Forlorn Will
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Joined 06-14-06, id: 528625
Author has written 10 stories for Love, Song, and Life.

My name is William Vidal. My pen name is Forlorn Will. Forlorn just happens to be a word I like quite a lot, and at one point in my life I described my life as being forlorn (meaning wretched, I know, the selfish thoughts of a teenager). I made this account because I used to put my writing on a forum, but it got hacked into by some low-life and the +50 of my work was deleted. Most of it wasn't too good, I'll admit, but there were a few gems. If you look in my works, the 5 Poem Poetry Portfolio I have are the ones I selected from that whole 50 before it got deleted. I'm not gonna lie, I'm very selfish about my work, I really want people to read my work, because I think that I'm not a bad writer, and I actually like to be told by an unbias audience that my work is good/bad. Although I am open to constructive comments, so feel free to critique as much as you want. Well, I don't want to bore you with any more talk of myself, help yourself to the small works posted here.

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Poem for a Portrait of a Man reviews
An image I got in my head, and because I can't paint a painting worth anything, I decided to capture the image with words.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 126 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/7/2006
Chaotic Order
A poem about the battle of chaos versus order, the self-conflict that exists in all of us, ying and yang fighting each other without realizing they are one.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 154 - Published: 8/7/2006
Legacy
A poem about the legacy, the growing up one must do, the person you are to be, and what you leave behind for future generations.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 172 - Published: 8/7/2006
Goodbye, Old Soul reviews
A poem about the reinvention of oneself I have attempted to put myself through, and I believe myself to be a new person.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 193 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/4/2006
Gold Locket
A poem written about the feeling of admiration one feels for their love, believing themselves unworthy of their love. I have a simliar thing, but it's friendship.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 167 - Published: 7/4/2006
Life In Lines Seen by my Eyes reviews
An observation of the world, life, and the people in it.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 235 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/3/2006
Poetry Portfolio 5 poems
This is a collection of 5 poems I have selected to send to a publishing house. If anyone could help me with the poems or publishing, please do.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 5 - Words: 749 - Published: 7/1/2006
Death of the Sun reviews
A song I wrote. I wanted to have an image of the sun, all the light in one's life, being shot down and killed at dusk when someone whom they love leaves.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 192 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/28/2006
Truth Always Spoken reviews
A poem a wrote rather quickly at 5:00 A.M. It is a love poem, a trend I don't plan on starting, but for the sake of argument, it is about the simple words "I love you." How before one has said these words in honesty, thoughts of rejection are prevalent th
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 115 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/26/2006
Hopeless Lover reviews
I wrote this to commemorate a term used when describing me that I have seen many times.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 178 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/18/2006