BrokenandBeautiful
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Joined 04-15-06, id: 520886
Author has written 22 stories for Life, Love, Friendship, General, Nature, General, and Religion.

Hey guys!!!! Here is some stuff about me!!!

Gender: Female :D yippidiefreakingdooo

Looks: Dirty blonde hair, Brownish green eyes, pale skin (tanning doesnt help AT ALL!!), 5' 2" ish...i think, yup pretty average.

My Poems: ummmmm ya my poems are about alot of stuff looking at them again, alot are about my struggle with my Dad's job aka the army. " Unknown", "Is there a point", "Scars" (kind of) ya i guess thats it. I only have lyk a few about what i lyk!! lol but it seems those are my best pieces "Reflection" and "Running Free". the others are mostly about my love life...or whats left of it...ya thats pretty much it.

Likes: I love writing!!! obviousely but ya...my work isnt that good yet but i think i am getting better... ummmm i like oh singing I WAS in SELECT chorus but our stupid teacher only pics people with good last names so GRRRRR. lets see...i lyk thinks that her father knows about this sight ummm butterflys, rainbows, unicorns :D lol ummm ya i m pretty much a normal teenager i lyk hanging with my amazing friends. i lyk music, art even though I am not very good at it. I LOVE THE RAIN!!! i have always wanted to write a poem on it but they always turn out bad...i just wrote one called Reflection which is my best effort so far so ya u can read it when you are done reading my rambles.

Things I dont like: when people are stuck up, when people fish for complements, when people are OBSESSED with me, chearleading i do lyk some cheerleaders but ITS NOT A SPORT...GET OVER IT!!!! my hair... Dr. Pepper, coffee with sugar, THE ARMY, President Bush, alcohol and what it does to people, I dont like it when people use suicide as an attempt to make people feel sorry for them...why_even_both17's family (DIE), soccer, softball, spiders, my hair..oh sorry did i already mention that..., meat, animal abusers, mayo or n e thing like it... whitchcrafty stuff, and some people who shall remain unnamed...there is more but you people are prolly geting annoyed. MOVING ONNNNNN.

MY FRIENDS: you have to check out their stuff they are AMAZING!!!! there is...

Tiara ( forever my favorite cusin and best friend!!!)Bigtina59

Becky (sister 4 life!!!!) why-even-both17,

Rachel DesertMoon,

Courtney XMidnightStarX,

Season: Fall, totally and completely, its soooooo perfect. i feel a poem coming on!!!!

Favorite Animal: PANDA BEAR!!!! omg so flippin cute...

Favorite Color: BRIGHT GREEN...lyk BAM green wow i love it!!!

Some Favorite Quotes: OMG. i have alot of these...my favorite???
" THAT S IS UPSIDE DOWN" screams faith very annoyed!!!!, "NO MORE BODY HEAT FOR YOU!!!!" lol nice Jade. "Wait who's birthday is it???" oy another blonde moment for Emiko, and the newest addition by bigtina59 "...guys will ALWAYS be assholes. Even the sweetest of the sweet, it doesn't matter. As long as they have balls and they know how to use them. They're a$$holes. Ok? " she is amazing and you know it!!!!!!

How I would describe myself: ...I am hyper active, a psycho, but an amazing psycho!!!at times i am depressed but at times i can be the happiest person u have met. ohhhhhhhhhhh i gots a good sentance I am very murcurial in my emotions...i know amazing hu?

Addictions: CAFFINE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! COFFEE, COFFEE, COFFEE, OH AND MOUNTAIN DEW AND YA...

favorite words: amazing i say that all the time if you didnt notice. i also add my own little touches like aflippingmazing...yes i know i bit scary...you know you love it!!!!!!!!!!!! oh that reminds me my 2nd one is FLIPPING or just flippin...

Yes i think I have said enough!!! dont forget to check out my other AMAZING friends on my favorite authors list!!!! a few last notes..

Once again my poems are new. I am not a very experienced poet. So any of your suggestions will help me greatly. Oh and flames are welcome. I like people to be honest.

p.s. if you would like to read more of my stuff on here, look up My Hideing Place. I have like...4 on there. thanks again!!!

Respect the female race and we promise not to take all of your money when we rule the world.

Wow... where did that come from??? Very sorry...

~Hippie at Heart~


"Falling inside the Black"

By: Skillet (whhhhhhhooooooooo)

