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Joined 10-22-05, id: 498862, Profile Updated: 04-26-09
Author has written 5 stories for Life, Family, and Song.

Hello, everyone. I'm here, hopefully different. In the past, I used Fiction Press as something to pass the time. Now, I am taking it very seriously. I am hoping that by my using this website, and by others' comments, I might become better as a writer. Also, I used to just go through the motions of saying that I wanted constructional criticism. Now, I will practically beg you to give it to me. If you find something wrong with my writing, please tell me. Grammar, wording, Mary-Jane plots, or if you're just absolutely disgusted. Tell me why, don't just say it, though. Praise is also welcome, but I'm hoping I will stick to the stories I have by my own will and satisfaction.

NOTE- YES, A Wildfire Tamed has gone off of Fiction Press. But save your sighs of thankfulness, those who still take their time to put themselves through reading my past terrible chapters, for it will be coming back. As you all know, the beginning was terrible, but I am working on it, and so far I have one really good page of the revised version. It will have the same title, same plot, all that will be done to it is some little, and a few big, realistic, needed changes. I did update, but something happened to the chapter. I took it as a sign, and started afresh. At some point, I will print all that was previously written and burn it... just kidding.

I do practice the Golden Rule: You review me, I review you. Never have I read something that I have not reviewed.

For now, I have four poems posted, a very confusing story to revise, and one idea that is still blooming. Enjoy!

Thank you for reading.

- Rachel

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The Art of Impression by Brooke Michelle Desjarlais reviews
The Sienna Bistro's private lounge has two reservations, which happen to be held by ex-lovers and their guests. This chance encounter causes the words: "Art," "Love," and "Life" to be used interchangeably, as well as a dinner no one will soon forget.
Fiction: Play - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Drama - Chapters: 3 - Words: 14,744 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 2 - Published: 7/29/2010 - Complete
Morning Realisations by Squidge VR6 reviews
Oneshots. Mornings... Rated for swearing
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,062 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 3 - Updated: 10/31/2008 - Published: 11/24/2007
Living In A Messed Up World by Shadow of the Black Wolf reviews
Nick hates the world she lives in. After losing her parents, she closed down and just stopped caring. She lives with her brother and contantly gets into trouble at school. Surprising secrets are revealed about her parents death. It wasn't an accient...
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 14 - Words: 19,525 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 10/30/2007 - Published: 5/19/2006
Lily Payne by Kristina Suko reviews
I have never understood Lily Payne. My first memory of her senseless and horrific nursery rhymes and maniacal laughter began the moment she learned to talk.
Fiction: Horror - Rated: T - English - Drama/Suspense - Chapters: 2 - Words: 4,269 - Reviews: 44 - Favs: 47 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 3/7/2007 - Published: 1/1/2007 - Complete
Am I All Alone in the World? by the Stranger in the moonlight reviews
Stand on a street and stare through it all.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 266 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/8/2007 - Complete
Endless by the Stranger in the moonlight reviews
"Deep and endless Encourage fantastical dreams"
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/4/2006
The Wind by Sweet Lunacy reviews
School on an island, last year of school, graduation, every teens dream, right? That's what you thought. For Alison and Tanya, this is not going to be the senior year that they have always dreamed of, unless that dream consisted of death...
Fiction: Horror - Rated: T - English - Horror/Romance - Chapters: 9 - Words: 6,320 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 9/18/2006 - Published: 5/1/2005 - Complete
In Loving Memory by Sweet Lunacy reviews
In Loving Memory of Ashley Rose Wykoff and Tiffany Michelle Cheek (5/30/01-8/27/06)
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/3/2006
Letters from a toothpick fiend by Plinky reviews
Sophia, 17, mad as a demented bucket, writes a bunch of thoughts and sends them to a random address, because ... well, just because. What happens, though, when someone writes back? And who's the hot new guy at school?
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 36 - Words: 86,688 - Reviews: 1531 - Favs: 458 - Follows: 163 - Updated: 8/25/2006 - Published: 11/7/2005
Pauper by boys kiss girls reviews
I'm particularly proud of this one. I've had the idea in my head since spring.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Parody/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 264 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 3 - Published: 7/9/2006
Quelin's Tale by Plinky reviews
A journey set in a world of mistrust and darkness, a tale of love, of trust and of discovery. Freya and Jake follow the not-quite-human Quelin on his journey to find his past and future and find out more about themselves on the way.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Romance - Chapters: 72 - Words: 109,108 - Reviews: 824 - Favs: 35 - Follows: 6 - Updated: 7/7/2006 - Published: 8/30/2005
Struggling to Matter by the Stranger in the moonlight reviews
About a girl who is really confused by life. Rated for language. Please read and review.
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,061 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 6/6/2006 - Published: 3/9/2006
Locked Doors by Shadow of the Black Wolf reviews
My parents got into a fight a while back and it was really really bad. I wrote this because I was behind my door the whole time listening to it.
Poetry: Family - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 128 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 2 - Published: 5/26/2006
Fears by the Stranger in the moonlight reviews
About the fears of two people.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 115 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/12/2006
Oedipus Baby by Plinky reviews
The ancient Greek tale of Oedipus, retold [CC needed - this is the first draft and it's completely different to my usual style] [COMPLETE]
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 7 - Words: 1,984 - Reviews: 36 - Favs: 6 - Published: 3/10/2006
I'm Gonna Be Free by the Stranger in the moonlight reviews
Inspired as I was enjoying the beautiful weather today.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 138 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/7/2006
Raindrop Wings by Plinky reviews
And she dances through the rain and smiles with eyes that shine with clover-kissed wishes...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 153 - Reviews: 21 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/1/2006
and it's gone by Plinky reviews
A series of moment, thoughts, ideas, call them what you will. Expect whimsicality and things that may make no sense.
Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 15 - Words: 192 - Reviews: 114 - Favs: 5 - Updated: 2/26/2006 - Published: 11/27/2005
Torn Apart by S0ulSearching reviews
Wrote this about a girl who commits suicide thinking everyone will feel sorry and miss her and such. But things don't always go as planned. R&R me, I'll R&R you.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 372 - Reviews: 21 - Favs: 3 - Published: 2/22/2006
Writings Of A Broken Pen by Squidge VR6 reviews
Let me die peacefully...
Fiction: General - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 357 - Reviews: 15 - Favs: 3 - Published: 2/17/2006 - Complete
Wings by Brir R0se reviews
Celia always wore wings. . .
Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,183 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 6 - Published: 10/1/2005
Light In The Shadows by BWeep reviews
Hope, hope, happy, happy...yea...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 128 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 2 - Published: 5/15/2005 - Complete
A Simple Wish by tuxedotservo reviews
Jacob Scott doesn't get any (positive) attention from girls, until he meets Aku and she promises to change everything with two wishes - if he signs the contract...
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 9,391 - Reviews: 32 - Favs: 16 - Follows: 1 - Published: 12/6/2002
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The Black and the Yellow
Sometimes love makes you stop and think how what is done is truly done.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Published: 7/29/2010 - Complete
Keep Going reviews
Well, why don't you look if you're interested?
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 2 - Published: 5/12/2007 - Complete
One Raindrop reviews
One changes it all. Just felt like it.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 223 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/6/2007 - Complete
You Love Me reviews
Dedicated to my brother... an okay poem... in the cheesy sense.
Poetry: Family - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 193 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/1/2006
Tossing and Turning reviews
Dedicated to Plinky. Poem I wrote a while ago. Rated for maturity level.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 267 - Reviews: 15 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/2/2006