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Joined 04-11-06, id: 520443, Profile Updated: 12-14-09
Author has written 11 stories for Life, Love, Sci-Fi, Religion, Manga, Essay, and Fantasy.

I have no idea why you would be here i have not written in over a year and a half. However, if you find yourself here I'd like some help.

I need an artist. Someone who can draw in like a manga or anime style. It does not have to be any particular quality. however I'd at least like it to look something like what I'm going for. If you would be interested in working on some projects. email me. thanks.

Well I'm bored and I've decided to write out an Idea I've had for fun. It's Called X Versus Y. Basically I will take two Characters from any one of my stories and make them fight in a random setting... So yea... look out for that.

August 22, 2007

If life had a leg it'd be kicking me in the... Well anyway its time to go back to school. And I have added a total of three chapters to my story Angels... I officially suck. Im hoping that I can come back on strong when school starts but im pretty sure thats wishful thinking.

May you find refuge in the shadow of his wings...

My birthday is tomorrow. Yea! no more teens =_(


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Master ChiefCosmic Strife: Birth of Legends 1: Alpha Squadron23456789101112131416171819202122Cosmic Strife: Absence of Valor23456

Soichiro XCrooked Space Episode 1: The Midnight Special234567Crooked Space Episode 2: Voodoo Chile2345Crooked Space Episode 3: Come Together234567

Melt-DisneyWorldMetal Sense2345

Coffin GuardianMetal Guardian2345678

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Luicia and the voices

Treasured Laughter

July 18, 2007- As I look down at my writing I almost chuckle to myself. It really is sad to think that I havent done nearly as much writing or reviewing as I wanted... _( Oh well live and learn. Im on my way to buying a car so a lot of things have been pushed to the side. Taking a que from Mumbling Sage im going to respond to a few reivews here.

Mindshadow Productions: Thanks a bunch for your insightful reviews. It really is nice to know that a writer of your caliber is reading my work. Not that I dont appreciate reviews from Anon and weaker writers. Good job picking your way through the story. I like to keep the reader wondering so I wont spoil anything. But im glad to see that your probing my characters and looking behind the way that things appear.

Also You brought my review total over 70 :-) which makes me laugh because I remember when I could barely pull one review.

I think the Circle is working well.

The Mumbling Sage: Speaking of the time that I struggled. Its always good to get reviews from MS. Because I know you will be open and honest with me confronting the issues. Honestly Im just trying to get to the end Of Angels. Then I can go back and do a re-write. To clean up some things. Alas untill then Ill have to tolerate the lovingly harsh critique.

Words.F: I must say It feels nice to have a dedicated fanbase. Even if it consists of like two people. Snicker

the last mad-hatter: Funny stuff. I didnt know that two of my favorite readers had a brother. Cool.

Anyway Thats it... Oh I really really really want to move forward with Phantom. But its tough cause I want to keep Angels going... Oh well. Much love, later.

UPDATE!!- I'm back... well kind of. Summer Break has just begun. I plan to get into the groove with some of my stories. Namely, Phantom Pop and Where Angels. If I have time ill re edit the others and Write more for Abs O.

For all the Peple that I am Behind on reviews I plan to go on a reviewing spree. writers beware, It will be bloody and I will show no mercy.

Disclaimer- The writing in this profile is in no way a reflection of my actual works. So forgive whatever errors you find on this page... I just hate writing profiles. ~.~

OK, I have avoided writing this for the longest time. I suppose it's high time I at least write something.

As you can see I am an African American male. I'm 19 years old. I attend Morgan State University and am A devoted Christian. I love Science Fiction, Anime, Ninjas, Neil Gaiman's StarDust and that other book he wrote about going deep into some fantasy land underground (Which I now remember is called "Neverwhere"). He is the reason I began to love to read. Orson Scott Card is Ok... I read enders game it was pretty good. If anyone out there on the Internets can tell me some GREAT not just ok but GREAT, published Mech Stories I would be extremely happy. I can not find any. Oh Also I like Robert Jordan's The wheel of Time Great series but I kinda Quit after the 5th book.

