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Joined 06-02-06, id: 527010
Author has written 38 stories for Love, Life, Song, Haiku, Fantasy, General, and Friendship.

finally, a place to post my work. At least someone can read it, critique it, whatever.

i really don't know why you are bothering to read my profile though, if you're going to read something why not scroll down and read one of my poems? ;)

"Speak now, you must have a secret kept down,
Down where you can keep it - I need you to spill your guts."

~ Cartel/Runaway

The Words Won't Leave My Mouth by beitnot-perfect reviews
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Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/17/2006
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This Is Why I hate Discos reviews
A song I scribbled down a couple days ago.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 230 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/25/2009 - Complete
Questions reviews
what is this across my face? who dares splash me with this race?"
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 139 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/22/2009 - Complete
Indecent Exposure
I’m sorry I showed myself like that/flashed my most private thoughts..." Meant to post this one a couple years ago but you know how life gets in the way.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 101 - Published: 10/20/2009 - Complete
The Peak reviews
Why does wisdom come at the end? Something I wrote on my phone just now.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 17 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 7/13/2009 - Complete
Again reviews
If I could just crystallize that ghost/that smoke/that brushes almost to my bones..." Half memory, half dream, half wish though I guess it's impossible to have 3 halves ;D.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 100 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/23/2009 - Complete
Writings At An Indecent Hour: Sleeper Shark
pulling at a welded page/to claw out the words I could never say". It's short, have a click, don't worry.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 67 - Published: 2/12/2009 - Complete
Writings At An Indecent Hour: Burning Candles reviews
Burning candles everywhere, the full-bodied fragrance of despair..." Just some stuff that fell out of my head last nite. Feedback would be cool.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 21 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2/12/2009 - Complete
Raggedy Anne
What happens when plan b has to be redrafted? I'm not amazing at writing summaries so just read it. You know you want to.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Published: 2/11/2009 - Complete
The Carrot And The Mule reviews
Dreams are just there to keep us going...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 35 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/26/2008 - Complete
The Princess And The Poppet reviews
She's lying! Lying! Don't believe her! Can't you see it in her eyes..." Reading would be nice, reviewing would be awesome.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 91 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 7/17/2008 - Complete
Don't Leave Me Behind reviews
This is what happens when you're bored. It's about a certain senior who's leaving in 2 weeks ' . I think you should all get what beat it's to, if you listen to The Killers that is. I'd love to know what you guys think
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 312 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/24/2008 - Complete
As Yet Untitled reviews
we could spend the day together and then take our closure home... No title yet, please read and review.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 83 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9/6/2007 - Complete
No Use For A Name
there's something in this life I lead, that under dead of secret is killing me... Jotted this one down on the way to french class today. I'd love to hear some feedback. Maybe one day I'll think up a decent title for the thing.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 34 - Published: 9/6/2007
Queen of Paper Crowns reviews
the doors pulse with her beating fists, tearstreaked eyes, it's come to this... I'd love to know what you think
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/27/2007 - Complete
Exclusion Factor reviews
How I've felt for the past few months finally put into words. Please take a second to read and review I'd really love to know what you guys think.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 151 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10/25/2006 - Complete
Here reviews
when a heart tears in the dark, who is there to see the pain? I'd love to hear what you guys think
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 47 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 10/17/2006 - Complete
I Wonder reviews
I wonder what makes a prep...
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 18 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 9/14/2006
I Guess This Is High School reviews
"when tails turn to teeth/you have few mistakes to make..." I'd really appreciate it if you guys would take a second to say a little something.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 210 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9/12/2006
The True Meaning of Plastic reviews
one of those bitter little truths you learn. tell me what you think.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 20 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/11/2006
The Edge of Inspiration reviews
How I've felt for weeks. Please tell me what you think.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 16 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9/1/2006
I Don’t Think This Is Temporary reviews
it's hard to quote from a haiku without giving it away. I'd really love to get some feedback on this one so please take a little second to say something.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 24 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 9/1/2006
Secrets Never Last Forever reviews
"friendship is more than I can take..." My first full-length song. I'd seriously love to know what you guys think...
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 256 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/19/2006
Am I Real reviews
"I am nothing more than the keeper of dreams..." I'd really love to know what you guys think...
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 184 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8/10/2006
Why It's So Hard To Wake Up reviews
(Note: for all of you know-it-alls out there this is TWO haikus made into ONE poem.)
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 38 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 8/9/2006
Humiliation Is The Highest Form Of Battery reviews
The poem formerly known as "Untitled" is now titled and finished. Please read and review...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 58 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/3/2006
What Fairs are For reviews
Inspired by The Ohio State Fair. I'd love to know what you guys think...
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 41 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8/3/2006
Untitled reviews
sort of a work in progress...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 14 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8/2/2006
Creative People Should Be Stopped reviews
"creative people should be stopped, their words are ruining the world/ they capture what we're taught to hide/ bring out what we push inside..." Please read, I would seriously love to hear what you guys think.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 81 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/24/2006
What Was That Saying Again? reviews
The truth doesn't always set you free. Why not have a clicksie?
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/24/2006
Southbound Loner reviews
One of the poems I wrote after I came back from Myrtle Beach. It could definitely use some tweaking so I'd love to know what you guys think of it.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 163 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7/24/2006
Recipe reviews
I'd love to know what you guys think...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 46 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/20/2006
Shakespeare Was Only Halfway There reviews
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Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 74 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/19/2006
A Lovely Mockery reviews
I wrote this one a while ago, near the start of the school year. I russeled it up a little bit ago and decided it was postworthy, why not give it a read and tell me what you think?
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 190 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/17/2006
Purple Soap reviews
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Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 41 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 7/17/2006
Shelf life reviews
...it's style over substance no one cares what you have inside or if you're stuffed full of flowers 'cause sweetie flowers always die...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 145 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 7/12/2006
The Nightlife reviews
I couldn't find my inspiration for awhile so I decided to finally be honest with myself and what I was feeling and this is what came from one really bad night.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 138 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6/16/2006
Black Like Me reviews
My reaction to the stupid stereotypes and profiles that govern our world. Society through my eyes.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 204 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/9/2006
Sluts and Liars reviews
"roll a three we're over, roll a two break my heart, roll a one go back 3 spaces, right where we left off..."
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 185 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 6/7/2006