Mireille Caelarily
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Joined 02-25-06, id: 514799, Profile Updated: 03-12-10
Author has written 151 stories for Life, General, Family, Work, Religion, War, Love, Fantasy, Horror, Nature, Politics, Young Adult, Sci-Fi, Song, School, and Friendship.

To Whoever may Stumble By...

I ask your help. I am thinking of publishing my work, and need objective opinions on whether it's good enough.

I request that you read a few of my better - "Bubble Man," "Afghan Scarf," "Once," "Seattle," "Crying Sky" - and then a few random others, and either post a review or send me a PM with your honest opinion. Should I publish my work? Is it worth it? Will it matter to anybody?

Thank you for your help. I appreciate your time.

And more - if you give me your opinion, and I end up publishing my work, I'll get you a copy for 2/3 price.

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Aphrodisiarchy by Asagao reviews
The morning after, I awoke to tea and anarchy.
Poetry: Politics - Rated: T - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 151 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/28/2007
The Casket Raped The Rosary by TheBlackParade reviews
She was another teenage victim of expections.
Poetry: Religion - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 305 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 2 - Published: 2/8/2007 - Complete
Mortality by TheBlackParade reviews
A harsh struggle of a small circle of teenage friends with drugs, sexuality, and the consequences of poor behavior.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,855 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/18/2006
Goldfish Fireworks by sparkle and shine reviews
What happens when a boy comes into your life? The goldfish came that day. Swimming from my fingers to my throat to my heart, the goldfish swam, unconcerned. It kept on swimming, round and round in circles.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,960 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/16/2006 - Complete
The Worship of Ignorance by Asagao reviews
One is not truly religious until they think for themselves. Please R&R. All flames will be deleted.
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 100 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/6/2006 - Complete
Teenage Angst by Vevina Lachlan reviews
I've reached my limit of angsty suburban kids. Meant to be a voice poem for Poetry Slams.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 181 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 11/17/2006 - Complete
Vociferation of a Thriving Organ by Dark-Void reviews
An in depth description of internal feelings. Vociferation means outcry, thriving...you should know, and organ refers to the heart. It's always up for interpretation...
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Romance/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 471 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/11/2006 - Complete
The Alright Scene by TheBlackParade reviews
It's those little moments in childhood that are most precious. And most prophetic.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Drama/Humor - Chapters: 2 - Words: 7,614 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 11/1/2006 - Published: 10/25/2006
Opaque Glass by singingeachtoeach reviews
an epiphany whilst in the shower! "the pain has gone, or so you think / your legs are smooth at last / so you go on to live another day/ through fragile but opaque glass"
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 216 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 3 - Published: 5/25/2006
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Confessional reviews
bless me, father, for I have sinned - or Have I? A conflicted blow for liberty.
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 4/14/2009 - Complete
Luka reviews
To all you Suzanne Vega fans out there - a poem for my Luka.
Poetry: Family - Rated: M - English - Horror/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 225 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/14/2009 - Complete
To A Teacher
When I couldn't stand the slideshows any longer.
Poetry: School - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 143 - Published: 4/14/2009 - Complete
Battlefield Compact reviews
In Band of Brothers, episode 5 "Crossroads" , Winters exchanges a gaze with a German youth, then kills him. This poem is about that look.
