Scarlet Manitouhide bio
Author has written 8 stories for Friendship, General, Life, Nature, and Love. Hi. I'm a 19 year old college student. I'm also a poet. My poems are starting to get quite numerous, and some of them seem kind of good, so I thought I'd find a place to get some of them critiqued. I would really like to get some serious critiques either to humble me or uplift me... As for my major in college, I haven't decided yet, but it's always been between History and English/Literature, except for a short stint in Anthropology I had. I'm not sure what else needs to be said here... so just let me know if you have any suggestions. Thanks. |
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And the Blackbird in Between by 2ndhandguitar
Sits the blackbird all alone, willed and brave in every stride...
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 139 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/23/2005 - Complete
deep beneath the rolling waves by mulletpoculypse reviews
not sure how to explain this one, ...very spiritual
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 177 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/23/2005
Broken Forever by ReclusiveLoner reviews
What it feels like to lose your best friend
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 702 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 2 - Published: 11/18/2005
The Ruins of an Empire by 2ndhandguitar reviews
They hear no value, see no reality, feel no fright in painful eyes...
Poetry: Politics - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 1 - Words: 136 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/14/2005 - Complete
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When I Am God reviews
Very hard to explain this, but I promise it makes sense. In my opinion my best work to date.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 168 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/28/2005
Do Not Mourn My Death reviews
Simple little poem that reflects my view of death written to anyone it may help to give them hope when they have none left.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 56 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11/23/2005
Emptiness reviews
Short little poem written awhile after breaking up with my first love (who cheated and lied and hurt and destroyed me). I'll never understand so this is all I'm left with.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 69 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 11/23/2005
Orion Told Me She's The One reviews
God actually responded to me through Orion when I asked him: Is she the one?
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 140 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/23/2005
A Storm reviews
Short and simple proclamation of human's place in the world when a storm comes.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 19 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/23/2005
Here Comes The Dragon reviews
This poem is meant to use the image of the mythological dragon to represent hard times in life and how to overcome them.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 402 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/23/2005
Today Is Not So Great A Day
This is a rather weird poem that I kind of enjoy. I wrote it quickly and haven't edited it very heavily.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 233 - Published: 11/23/2005
Today We Won't Feel Blue reviews
A poem written to a friend in my style.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 481 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/23/2005