I think im pretty friendly and original. The only reason I write stories is because I can't seem to find all the stuff that I want in the stories that I read. I am an action nut... so much so that I kinda skimp on my character development sometimes Im trying to get better tho.

Super Secret Project (thats not really a secret)-

Phantom Pop-hustle (In the skeleton stages, Space/ Action/ Bounty Hunting)-

Right now its really just a title and a concept. The initial character is Thorn. She is a Phantom. In this world Phantoms are bounty hunters. Its nothing weird like she literally is a phantom. thats just the name of her job. She owns a spaceship. and Will eventually meet and travel with a number of individuals. I suppose the concept is loosely based on Cowboy Bebop. But ill be adding my own crazy twits... cause my mind works like that.

Chapter 1- Phantom For Hire?

Thorn leaned against the chilly brick building as rain pelted her dull grey trench. Thin scrawls of black hair threaded their way through her vision. The scribbles clumped themselves together to form streaming highways of precipitation. She just wanted a nice drink…

The rain seemed to dance on the lamp lit sidewalk; each puddle strumming to its own rhythm. Tiny pools leaked into larger more majestic dance floors as the rain’s beautiful baseline twang kept the beat going strong.

Current Projects -

Where Angles Fear To Tread (Highly Active, Tactical Spy/ Action Oriented)-

To be honest I do not know if this title will stick but we will see... This is my baby, I love this story to death because I love the Main characters they are all based off of personalities of individuals that I know or have run across. It has pretty much everything that I want in a story with a Japanese flare that I am such a junkie for and who does'nt like Spies and secrets stealing and that type of stuff. so it's all good. Read it.

Soul in the Shell: Walking by Faith Redux (Postponed for editing, Space/ Mech Oriented)-

Well the title was going to be Ghost in the Shell but I figured that would be biting that anime to hard even though its generally the same theme. This was my first real story that I posted. I took it down and re edited everything so it should be alot smoother. It can be a bit preachy so I hope that doesn't turn anyone off too much. Its such a What if Scenario. I can explain it to you further if you have questions. But I do like the Idea of faith making things move its pretty sweet and kinda makes miracles look as flashy as magic.

-Edit- Please dont read this story and assume that my other works are of this quality. I recently read back over this story and Man... It needs heavy editing. Certain things I would never write in a story anymore. So for the time being this story serves as a reminder of how terrible I can write and how much I have improved.

Absolute Offense: It's Elementary (Pet Project, Action Oriented)-

Basically the plan for this story is for me to work on my action scenes. So the entire plot has not been thought out nor will it be. Ill just be writing things as I go along and layer on the action. The goal with this is to help me with my other stories action scenes and also description. I think it should be enjoyable tho.


Pay it Forward- General C2. The Concept is that any story in this C2 returns a review for a review. Its highly simple. We all want Good constructive critique. This promotes that.

Pay it Forward Scifi:Fantasy Version- The exact same concept as the one above. only this one is limited to Science fiction stories. Soooooo... Yea... Review my stuff. It will make me happy. I got you back yo.

