Maria222985
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Joined 10-19-05, id: 498457
Author has written 16 stories for Life, General, Action, General, Sci-Fi, and Essay.

I'm a harsh critic. I won't lie and tell you that something is good if it's not, but I will tell you how to improve it. If you get a harsh review from me, don't be offended. I'm not attacking anyone or anything, I'm pointing out, however bluntly, what can be done to improve it. I try to be mature and honest in my criticisms, and I hope that anyone critiquing my work will provide the same courtesy.

Everything else you could want to know about me can be figured out by a discerning mind set to my writing.

Puppy Love by Lin Tan reviews
A dog owner knows
Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 118 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 3 - Published: 7/5/2006
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The Witches of West Neptune
Neptune is the final stronghold of humanity on a ruined planet, a safe haven where society continues to function. Two teenagers caught between civilization and freedom will bring about a final war. Complete Summary inside. Reviews welcome.
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: M - English - Sci-Fi/Adventure - Chapters: 7 - Words: 20,847 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 1/21/2009 - Published: 8/23/2007
We the People reviews
The simple truth is that we the people have failed to maintain democracy."
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K+ - English - Crime/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 434 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2/25/2008 - Complete
Warren Number Eight reviews
What if the world became such a terrible place that 20 million people migrated to live underground? An exploration of love across the bounds of culture, society, and spirituality, as it occurs between two people from utterly different worlds.
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Romance - Chapters: 4 - Words: 14,404 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 5/12/2007 - Published: 5/9/2007
The Shelter reviews
Things were kind of like a movie, really. That’s what I thought. Watching the cities blow up, all red puff of flame and curling plumes of smoke, was like watching the White House blow up in Independence Day. Not real. Rated for sex, drugs, & violence.
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: M - English - Sci-Fi/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 9,751 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 2 - Published: 4/7/2007 - Complete
40 reviews
Open fire on a warehouse full of hitmen. And follow the next 40 hours, running through a dark city, of the survivors. Warning for extreme violence, drug use, profanity, and sexual references. Ch 1 edited, Ch 2 added.
Fiction: Action - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Suspense - Chapters: 2 - Words: 5,725 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 2/12/2007 - Published: 1/22/2007
The butterfly jar reviews
Preservation instincts.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 88 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/24/2007 - Complete
Comedy of Errors
A simplified recollection of vivid details. Be warned for drug use and some language.
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,144 - Published: 7/19/2006
Ritualistic Scarring
The deepest cuts don't come from a razorblade.
Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 342 - Published: 7/6/2006
Ben and Cassidy reviews
The story of two kids growing up during World War III.
Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Sci-Fi - Chapters: 2 - Words: 8,438 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 7/6/2006 - Published: 7/5/2006
Night Shift reviews
Working food service. And ranting about it.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 138 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 7/5/2006
Prattie reviews
When you have to say everything all at once.
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,108 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/5/2006
Tin Soldier
These things happen. Warning for nonspecific drug reference.
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 258 - Published: 2/6/2006
She Was reviews
Sitting against a wall and staring.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 81 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/24/2006
Habitual reviews
This is real love.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 317 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/23/2006
Rattle reviews
Prozac, Lithium, Seroquel, Geodon, Depakote, Celexa...
Poetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 100 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/23/2006
The Peacock reviews
Exposure of vanity.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1/23/2006