The Thorn Bird
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Joined 05-31-06, id: 526804, Profile Updated: 03-08-08
Author has written 10 stories for General.

There is a legend about a bird which sings just once in its life, more sweetly than any other creature on the face of the earth. From the moment it leaves the nest it searches for a thorn tree, and does not rest until it has found one. Then, singing among the savage branches, it impales itself upon the longest, sharpest spine. And, dying, it rises above its own agony to out-carol the lark and the nightingale. One superlative song, existence the price. But the whole world stills to listen, and God in His heaven smiles. For the best is only bought at the cost of great pain... Or so says the legend.

Okay, hello everyone! Originally, I only made a fictionpress account so I could review a friend's works, but I guess I'm starting to use this now. For those voracious fiction readers out there, I apologize in advance, for all I write is poetry. I actually do have some fiction, but my progress on them is pretty inactive - I may decide to continue over summer. But other than that, expect nothing but poetry. I know my syntax and word choice tend to be strange - I try using "poetic license" but that just ends up making things sound awkward. Any comments are appreciated!

Silence by M.E. Barstow reviews
Crying out for help, but all I have is silence
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/9/2007 - Complete
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Satellite reviews
Yeah, I really like Astronomy, so I figured...why not? It's still a work in progress since it's so different from my usual style, so any feedback is appreciated!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 238 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/17/2008
Sonnet 156 reviews
When asked to write an Elizabethan sonnet in 1.5 days for an English assignment, one usually cracks under the pressure...
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/4/2008 - Complete
Sonnet 155
Yeah, I tried writing a Shakespearean sonnet for English. Do you have any idea how hard it is to mimic Shakespeare... Anyway, I hope it sounds authentically "Shakespearean." This is Sonnet 155, his "missing sonnet." ; Any pointers are appreciated!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Published: 3/24/2008 - Complete
Thoughts Inside Never Apparent reviews
For Tina.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 202 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/9/2008 - Complete
Solace, emanate reviews
Yeah, I found a poem similar to this and tried imitating its form. This pretty much conveys my thoughts into a series of words. Kind of weird, I know.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 36 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2/27/2008 - Complete
Incomplete reviews
Sometimes you have everything in the world, except for that one thing you've always wanted.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 184 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/27/2008 - Complete
Apology reviews
Yeah, I felt really bad for doing something.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 218 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/26/2008 - Complete
Veneer reviews
This isn't for you, Michael. Sorry.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/26/2008 - Complete
Paranoia reviews
Dedicated to the maestro of technique.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 113 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/26/2008 - Complete
Tribulation reviews
This is for you, Michael.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 99 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2/26/2008 - Complete