Poetry: War - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 2 - Published: 6/11/2008 - Complete
Ma Tete Coule
Un petit poeme que j'ai ecrit en classe hier. Des fois je deviens silencieuse et ne bouges pas, sans raison...voici un description de cette experience.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - French - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 72 - Published: 6/11/2008 - Complete
Seattle copychange
La Jolla is a rotten candy bar. Seattle is a geode.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 56 - Published: 6/10/2008 - Complete
Sonnet Moon
-nosummary-
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 121 - Published: 4/25/2008 - Complete
Order reviews
Stream-of-consciousness expounding upon the word "order." "Ten little dominoes, standing in a line, someone taps the trigger and the world goes MAD"
Poetry: Politics - Rated: T - English - Crime/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 306 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/25/2008 - Complete
Seattle with brevity
You'd never think, to look at the surface...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 56 - Published: 4/25/2008 - Complete
Cafe Grande
A story about a coffee shop, innocent young faces, and linguistic musings add up to a memory differently recounted than remembered.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 128 - Published: 2/9/2008 - Complete
In The Absence reviews
His precious wild scent etches my hands with memories, devoured here by greedy nostrils in the absence of its source.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 145 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/9/2008 - Complete
Glass, Soul, Fire reviews
I watch the sun, of life and dreams, set from behind glass, of insulated separation, and cry at its passing. ..This one is not conducive to synopses. Many lonely tears went into it it's worth a minute of your time..
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 586 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1/2/2008 - Complete
Bloodink, Soulwords reviews
I am the tempestuous stallion, flayed out by a hundred different ropes. My only link to sanity is the blood that spills from my pen.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 121 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1/2/2008 - Complete
Wildfire reviews
California burns. Sage smoke drifts from my canyons, demons taunt the defenders, and it is hell.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 197 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/2/2008 - Complete
Concrete Steps and a Sunset
Ghosts of global catastrophes cling to my shadow, daring me to enjoy myself. The only thing that drives them off is the embrace of one besieged by the same.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 122 - Published: 11/17/2007 - Complete
Longing
Inadequacy, independence, chains of the past, humanity, and stars.
Poetry: Politics - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Published: 11/17/2007 - Complete
Slave
There's a picture in my textbook of a slave in a loincloth, sitting on a rough pier, wrists and neck chained, enclosed in a net. He's staring straight at the camera. And his eyes...his eyes are not those of chattel.
Poetry: War - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 98 - Published: 11/17/2007 - Complete
7:32 am reviews
On the concrete steps I pause, savoring the goosebumps on my arms and the autumn crisp in my nostrils.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 249 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/21/2007 - Complete
Dormant
Sweet incarnation of dormant desires, I'd almost rather have not reawakened my ache for the dreams I'm denied.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 153 - Published: 10/5/2007 - Complete
Sip reviews
My first taste of anarchy.
Poetry: Politics - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 54 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10/5/2007 - Complete
Mistake reviews
The circumstances under which I blew the best opportunity of my life. I know not why I did it to this day: I looked him in the eye and turned away.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9/23/2007 - Complete
Rosebush reviews
This tangled intractable mess really has no right to reside in my heart but for the roses.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 51 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/22/2007 - Complete
Nice Shot reviews
I waited ages for this moment, this impossible instant where, against all hope, he pulled me to him.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 52 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9/22/2007 - Complete
Humanity
A streamofconsciousness poem: words, ashes, symphonies, and humanity.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 193 - Published: 9/22/2007 - Complete
Revolt
Do not go gently into that waiting box, for that will be your life a treadmill and a dangling carrot.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 103 - Published: 9/22/2007 - Complete
Wonder
I do not know from whence come my words. I do not know why, when I touch ink to paper, letters flow that rend hearts. The poems were here long before I was. All I provide is the pen.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Published: 8/20/2007 - Complete
We Slip Together reviews
We slip together, . sliding easily into glass . and softness . and no one knows we're here.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/20/2007 - Complete
Anatomy of a Fiasco
Shackle devolving, explosive chaos. . Drag it, writhing and collapsing, . into the steely exam room. . Slice with nerveless fingers through . the outer skin of calamity . and begin.
Poetry: Politics - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 149 - Published: 8/5/2007 - Complete
I Have a Secret reviews
One day the war will be over. And we will be left to rebuild.
Poetry: Politics - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 196 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/29/2007
Dyes Inlet on a Grey Day reviews
The water out my classroom window is a color I've not seen before, speaking of oceans and storms and helplessness, though it's only a calm, green, tidebound inlet.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/16/2007
A Dry, Warm, Breeze
Take me back to the place of my memories...and watch my cultivated smile shatter in the torrent of history.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 126 - Published: 6/16/2007
Today I Want reviews
Is a little distance, a little sanity, a little peace, too much to ask in this world?