Tonight I’m so alone

This sorrow takes ahold

Don’t leave me here so cold

Never want to be so cold

Your touch used to be so kind

Your touch used to give me life

I’ve waited all this time,

I’ve wasted so much time

Don’t leave me alone

Cause I barely see at all

Don’t leave me alone,

I’m Chorus: falling in the black

Slipping through the cracks

Falling to the depths

can I ever go back

Dreaming of the way it used to be

Can you hear me

falling in the black

Slipping through the cracks

Falling to the depths

can I ever go back

Falling inside the black

Falling inside falling inside the black

You were my source of strength

I’ve traded everything

That I love for this one thing

Stranded in the offering

Don’t leave me here like this

Can’t hear me scream from the abyss

And now I wish for you my desire

Don’t leave me alone

cause I barely see at all

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Night Without You by Greyfoxx reviews
This is poem is about me and how i wish i could see Him again, but at night, its hard...
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 120 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/12/2006
Forever by MaybeLater reviews
This ones about a relationship that could never really end.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 286 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 2 - Published: 10/5/2006 - Complete
Meth by bigtina59 reviews
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Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 564 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/24/2006
Their eyes were watching God by bigtina59 reviews
It's a poem about keeping your faith no matter what.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 175 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/5/2006
We're the New Generation by je suis une pomme du terre reviews
K because I'm paranoid. We're not going to take the beaten path anymore, because we're the new generation and we're making our own nation... crappy summary please R&R
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 718 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 3 - Published: 7/31/2006 - Complete
Those Eyes by je suis une pomme du terre reviews
Under your torturous gaze... crappy summary, please R&R
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 198 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 2 - Published: 7/29/2006 - Complete
Weakening by bigtina59 reviews
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Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 130 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/20/2006
Warning by je suis une pomme du terre reviews
Part III of III of the Fire and Water trilogy yes, I've decided to call it that. What happens when you play with someone's heart you get swept away by the raging tide.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 387 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 2 - Published: 7/19/2006 - Complete
The Game by je suis une pomme du terre reviews
Rated once again for my own paranoia... I know this game. I'm not putting up with it anymore. I'm not just your dirty water. Please R&R
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 161 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 2 - Published: 7/19/2006 - Complete
Fire and Water by je suis une pomme du terre reviews
Part one of three in the Fire and Water ... trilogy? I guess you could call it that. Fire and water don't mix. Simple as that. R&R
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 72 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 2 - Published: 7/19/2006 - Complete
Lying Here by bigtina59 reviews
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Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 70 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/16/2006
Chain of Broken Hearts by BoMbShELL reviews
You told me it was forever,and forever never ends,well that was a lie, just like everything else you said...
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 328 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/9/2006
Hurt by Rhiok The Demon Lord reviews
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Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 240 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/29/2006
He Cheats on You by GjK reviews
The guy I was with cheated on me. and I wanted to capture every emotion I had in the moments which he told me. I wanted to describe the kinds of thing that go through your head. Anger, humilation, self-loathing. For anyone who's been cheated on.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,208 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 3 - Published: 3/26/2006
Inside by BoMbShELL reviews
Just a lil something that took me like 6 min...just a look at what we all are really like on the inside
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/24/2006
Assault by GjK reviews
My worth was the only thing left that I owned. The rock that I stood on, my shield, my stone. You ripped it from me, and squandered my pride. You left me naked, to run, to hide.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 295 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 5 - Published: 3/31/2005
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Alter Call reviews
A part of this Amazing experiance was the alter call. This poem kind of weaklyexplains what happens. Of course I couldnt really get what I was going for here, but tell me what you think n e way.
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 64 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/30/2006
All I want reviews
After and Amazing life changing experiance I have learned that my life should revolve around God. This poem speaks my one true wish, to be closer to God.
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/30/2006
October 7, 2006 ch2 reviews
chapter 2 to october 7,2006
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 693 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/10/2006
October 7, 2006 reviews
About a school shooting, Fiction of course, Started out as an English Short Story, but evolved to this. R&R please!
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,394 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 3 - Published: 10/7/2006
Live reviews
Its about the choices we can make in life...and what I choose to do...its a bit hard to explain but R&R...maybe you'll like it
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 355 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/22/2006
When I get to Heaven reviews
Rain doesnt only bring moister and life but something else as well...R&R please
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 138 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 8/10/2006
Reflection reviews
I just wanted to write a poem about rain because it is amazing and i have alot of memories about it...this is what came out...i actually like this one...i think R&R please...Flames welcome cringes in a nice way please
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 194 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 7/12/2006
Just Waiting reviews
Just waiting...for something to happen that ruins everything.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 65 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/6/2006
Unknown reviews
a title basicly about a deployment...any ideas about a title?
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 178 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/6/2006
Running Free reviews
One of my happier poems about my love for running. And and explaination as to why I do. Even if you dont like running...u might like it .>
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/5/2006
Scars reviews
About well...scars on the body of life. R&R please
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 146 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 4 - Published: 7/4/2006
Pain and Tears reviews
i actually got this idea listening to James Blunt. I cant figure out how to make this better so if you have any suggestions please tell me!
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 89 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 7/1/2006
Truth reviews
Im sorry, I was just doing what I thought was right
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 79 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 2 - Published: 6/8/2006
Butterflies reviews
Most peoples butterflies are in thier stomach right? This one is a different point of view. R&R pleaseandthankyou
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 138 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 5/8/2006
When I was with you reviews
When i was with you
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 48 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 5/4/2006
Falling reviews
When someone needs my help, i help them, then i fall for them...
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 86 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/4/2006
Would you think of me reviews
Is this just a dream, or are you real?
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 54 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/2/2006
What do you think of me? reviews
What do you think of me?
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 48 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/2/2006
Love reviews
Always only in my dreams.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 53 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/2/2006
In My Dreams reviews
It's always the same. We'll only ever be friends.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 43 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/2/2006
Happy Face reviews
Just give them that million dollar smile and they'll never know.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 146 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 2 - Published: 5/2/2006
Fear of What reviews
I lay here trembling with fear, and I don't know why
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 36 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/2/2006