Serious Sonneteer
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Joined 06-18-06, id: 529169, Profile Updated: 02-10-09
Author has written 18 stories for Essay, Humor, Humor, General, Young Adult, Thriller, School, Nature, Life, and General.

First things first, I always always return the favour of a review and do my best to give a detailed, intelligent, and constructive one too. And so it goes without saying that I more or less expect the same treatment in return, especially if I've left you a very long review. I don't need lavish praise. I just want honest, constructive criticism, something which is really hard to come by on this site nowadays.

I would like more responses for To Sleep, My Sweet Retreat, Song of the Earth, Mother Nature's Revenge, Fever, A Bodybuilder's Epiphany, and Scholarly Sorrows, as these six are my most recent work. However, if you would prefer to critique my older work, you are also most welcome to do so.

Finally many thanks to all who have reviewed my work. I really appreciate it.

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You are on the favorites list of 6 members.You are on the author alert list of 4 members.You have submitted a total of 154 signed reviews.

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To Sleep, My Sweet Retreat reviews
My third sonnet, potentially my best, I don't know. Rather escapist, an agent of despair. Enjoy anyway.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 2/8/2009 - Complete
Song of the Earth reviews
My second English sonnet, a celebration of nature, a lamentation of man and his deeds. Review review review review review!
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 120 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 2/1/2009 - Complete
Scholarly Sorrows reviews
An exaggerated lamentation of the trials and tribulations of college life.
Poetry: School - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 196 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/20/2009 - Complete
A Bodybuilder's Epiphany reviews
My first English sonnet.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 105 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 1/20/2009 - Complete
Fever reviews
A narrative poem about someone suffering a terrible fever.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 311 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/20/2009 - Complete
Mother Nature's Revenge reviews
Something I wrote a long long long time ago. Please critique.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 207 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/20/2009 - Complete
A Student's Pledge reviews
A Student's Pledge
Poetry: School - Rated: M - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 146 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/3/2007 - Complete
A Day In School reviews
A Day In School
Poetry: School - Rated: M - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 9/2/2007 - Complete
Darkside reviews
Critique.
Fiction: Thriller - Rated: K+ - English - Suspense/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 9,167 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/11/2007 - Complete
Loss reviews
Please critique.
Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,208 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/25/2006 - Complete
Dreams reviews
An essay I wrote for English and for which I scored 26 out of 30 and rewrote for my national exam. Please critique. Thanks.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K+ - English - Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,162 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/16/2006 - Complete
The End of Xavier Elizabeth Koo reviews
Another disgusting story. I won't be writing such stuff anymore, I think. This is going to be the last thing I post on fictionpress before my national exams.
Fiction: Humor - Rated: M - English - Humor/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,498 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9/15/2006
The Life of Xavier Elizabeth Koo Part II reviews
My longest work to date. Critique at will.
Fiction: Humor - Rated: M - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,666 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 9/4/2006
Xavier Elizabeth Koo and his Brassiere reviews
Xavier is fifteen this year, and yet he seems confused about his gender. Or is he?
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: M - English - Humor/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,195 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 8/4/2006
Reversal of Fortunes reviews
A story in which there is a twist in fates at the end.
Fiction: General - Rated: M - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,629 - Reviews: 14 - Published: 7/2/2006
Shaun reviews
A prurient poem about a person namd Shaun and his encounter with a witch.
Poetry: Humor - Rated: M - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 609 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 6/22/2006
Turkey Dinner reviews
A story of how a disastrous experience of preparing turkey dinner ended unexpectedly.
Fiction: Humor - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 840 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 6/22/2006
Winning reviews
A narrative on an interscholastic tennis match.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: M - English - Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 959 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 6/22/2006