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 76 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/16/2007 - Complete
Chime reviews
5minute poem, inspired by the word chime. No editing. About a plangent windchime that has followed my family all over the country, accumulating our memories.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 55 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/16/2007 - Complete
Humanize, Don't Ostracize reviews
Rhyme, rhyme, rhythm, and more rhyme. But at least it's rhyme with a message.
Poetry: Politics - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 112 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6/16/2007 - Complete
Stardust reviews
From dust to dust we fall, thriving only in the moment of ancient reflection and newborn thoughts, spilling ourselves through stitched lips in patterns of eternal stardust.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 129 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/11/2007 - Complete
Brown Coat reviews
I don't know his name. I hardly saw his face. But for a second he was there, curled against the world's cruelties, and I wish him peace.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 66 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5/12/2007 - Complete
Night
Through all our banally human mess...starlight calls.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 10 - Published: 5/12/2007 - Complete
A Passing of Hours reviews
We fall and spin and supernova . the cosmos burns with us.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 72 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 5/12/2007 - Complete
Maasai
Cherished elders you came, you spoke, and you entranced me with a glance. Welcome, friends. Sit. Stay awhile. Tell me stories.
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 66 - Published: 5/12/2007 - Complete
Strange Thoughts Occur at Midnight
Surreality in dark places. Don't try to make much sense of it.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Published: 4/28/2007 - Complete
Solitude
Copychange of Ironbound by Suzanne Vega. Not the original plan I had for this one, but I like it. A poet doesn't want to return from the peacful green to face the masses.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 222 - Published: 4/28/2007
Spring Has Sprung
And what a glorious spring it is, too, chasing off the brooding blankets that have encased us for long, dreary months. Come celebrate!
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 161 - Published: 4/28/2007 - Complete
Don't Fault Me
Let me stay quiet in the chaos. Let me protect myself from the barrage of noise. Let me be insulated when exposure means death. Don't fault me for my silence.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 101 - Published: 4/28/2007 - Complete
Beauty
Short and simple. Why do arbitrary shapes of face dictate attention in our world?
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 31 - Published: 4/28/2007 - Complete
Strewnpaper Life
Different from my other stuff. It's spread scattered bare smeared all over my world like papers strewn on swiftly tilting tables...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 100 - Published: 4/28/2007 - Complete
Afghan Scarf reviews
One of my best, according to some readers. This is the story of a scarf told through the lives of its makers. This summary is crap, but I promise the poem isn't. I'd really appreciate reviews on this one. Or at least hits. Please.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 794 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/28/2007 - Complete
The Insurgent Daughter Speaks! reviews
For once in my short life, I stood up to my parents. I should be allowed to go to Prom with her. There are no two ways about it.
Poetry: Family - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 56 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3/20/2007 - Complete
The Sunset Rises reviews
Words of surreal color sweep through my ears, freeing my caged heart to their sunset song.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/20/2007 - Complete
My Song
What can I sing of, trapped in my vortex?
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 325 - Published: 3/20/2007 - Complete
Source reviews
When I reach down into myself, deep to the well my words spring from, what is it my parched pen finds?
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 3/20/2007 - Complete
Gone To a War Zone
I quake in my deepest hidden places . when he laces . combat boots around his calves . and tucks a pistol into his belt.
Poetry: War - Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Published: 3/20/2007 - Complete
Cliff's Edge
Here I cling, gasping, grasping, praying that the powers that be will leave you in peace to me.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Published: 3/5/2007
Ageless Heresy
One corpse cuts through the fog of war.
Poetry: War - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 125 - Published: 2/20/2007 - Complete
Ambient Seduction
Calls from the world of superficiality.
