Dawn Gabriel
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Joined 04-06-06, id: 519741, Profile Updated: 04-19-11
Author has written 36 stories for Love, Family, Nature, Haiku, Friendship, Life, Humor, Essay, Play, Fable, and School.

You can't bullshit people if you really write what you think. So since I don't really think in paragraphs and still don't know the meaning of the word "sarabande", it's short and simple from here on out. I hope you can relate. I'm older now, but I'm still learning.


Loganne Dusk is my superhero alter-ego. She is not a chronic worrier, scared of my mother, or technologically retarded. That's why she's an alter-ego. Suck it.

I have a chronic World of Warcraft addiction. Join the Executus server, roll Horde, and find me there: Prianne, Expera, Flynavair, Delisava, Porsalynne.

I have a baby. A miniature chocolate poodle named Gabriel. (I know... I didn't pick it. My sister did.) He's spoiled as poo. Mostly by me.

Theater: I live for it. You'll see it show up a lot in the writing below.

I'm collecting underclassmen like they're going out of style.

I am swamped as shit with school stuff and work, so the uploading is sporadic. If you really love me, you'll wait. :)

Don't talk to me about your Jesus. I'm sure he's great. I just don't want to be another sheep in His flock.

I like my Trash Can in the bottom right corner of my screen, and you'd better leave it there, dammit.

I read a lot. I'm a sci-fi freak.

I love nicknames. Especially ones involving royalty: Princess and Queen Anne. Recently I have become a doll and bonnidoune.

I've got more town and school spirit than should ever be allowed in one body.

I worry. A lot.

Enjoy.

Always Yours,

Gabriel

(P.S.- To comment below, learn the spell. Learn to edit, learn to read, and learn to look for metaphors.)


MY CURRENT PROJECT(S): Calendar Crucified; Yellow Dress; Nothrend Is Cold Without You; The Tracing Of Bones. Look for them soon, hopefully.

