Lurid Black
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Joined 11-29-05, id: 503492, Profile Updated: 08-08-08
Author has written 31 stories for General, Haiku, Love, Life, and Friendship.

Name: Dion
Gender: Male
Age: 15
Birthday: July 18th
Hometown: Melbourne, Australia.

There’s no such thing as too many reviews...

Criticism, improvements, punctuation etc etc. A review is a review.

I've been using Fictionpress since December the 16th, and I wouldn't have started it without my awesome inspiration Laura, of course... without you, I can't write.

If you could review some that would be great, and I hope your life is as far of from them as possible.

So, as they get higher, they get better than the last, so... avoid the ones to start with.

I could take requests, as some of them were already based off words.

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Taken What Was Never Mine reviews
Based off a one word request Taken I was meant to start months ago. I've finally finished as of now.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 259 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 5 - Published: 7/29/2008 - Complete
Lost Paradise reviews
A poem I started not long ago, which I decided to finish today. She was my paradise.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 195 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 4/28/2008 - Complete
Beneath The Skin reviews
3 words that sounded like they deserved a poem. R&R For me!
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 3/24/2008 - Complete
Ludicrous reviews
Ludicrous to dream for so much.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 86 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 3/21/2008 - Complete
Demented Jigsaw reviews
She was puzzled… and I had lost the pieces...
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 131 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/22/2008 - Complete
Trapped In My Dreams reviews
Disturbed to passive, a look into thrall and giving up.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 144 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/15/2008 - Complete
Laura reviews
To my sweet friend Laura
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 294 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 2/15/2008 - Complete
Obsession reviews
A sad poem written with my friend Chris, about an obsession beyond comprehension.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 72 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 1/27/2008 - Complete
Angel reviews
A poem written for my friend Angel, I didn’t know I could write like this either. I say this a lot, but its my new favourite, ‘cause I improve after every poem.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 141 - Reviews: 13 - Favs: 3 - Published: 1/19/2008 - Complete
CursePlagued reviews
A string of haiku, all about the title. People seemed to like my last haiku so I thought I might give it another try. R&R my new favourite haiku.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Reviews: 18 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/10/2008 - Complete
Her Silence reviews
My first Haiku... best haiku i've written so far, R&R, Thanks!
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 18 - Reviews: 14 - Published: 1/10/2008 - Complete
If I Would Die Tomorrow reviews
What would you think...? R&R Please... one of the best I've written
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 143 - Reviews: 31 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 1 - Published: 1/6/2008 - Complete
My Message To You reviews
A clear message I want you to know... R&R Please!
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 160 - Reviews: 18 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/5/2008 - Complete
Traitor reviews
A darker side to the lurid... R&R Please.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 121 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/4/2008 - Complete
Grey reviews
Yes, Laura tells me 'Grey', I write a story about 'Grey'... R&R Please
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 136 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 1 - Published: 1/4/2008 - Complete
Marionette reviews
I'm just a puppet... what more can I say? R&R Thanks.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/3/2008 - Complete
Worthless reviews
This is one of the best I've written... Yes, yet again, quite sad...
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 156 - Reviews: 22 - Favs: 2 - Published: 1/3/2008 - Complete
When You Left reviews
Yes, another tragic poem. One of the best one I’ve ever written. R&R please.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 139 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/2/2008 - Complete
Restricted Desire reviews
Yes... my first rhyming poem, name says it all, like 'Out of Reach' but with a stronger, more tense meaning.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 2 - Published: 12/27/2007 - Complete
Out of Reach reviews
Tragic that most of our wants end up like this... I can relate, tell me if you can as well.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 44 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/22/2007 - Complete
Death's Abyss reviews
Worst place in Earth... a fissure with vindictive intent.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 103 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/21/2007 - Complete
Hollow reviews
I asked Laura what to give me a word, she said hollow, and so I wrote a meaningful poem about it. Review, thanks.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 12/18/2007 - Complete
Nerve Dead reviews
Nerve dead... effortless... given up...
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 56 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 12/17/2007 - Complete
Caught in Suspension reviews
Ever had this feeling? I should hope not... please review, thanks.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 55 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/17/2007 - Complete
Twisted Nightmare reviews
A later developed poem, evolved from earlier work Fear. The pulse of a Twisted Nightmare
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 99 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 12/17/2007 - Complete
Unheard Echoes reviews
The demented melody... of unheard echoes
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 49 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 12/17/2007 - Complete
Blind reviews
Blinded by the luminous hate
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 42 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/17/2007 - Complete
Arid reviews
Corruption of her mind
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 29 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/17/2007 - Complete
The Exiled reviews
Banished from life...
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 25 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/17/2007 - Complete
Cold Sweat reviews
A quick read. 50 words and less. Selfexplanatory title.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 48 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 12/17/2007 - Complete
Sensation reviews
For those who are willing to guess what this particular poem is about.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Horror/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 69 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 2 - Published: 12/13/2007 - Complete