Poetry: School - Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 76 - Published: 2/16/2007 - Complete
Tentative Sometimes reviews
, this illusion of control.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2/16/2007 - Complete
soldier dreams reviews
sweating, shaking, body quaking, starting, waking, never free for my father.
Poetry: War - Rated: T - English - Horror/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2/5/2007 - Complete
Lament for a Mother reviews
What did she do to deserve this at our hands, those of her children this paving, this raping, this sealing of her coffin deep in almostlost, soonforgotten, neverrecovered?
Poetry: Nature - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 206 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1/31/2007 - Complete
SCA reviews
The Society for Creative Anachronism the people who organize renaissance fairs sounds like a lot of intelligent fun. But, no matter how tantalizing, I refuse to join. This is why, and it has to do with a certain him.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 196 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1/29/2007 - Complete
Worn Desk reviews
Nothing to make you consider the history of the world and your place in it like a beatup old wooden desk.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 73 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1/29/2007 - Complete
Beyond Your Keep reviews
Arms wide, reaching high . seeking frozen sky . he lies cold, asleep . gone beyond your keep. The tune is haunting and gorgeous, not of my composing, but unconveyable on a computer screen. Enjoy anyway. Please RR, as I don't usually write songs.
Poetry: Song - Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 89 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/29/2007 - Complete
Silent as Tendrils reviews
I'm here, watching. They'll never know, tumbling through a stationary boulder's world.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 105 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/16/2007 - Complete
Demise reviews
That of a climbing tree, and that of childish innocence.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1/16/2007 - Complete
Shattered reviews
A small poem about small pieces of a heart, and the small, loving wind that tries to heal them.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 40 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1/5/2007 - Complete
Smoke Rising, Snow Falling reviews
Reflections on winter from a tropicized window.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 44 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/26/2006 - Complete
Christmas Eve: Lessons of Love reviews
nosummary
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 473 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/26/2006 - Complete
Colors reviews
Such odd, myriad shades, painting and shadowing and tinting the blank page of our lives.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 57 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12/26/2006 - Complete
Chalice reviews
I'm sure I'm not to only UU to have posted my own chalicelighting words on this site, though it may be rare. If you know what I was referring to, or even if you don't, please read. Maybe it'll give you an idea.
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12/12/2006 - Complete
Dark's Embrace reviews
Along the lines of Invitation. The call of peace and release from burden is a powerful one, and beautiful, and quiet.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 162 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12/12/2006 - Complete
Collapse reviews
Pride and decadent glory goeth before a fall. Oh, and what a fall it is, and has always been, and, it seems, always will be. But don't worry too much, civilization always gets another chance.
Poetry: Politics - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 129 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12/12/2006 - Complete
The Watching Eyes of Heaven reviews
The lives, loves, fights, and deaths of two young revolutionaries in a world unforgiving of their rebellion. Inspired by a scene which persisted in my head for months of two young men, one dead, the other sobbing, in a forest surrounded by monstrous sold
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,193 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/29/2006 - Complete
Shh, shh reviews
I can't bring myself to tell anyone my problems, so I write poems to myself to comfort me.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 254 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11/17/2006 - Complete
Dream or Soulmates
Thank the PLAN test for giving me time to write this. How to summarize it...in an altered plain, beneath a single tree, a silent soul is waiting for me. Until we meet, neither of us can ever be complete.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 67 - Published: 11/15/2006 - Complete
Infant Promise reviews
Last weekend I babysat for a threemonthold for the first time in a very long time. It was...a bit of a moving experience. Such sweet, gentle baby eyes, little baby naps and snores and gurgles, another link in a chain of maternity stretching from one end
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 72 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/15/2006 - Complete
Pen reviews
A small ode to my companion in creativity.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 63 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/15/2006 - Complete
Summer Nights
There was a girl. A sweet, beautiful, caring, intelligent girl, who the world enjoyed figuratively ripping to shreds. She and I spent some time together this past summer. Written by me or no, this is hers.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Published: 11/15/2006 - Complete
Inequity reviews
Confusion, death, tears, blood, greed...there are no right answers anymore, and it's just another day.