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peach rings by stolen hugs reviews
knowing me, though, i'd just buy us some.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/30/2008 - Complete
The Temptress by your scripted romance reviews
My first story from the male perspective, on temptation. Short story, rated for innuendo. Newly edited and generally made better.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 920 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 3/31/2008 - Published: 3/25/2008 - Complete
Atheist Beliefs in God by Setsuna529 reviews
A true atheist wouldn't understand... the rest of us are bitter, disenchanted.
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 151 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/14/2007 - Complete
keyholes by in a jar pk reviews
french kiss my clenched fist.
Poetry: General - Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 268 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/2/2007 - Complete
pink by Iris Early reviews
She puts her papery little hand in mine, and I sort of flinch but mostly don’t, because she has the dead, dead hands of the devil right now and it freaks me the fuck out.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 869 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 5 - Published: 10/9/2006
shivertwistsweat by girl- reinvented reviews
His love tastes like cyanide.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 113 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 4 - Published: 4/20/2006
The Wolfboy by La Gitane reviews
They warned her not to, but Robin Redbreast was just too curious...
Fiction: Fable - Rated: M - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,667 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 3 - Published: 3/29/2006
Ascension by Gabriel Hartnell reviews
Very dark manga style story based around the simple premise of a huge tower with Heaven at the top and Hell at the bottom. Frakture starts at the bottom- a limbless body whose only desire is to reach Heaven...
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Spiritual - Chapters: 6 - Words: 231,346 - Reviews: 24 - Favs: 11 - Updated: 11/26/2005 - Published: 6/13/2004
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The Honor Student's Tale reviews
Hundred-line poem in the style of the Canterbury Tales about the true thoughts of a high-school stereotype. It started as a Communications assignment and turned out to be actually kind of humorous.
Poetry: Humor - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,003 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/11/2011 - Complete
Starbucks Math, or Coffeeshop Minus You reviews
I was getting used to cuddling against cold windows with coffee and having intelligent conversations. I guess you weren't.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 101 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10/5/2010 - Complete
The Just Friends Sonnet
I just want to try it. Just once. To see if you know better than I do.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 100 - Published: 10/5/2010 - Complete
Discovery Channel reviews
Haikus dedicated to my favorite and not-so-favorite shows from the practically the only TV channel I watch.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Humor - Chapters: 8 - Words: 305 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 7/11/2010 - Published: 9/13/2008
What You Said
I remember where we came from, where we were, and where we were going, but not exactly what you said to me to make me sick of myself. I hate this angsty crap.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 70 - Published: 7/10/2010 - Complete
Facebook Says You Should reviews
I got a suggestion from Facebook that I should "reconnect"... What the hell, Facebook. I think we connect very well.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 44 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5/25/2010 - Complete
Ethan
Always protesting; fighting for what you believed in. I couldn't help you.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 125 - Published: 2/25/2010 - Complete
Things I'd Like To Ask My Spanish Teacher reviews
She either loves me or wants to subject me to endless Spanish torture... I can't figure out which one. A list poem.
Poetry: School - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 142 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2/25/2010 - Complete
Taco Salad reviews
Or, I Draw The Line. My family was eating at El Charro. My sister's taco salad came with a bread bowl that she told them to take off. I hate diets.
Poetry: Family - Rated: K+ - English - Family/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 194 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/24/2009 - Complete
Esmeralda reviews
The history of the Queen in Snow White. A school assignment.
Fiction: Fable - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Supernatural - Chapters: 3 - Words: 3,226 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/17/2009
Dear Subconscious reviews
I have decided that I will write letters to myself using my logical Conscious against my emotional Subconscious as an attempt to change things about myself that cause negative feelings. I'm too old for a diary but not for a good self-talking-to.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 9 - Words: 2,065 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 5 - Updated: 11/10/2009 - Published: 11/3/2009
Shawn and Michelle's Couch
Damn you and your Pottery Barn couch on your perfect white shag carpet and your cohabitating smiles.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 253 - Published: 9/11/2009 - Complete
The Sixth Grade Play reviews
Six vignettes about cliques, homework, dances, growing up, throwing down, and generally surviving the jolt from elementary to junior high school. A project for an after-school program.
Fiction: Play - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,176 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 1/8/2009 - Published: 12/23/2008
Night Animals
New perspective: old woman. This started out as a piece about my hips hurting, but it metamorphosed on me. Growing older, accepting the past.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 242 - Published: 12/7/2008 - Complete
Avaricious
I crave you to the point of mortal sin, but I want you to sleep. Falling asleep on the phone.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 374 - Published: 11/17/2008 - Complete
Anyway reviews
We're busy and tired and never alone, no matter how much I will the snow to fall.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 130 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/8/2008 - Complete
Breathed reviews
Or 'Backstage at the Wizard'. Your breath is hot and so are his kisses but right now I can't quite recall which one makes me warmer...
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 217 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10/28/2008 - Complete
Designer Purse reviews
My sister is 11. She wants a designer purse. I want her to know she doesn't need one to be better than the girl that has them.
Poetry: Family - Rated: K+ - English - Family/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 416 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/17/2008 - Complete
Some Things of Mine
I left some little peices of myself with you, and I was wondering if I could take them back. They should belong to him now.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 194 - Published: 9/15/2008 - Complete
An Ode To Pretty Shoes reviews
A Computer Tech I assignment, of all things. About the sheer number and variety of my shoes.
Poetry: Humor - Rated: K - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9/14/2008 - Complete
Haiku: A HowTo
Eightminute essay on the history, technique, and subject matter of haiku. Originally with a demonstration board that stretched presentation to fifteen minutes.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 661 - Published: 12/15/2007 - Complete
Inconceivably reviews
I've heard this stupid compliment so many times in the last week. Not directed at me, mind you. Just a drabble. I've been to busy and worn out to be creative.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 33 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 1 - Published: 8/26/2007 - Complete
Jewel Of July reviews
Or, 'An Ode To Chelsea, Her Pool, And Her Basement'. I think they should have a category for summer alone. It is incensing in its little pleasures, like freedom and friends.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 151 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/25/2007 - Complete
Standing Backstage During Feelin' Good reviews
What girl doesn't want to be the pretty one they all watch, what girl doesn't want a song just for her?
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 134 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 2 - Published: 6/22/2007 - Complete
Libby Lu's reviews
Pink like poison. It's a little girls' store my sisters COULD NOT LIVE without going to.
Poetry: Humor - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 14 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6/15/2007 - Complete
Leaving The Haze reviews
You love the mirror's lines more than me. T for drug references.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/31/2007 - Complete
Never Sleep Again reviews
It keeps me awake at night, this hideous burning on my lips you left. Tanka, K for implication.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 25 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/21/2007 - Complete
Little Girl Hips reviews
I want to be small again. Are your parents home? No, they are not, but I'm going to lie and say they are so I can spare myself the inevitability of boy plus girl.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 44 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 5/18/2007 - Complete
Original reviews
I could watch you for hours as you be your original self. For Brette.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 24 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 5/9/2007 - Complete
Aqua Queen reviews
Swimming. Anything more descriptive is longer than the poem.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 51 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4/26/2007 - Complete
To The Boy At Auditions reviews
I could tell by the very way you moved your hands.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/25/2007 - Complete
Leaving Colorado reviews
Skiing there might have been the most awkward time of my life, but I still cried when we left.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Drama/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 143 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/7/2007 - Complete
Scenery Colored reviews
You cannot see me, because I'm always standing behind.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 156 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/4/2007 - Complete
Monochrome reviews
Softer than full color.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 62 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 3/25/2007 - Complete
Before Your Time reviews
This is you reading first drafts. This is for being without the chance to revise and rewrite. This is rape of poetry in its rawest forms.
Poetry: Family - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2/22/2007 - Complete
I Am God reviews
You controlled the body, not the heart.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 1/14/2007 - Complete