So yup that's it from me Stay blessed,



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Guide to Things a Fantasy Author should Never Do by The Mumbling Sage reviews
After much painful research, I have brought you a master list of 23 things that will never work in your writing. Ever. Ouch!Sorry, I sort of choked on the tounge in my cheek.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K+ - English - Parody - Chapters: 2 - Words: 3,654 - Reviews: 57 - Favs: 16 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 9/17/2008 - Published: 7/10/2007 - Complete
Project Mindshadow by Mindshadow Productions reviews
A young girl's normal life turns upside down when she finds out that she has unusual psychic abilities and her entire life is a government conspiracy to use those powers for a hidden agenda of world domination. UPDATE: REVISED FROM REVIEWS.
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Adventure - Chapters: 11 - Words: 48,718 - Reviews: 59 - Favs: 16 - Follows: 13 - Updated: 7/16/2007 - Published: 2/22/2007
Metal Sense by Melt-DisneyWorld reviews
A professor becomes involved in a disastrous conspiracy. It's up to him, an alcoholic philanthropist, and an inertiapathic mercenary to save the day. Contains cheap thrills, space travel, and killer robots.
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 5 - Words: 8,105 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 4/22/2007 - Published: 3/18/2007
How to Write a Fictionpress Summary by The Mumbling Sage reviews
In this essay, I explain how a summary can draw the most attention with the most relevant and interesting information about your story. You can use up to 255 characters in your summary-make them count!
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,509 - Reviews: 37 - Favs: 24 - Published: 3/29/2007 - Complete
Revolution of the Captive Heart by sevenofhearts reviews
A poem written in a moment of anger, but a moment is too little to judge the truth. What does this poem trully mean? It speaks of freedom from a love, but can freedom be slavery?
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 216 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 2 - Published: 3/23/2007
Cold Fire:Wake of Cold Zero by BloodZero reviews
The subsequent elimination of a cellular structure by extreme frost temperatures. The Ixai hybrid has taken this name, and for his empire, his journey begins. Join his side as his life takes the darkest of undertakings. NOTE Discontinued
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Adventure - Chapters: 5 - Words: 16,692 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Updated: 2/17/2007 - Published: 2/10/2007
Metal Guardian by Coffin Guardian reviews
The world as we know it has come to an end. The last of mankind must leave Earth or perish. But what caused this? Only the last Guardian knows for sure...
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Adventure - Chapters: 8 - Words: 24,189 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 2 - Updated: 11/27/2006 - Published: 2/11/2006
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Absolute Offense: It's Elementary reviews
When no defense is necessary and nothing at all can stop you... then you have achieved an Absolute Offense. [AN] This story is simply for me to write as much action as I want. ALL Reviews Returned. PM me about getting your story into the reviewers circle.
Fiction: Manga - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,455 - Reviews: 18 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 6/5/2011 - Published: 3/31/2007
Where Angels Fear to Tread: Twin Shadows reviews
Elite fighters have been recruited for the sole purpose of suppressing the technology of GOD. If the forbidden technology falls into the wrong hands... A new evil will arise, one which will saturate the world with endless suffering. I RETURN REVIEWS.
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: K - English - Sci-Fi/Adventure - Chapters: 5 - Words: 9,079 - Reviews: 90 - Favs: 10 - Follows: 12 - Updated: 8/21/2008 - Published: 6/18/2006
Sky Ripple reviews
What happens when one's dream is greater than one's ability. Should the ultimate goal be changed? Or is legend willed and brought about though some means of more concern than human nature and human ability. Come ride an Airship with me. I RETURN REVIEWS.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,630 - Reviews: 14 - Follows: 1 - Published: 8/13/2007
The Price Of Free Speech reviews
My final Paper for a Philosophy Ethics class. I got a B! :
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,759 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/20/2007 - Complete
Why Science Fiction Needs a Savior reviews
Critiques of science fiction and where it is headed.
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 218 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/30/2007
Once Upon a December reviews
Me and My girl friend Started dating in december. I wrote this for our one year aniversery. Ironicaly the style is based off of eagar allan poe's The Raven.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 193 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/23/2007 - Complete
Eternal Shine of the Spotless Mind reviews
A pretty nice poem about humanities attempts to live forever.
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Supernatural/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 188 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3/15/2007 - Complete
God Can Make Me Better reviews
Just a small poem that I wrote about me and my girlfriend.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 234 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/15/2007 - Complete
Soul in the Shell: Walking by Faith Redux reviews
Scripture and technology have merged. Nothing is impossible, but where there is man there will be no utopia. Space, Faith, Combat, and the human soul. Reviews Currently not being returned on this story as it needs editing and is a persistent eye sore.
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Adventure - Chapters: 7 - Words: 6,654 - Reviews: 23 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 2/17/2007 - Published: 2/14/2007
Loves Contrast reviews
Nice little poem about a comparison of love
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 101 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4/19/2006
Between Dreams reviews
Just a short poem about how my dreams are always a lot better than my reality.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/19/2006
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