Poetry: Politics - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 250 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/10/2006 - Complete
Memories and Math Tests reviews
Intoxicating memories of a lifechanging youth retreat tend to make it rather difficult to study for an FST test back in the real world...AN: No flames for the circumstances portrayed in this, please. The right or wrongness of my sexuality is not your co
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 292 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10/20/2006 - Complete
Silence reviews
Somewhat like Fog, small and simple. Please enjoy.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 33 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10/20/2006 - Complete
Death of a Dove reviews
Chains of lies and cruel deceptionStomp the burning, salted woundThe open people cry for quarterDesperate for a drink of water
Poetry: Politics - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 101 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/20/2006 - Complete
Alliterative Embrace
Written, not surprisingly, as we were doing alliteration in English. However, this was entirely meinspired. Short and surreal but sweet.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 19 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/20/2006 - Complete
Fear the Dark
Everyone called you a baby for doing so...but there are reasons...Let the cries betray the dark.Who yet will stand to answer?
Poetry: Politics - Rated: T - English - Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Published: 10/20/2006 - Complete
Mousling
Isn't that all we'll ever end up being? A small, fuzzy, curled little mouse corpse in a universe that couldn't care less?
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 65 - Published: 10/20/2006 - Complete
Pour La Première Fois
Un petit poem d'amour que j'ai écrit pour ma class de Français.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 66 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/4/2006
Degeneration
Alas, the fate preordained for all young, ambitious, upstart societies. (I think the US is between stage 3 and 4.) Unusual, I think, please r/r.
Poetry: Politics - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Published: 10/4/2006
Indian Summer reviews
It was a mythically beautiful day after a week of gloom and rain. So the day was spent in the best possible way for fall mornings to be spent: pressing fresh, sweet apple cider.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 191 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9/24/2006
Passion reviews
A description of how I'd imagine real passion to be. Perhaps unusual, maybe a bit surreal. I'd be interested in opinions.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 77 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/12/2006
Rob's Poem reviews
One of the few poems I couldn't choose a good title for. It's dedicated to my love Rob, and describes him perfectly. I can't ask for more than he is.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 129 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9/12/2006
Invitation reviews
A contemplative, peaceful-seeming poem that actually incorporates ideas about suicide, loss of individualism, death, children, apathism, and counterintuitive aspects thereof. Distantly based on a walk on the beach I took the other day. I'd be interested
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 338 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9/10/2006
See How I See reviews
Am I the only one who sees a desperate need for change in this world?
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/30/2006
Mob Mentality reviews
bob your head (because he bobs his head)/nod you head (to fit in with the crowd)/shake your head (you are here, so you follow)/break your head (you are one with the mob)
Poetry: War - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/30/2006
I Am Me reviews
Independence is a good thing. Think for yourself, no matter how much others work to engrave their beliefs in your brain. Be YOU. And I'll be me.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 101 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/30/2006
Selfish reviews
A contemplation on the etymological connotations of the word "selfish"
Poetry: Politics - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 83 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8/30/2006
Lost Innocence reviews
A highly personal poem. I did things I should not have done, and I knew it at the time. I do not want to be like this .
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 120 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8/7/2006
Puppy reviews
So there's this dog I know. Can't find the stupid stick to save his life, even when he actually trips over it... It's rather funny to watch, actually.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 31 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7/30/2006
Joy on a Driftwood Shore reviews
It is such fun to jump and clamber over acres of driftwood... :)
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/30/2006
The Glowspots, the Stars, and the Ocean, and Me
Off a small island in the Queen Charlottes, there is a very special type of algae that, when agitated, glows in a brilliant Indigloesque phosphorescence. Swimming in this under the clearest sky you'll ever see is, in a word, magical.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 47 - Published: 7/25/2006 - Complete
Blessing reviews
A dear friend of mine, a Suquamish girl, has a hard life and always has. But there is so much she can do that she doesn't realize yet. This is what I wish for her.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 144 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/25/2006
Once reviews
Once there was happiness, love, joy. Now only an echoing silence resounds through these halls.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 120 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/13/2006
First Think, Then Fight! reviews
Look around at the world we live in. Someone needs to stand up for what they believe in: Freedom. Justice. Equality. Truth. (R/R please, I return the favor.)
