Alazar-Ramir
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Joined 10-30-05, id: 499743, Profile Updated: 08-13-11
Author has written 9 stories for Essay, Song, Life, Play, Supernatural, Action, Fantasy, and Thriller.

Though it has been a while, I have still been writing, focusing on refining my ability to one day push myself towards publishing something.

I have focused more on writing Novels and even Screenplays. Once upon a time I used to write poetry but it seems like a lifetime ago, though according to my wife I seem to have a flair for the melodramatic so I doubt it would be hard to pick up again if I put my mind to it. :P

I recently removed a lot of submissions, mainly because I want to start a fresh and either keep the things that I have some sentimental pride still attached to them or those that I hope to finish off. Some even are finished. I just haven't uploaded the final draft. (Note to self: Do that.)

My main handicap, which I am hoping to work on the most, is character description and at times dialogue. I always seem to have the "perfect" character in mind, but getting him or her down on paper is a tough job. Also, the missus often chastises me for using words that are no longer in circulation (probably will tell me off for using 'chastises' - :P Got to love her, she's my harshest critic)

Any feedback is greatly appreciated, and I will return the favor.


Currently working on INSERTION. I've decided to put a lot of effort into it.

UPDATES:

1st June: Insertion - Chapters 8 & 9 uploaded; Amendment to Chapter 5

19th July: Insertion - Chapters 10 - 13 uploaded; Amendments in previous Chapters

13th August: Insertion - Chapters 14 & 15 uploaded.

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Cure to Your Heart by Clover-tan reviews
Short story. Ren is a delinquent in high school who has no hopes or ambitions in life and spends his days skipping class and going to the medical room to sleep. It's until he meets a girl classmate in the medical room, who changes his whole life.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,278 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 19 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 4/28/2011 - Published: 4/27/2011 - Complete
Electromagnetic by Sakina the Fallen Angel reviews
There are some things they don't tell you about Tunnel City. Things that you only discover when you try to escape. I guess you could say that if we were still on our mother planet, then I’d describe this prison as hell on earth.
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 19 - Words: 50,323 - Reviews: 288 - Favs: 35 - Follows: 34 - Updated: 4/6/2011 - Published: 8/24/2010
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Insertion reviews
SBS operative Samson "Bishop" Matthews has been recruited, with 29 others from various British regiments, for a secret tournament against 7 other nations. But Bishop is not just facing a relentless enemy. He's facing an enemy intent on winning at any cost
Fiction: Action - Rated: M - English - Adventure - Chapters: 18 - Words: 86,512 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 10/23/2011 - Published: 4/27/2011
Checking Out reviews
Working as a night receptionist can be a strange experience - quiet nights, ominous sounds and strange people... SHORT STORY
Fiction: Thriller - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,000 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/28/2011 - Complete
Legionnaire
A Ranoran soldier wakes on a battlefield, with no recollection who he is. The only persons that can help him is a wounded Imperial soldier and a Tugev native. An unlikely team - but one that may be the only thing that can weather the coming storm.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 19 - Words: 46,935 - Published: 4/27/2011
Graveyard Shift Script
CSI meets Angel/Buffy. Bizarre and gruesome cases have perplexed the local authorities, grinding the investigations to a halt. But where they fail, a secret organization persists in uncovering the truth while keeping out of the public eye.
Fiction: Supernatural - Rated: M - English - Supernatural/Crime - Chapters: 3 - Words: 10,546 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 9/14/2008 - Published: 9/12/2008
Diary Of A WouldBe Girlfriend E2 reviews
This is a comedy outtake on teenage life but more specifically when a guy finds himself in the world of women. This is the follow up how they accept one another.
Fiction: Play - Rated: T - English - Humor/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 8,798 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5/3/2006 - Complete
Diary Of A WouldBe Girlfriend E1 reviews
This is a comedy outtake on teenage life but more specifically when a guy finds himself in the world of women. This is the opening episode how they first meet.
Fiction: Play - Rated: T - English - Humor/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 8,595 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/25/2006 - Complete
Living Alone reviews
This is a song that I rewrote for the purpose of featuring in a comedy series I am developing. It's about living alone. The original song was Staying Alive by the Bee Gees
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 392 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/14/2006 - Complete
Sad World reviews
Based on Gary Jules Mad World. Has the same structure and flow. However this portrays a personal situation.
Poetry: Song - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 210 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/15/2005 - Complete
Who Is Fate? reviews
My English Sir and I have a bit of a good relationship. He often challenges me with pop essays because he knows I like to write, as long as I pick the title. This was one of them. I tire of asking WHAT is fate, so therefore I decided to personify him.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 486 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 11/24/2005 - Complete