12/16/11- Greetings to everyone out there! It's been a long, long time since I updated my FictionPress account. I've still been writing, but it's mostly been for myself and I haven't been sharing a lot of it. I've done National Novel Writing Month (NaNoWriMo) for the past three years, which has been a lot of fun, but with school and work thrown into the picture, my stories never really come out well enough to do anything with. However, I'm finally getting around to editing my 2009 NaNo, which even now is my favorite out of the three I've written. I'm hoping to post at least a little bit of the edited version here to get some feedback on the story as a whole along with any general grammar/editing suggestions that people choose the share with me. Enjoy!