Poetry: Politics - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 105 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/13/2006
Crab Tank
Perhaps oversentimental and illogical, but what can I say, those little eyes got to me. Why should they be trapped for our whim?
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 91 - Published: 7/7/2006
Sweetheart reviews
So maybe it's corny and maybe you aren't supposed to publish poetry that's about the first time you spent alone with your new boyfriend, but it has an interesting rhyme scheme. :) please r/r
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/1/2006
Dear Sir reviews
My response to a particularly offensive forum poster. "T" for language quotes from him. I'd be interested to hear what anyone thinks...ah, the revenge of a poet is sweet.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 217 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 6/27/2006
Young Love
Ah, the fickleness of young love.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 115 - Published: 6/24/2006
Seattle reviews
A love poem to the people of Seattle, my favorite city in the world. Many experiences are encapsulated here. "Walk into my life and out/But leave me with your footprints/And a longing to know your story."
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 831 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/19/2006
Deeper reviews
So you see me. So what? I'm just another girl, right?
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 56 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6/13/2006
To Whom It May Concern reviews
I no longer say the Pledge of Allegiance at school, and this is why. Please feel free to contact me with questions, comments, hate mail, anything that means you are thinking. I'll try to answer anything and I'm happy to debate.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 319 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 6/9/2006
BubbleMan
Ask no questions, tell no lies./Never long to see the skies./Freedom is the price you pay/To live to see another day. Please read, and if you agree, review saying you do please.
Poetry: Politics - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 234 - Published: 6/9/2006
Winking Fractured CrystalStones
This is a little poem about some beads on a bracelet my boyfriend gave me. They look pretty, but unimpressive, until the light hits them at just the right angle, where they glint and flash like opals.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 45 - Published: 6/5/2006
Literary Awakening
Musings on the nature of real life vs. illusion.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Published: 6/1/2006
Fight reviews
I fight for what I believe in, and what I believe the earth must become for the young ones. We are on the wrong path. And our children will pay.
Poetry: Politics - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 88 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5/26/2006
the angel in black vs the shadowy world
I have no shoulder deities./I am too many shades of grey for that./I do have an internal war,/Different from the external one/Where I know what side I'm on.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 292 - Published: 5/25/2006
Unite
It's really much easier not to artificially divide ourselves. Where's the harm in compliments as banter as opposed to insults?
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Published: 5/25/2006
Draft Horses and Weasels reviews
I will not turn the gears of corruption any longer.
Poetry: Politics - Rated: T - English - Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5/23/2006
Dedicated To All The Graf Writers reviews
Dedicated To All The Graf Writers Whose Art Was Dismissed As Filth is the full title. That pretty much says it all.
Poetry: Politics - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 395 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5/20/2006
On A Seaside Hill reviews
I saw upon a hill a sign/Of ancient mastery./The crumblings of a queen who stood/In tender majesty.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5/20/2006
Dance! reviews
Life is here. Why not be happy about it?
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 36 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5/6/2006
Celebration at Night reviews
Sometimes the best thing is to let yourself go, lose yourself in the stars, and spin.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 164 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5/6/2006
Love's Hell
A Frost-style poem about the exquisite torture of loving two people. But, as it always is, the heart is beaten down into submission. One, or the other, but not both.
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 100 - Published: 4/27/2006
Words reviews
So many crowding around, mumbling, bumbling, unconscious of their worth...until the first one steps up.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 167 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/27/2006
Joy in Beauty reviews
I know that this poem makes very little sense, but I was just putting words down. I like it anyway, and hope you do too.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/27/2006
Forget reviews
What to say when it tortures someone you love to think of you...
