft laughter...the movements in the shadows... It's just your imagination.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Drama/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 68 - Published: 7/6/2006 - Complete
Heard reviews
It's come to play...but just don't make it mad.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Horror/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 33 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/6/2006
Sweet Children
So many children around the world suffer...This is for everyone.
Poetry: Song - Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 207 - Published: 7/1/2006 - Complete
Deadly Escape
I locked myself in here and lost the key. Now I want out.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 37 - Published: 3/20/2006 - Complete
A Poem reviews
I really didn't know what to call this one. I wrote it maybe in fourth grade. I'm not entirely sure what I was thinking at the time I wrote it.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 33 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/20/2006 - Complete
Cirque Du Freaks reviews
Come watch the show. We're here all year round.
Poetry: Humor - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 126 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/20/2006 - Complete
Fall Again to Darkness reviews
If I die before I wake, I don't want anyone my soul to take.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 36 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/20/2006 - Complete
Time reviews
It's...time.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 45 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/20/2006 - Complete
Men In White Coats reviews
Short..It's also one of my favorites.
Poetry: Humor - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 40 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3/19/2006 - Complete
Gone Forever reviews
I don't want to be hurt any longer. But we can't always get what we want, can we?
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/19/2006
I Didn't Do It reviews
Through the eyes of someone who has seen the unthinkable happen... only to be met with a nasty surprise.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/19/2006
A Careless Whisper reviews
I remember writing this when I was in like third grade.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 125 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/19/2006 - Complete
Disappear reviews
Why isn't someone always there?
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1/29/2006 - Complete
Keep Walking reviews
Represents life.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 79 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/17/2006 - Complete
This Is Life reviews
The coming and passing of humans through a short poem.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 73 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 10/30/2005 - Complete
Take Me As I Am reviews
How I think dying might be. Description through nature.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 69 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 10/30/2005 - Complete
Inspiration reviews
This is a poem I wrote a while back. R&R please!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 130 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 2 - Published: 10/21/2005 - Complete