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 88 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 3 - Published: 4/27/2006
Crying Sky
lies die/try to fly/nothing but a/crying sky
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 34 - Published: 4/16/2006
Tipping Point reviews
In your hands lies the fate of the world, on November 2, 2000.
Poetry: Politics - Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 58 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4/14/2006
Who Are You Sad For? reviews
Weep for the children who will inherit this earth. Do your best to fix it before their time. (A thinly veiled sociopolitical commentary. Please R/R.)
Poetry: Politics - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 199 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4/14/2006
Veils of Hardship reviews
Sometimes when things are just not going well, we need to look beyond the clouds.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 50 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/7/2006
Do You Hear That?
Do you hear the sands of time slipping through the world's fingers like water? Do you know what is gone?
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 147 - Published: 4/7/2006
Swing reviews
Sometimes something or someone in your life is lost, and you are lost without it.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/7/2006
Feel
Someday I will meet someone. For that someone, I will do something I have not been able to do since I was two.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Published: 4/7/2006
Anoint Yourselves
About how we are not doing so well on the long-term survival list. This was an excercise in putting down whatever came to mind, a la Dead Poets Society.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Published: 3/22/2006
Afterdeath reviews
What happens after one drifts into the bleak abyss of death...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 205 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/22/2006
To Rest In Spring reviews
Spring is a good time to rest, to sleep, even to die. For my ailing granddad. Please R/R.
Poetry: Family - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 190 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/19/2006
Heartbeat reviews
"Listen to the beat/To the drums in the heat/Breathe, and let the rhythm take control of your feet" Along the lines of "The Bells," a rhythmic exercise about the beat that connects us all. Please R/R.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Drama/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 314 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3/14/2006
Refuse
Do not let the world rule you, and you may change the world. Please R/R
Poetry: Politics - Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 379 - Published: 3/8/2006
Angel's Eyes
Part love poem, part real question... What color would an angel's eyes be? Please R/R
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 209 - Published: 3/7/2006
Shape the Sky reviews
An excercise in expressing things creatively. "Scatter handfuls of water-dust to lend substance to the ebony floor/Kindle the sun-ember each morning " Please R/R
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 115 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/5/2006
Heroines reviews
A girl somehow survives in a deserted land. Is she normal? Is she even human? Please R/R
Fiction: Horror - Rated: K - English - Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 545 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3/5/2006
The Wandering Minstrel reviews
A small poem about, you guessed it, a wandering bard.
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/2/2006
Thank You
What does it mean to be loved?
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 122 - Published: 3/2/2006
Phantom
Dreaming about my long-distance boyfriend.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 91 - Published: 3/2/2006
Pass On
Time always passes...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Published: 3/2/2006
Laundry Basket II reviews
What will it mean to come of age?
Poetry: Family - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 126 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3/2/2006
Laundry Basket reviews
Average teenage thought about parents.
Poetry: Family - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 113 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/2/2006
Knowledge
What knowledge really matters?
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Published: 3/2/2006
I Am A Soldier reviews
A soldier is torn between what he must do and revulsion at his job. Realistic.
Poetry: War - Rated: M - English - Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 155 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/2/2006
Dust's Prayer
My religion, of a sort: "These myths attempt to bring us vague relief/From knowledge that we are as specks of dust"
Poetry: Religion - Rated: T - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 229 - Published: 3/2/2006
Distractions
An excercise in alliteration done when I should have been writing an essay...
Poetry: Work - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 69 - Published: 3/2/2006
Captain reviews
A metaphorical exploration of high school graduation.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 235 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/2/2006
Bus Stop
A woman waits for her daugher.
Poetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 86 - Published: 3/2/2006
Ants reviews
We are like ants.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 28 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/2/2006
Entreaty reviews
Have you ever really looked at the stars?
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 653 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/2/2006
Life Is A River
Last fall I had the most wonderful weekend of my life.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 336 - Published: 3/2/2006