notthecreepyfatguy
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Joined 07-29-06, id: 534927
Author has written 48 stories for Love, Friendship, Family, General, Politics, Humor, Religion, Life, and School.

Okay so I just uploaded a poem around five minutes ago, and I'm sitting here typing another when my yahoo account thingie alerts me that I have mail. And to my surprise IT MY VERY FIRST REVIEW EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!I was so happy I cried..seriously I cried. So thank you very much esoteric-rubbish you made my day!

I want everyone to know that I made some typing errors on my poems, but in order to keep the reviews that have been sent to me I haven't deleted and re-uploaded them so I could fix the mistakes. So I just wanted to apologize for that.

More people to thank-

Michael Aliester Smith(reviewed twice! Twice how cool is that!?), and Createanarchy (this person is definatly one of my favorite authors and reviewers)! You guys rock! My very first day of posting poems and I already have people giving me positive reviews! So thankyou, thankyou, thankyou!!!!

Freed by Mercy (also reviewed twice. I feel like a doughnut I'm so happy.)protection-to the top(this writer has some great poetry.),Hemlock, Mithxerra the MoonLily (even though she doesnt agree with my views), Incognegro (gave me some good advice and a compliment!),Temperhemi (thanks much!)Makingituptoher, Etheral, Delium'sQueen (one of my favorite people.), this bitch is shady, jo-joba-music-girl, poetic abortion(Cool name! And even though your not a fan I really like your review, I try to think about what you said when I write.), sharpedgedpen, alice is dying (I like the adoration! And its good to know that someone out there is feeling the way I do, so thanks muchos Alice is dying!), Kerbi ( your review was really sweet and I appreciate the concern, but I still havent changed my opinion. Also I know that all christians are not like that, its just what I was feeling at the time. I "love love love"-d your review.), Rozlin (Your review made me sad, not because you said anything mean or whatever, but because someone else has had to go through that. Thankyou very much though.)Princess-anna57( This one actaully surprised me! I had literally just posted the poem for five minutes and all the sudden I got a review! Ah I love people on fiction press. And thanks for the "write on!"!).jenniferdaly( I cant believe that you called me moving! That is such a compliment, I cant even begin to thank you!),Ashley Hyperkins (She made me cry with all of her incredibly nice and evcouraging reviews! Thank you so very much! You are, most seriously, one of my favorite reviewers.), charmedbuffylova(thanks muchos! I have enjoyed your work immensely and cant wait till your next post!), C Colucy ( thank you for your nice comments. I was glad to find that someone could see images in my poems. It makes me proud!), Dawn Castle (You gave me one of the best compliments I have ever recieved, thank you so much.), Gaurdrail( I am really glad that you enjoyed it. And thanks for appreciating the"straightforewardness" not many people like that.), Teenfreakingangst (Ah! You calledmy poem passionate!Thankyou!),Wild Inside (You really got the poem and thats what Ilike! I hate the fakers to, we're, like... kin or something.),Caralita( I LOVED your review. Thanks muchos for the compliments!), Over-achieving-misfit (Its cool that you connect and your right, "what is a poem without emotion?" Oh and I like you name. Clever!), Noir Fleurir ( Thank you! What does your name mean?), morbid-fantasies ( You said I had talent! Thankyou muchos, deary!), slitwristremix (Ah, cool name! Your review made me consider the way I had written the beginning of the poem. I just might get around to changing it one day...), The Fool On The Hill ( Your name reminds me of my brother...anyway thank you!), Chuff (Did...you...call ME talented! I love your poetry, you and I aren't even on the same level. Your above me :)! ), I hOld tHe kEys oF lifE ( You really connected to the poem and I was happy to know that it was relatable. Thankyou.), Three Cheers for Eve ( Anger is the one thing that I think that I'm able to convey. Thank you, your compliment made me haaaappppyyyy.) HaleyJamesNathan ( I'm sorry that you did that, and I'm sorry that you had to know what that feels like. Its not a good place to be and I hope that you are now out of it. Thanks for the WOW ;)! ), Hallie Stunt ( I like to make people think, if I made them braindead I'd feel a little worried. thanks for the well written compliment!), Persecuted Angel (Seriously, you are fucking awesome.), Ashelin ( Thank you very much!), VampireSesameStreet ( I'm drinking coffee, still havent found real music but I'm searching. And I'm soopah happy I didnt confuse you! I feel all warm inside.)

I really appreciate what all of you have to say, so thank you for taking the time to review. And when (if) you do then you get to see your name up here! Yay!

Some stuff about me...

My name- Michael. Yes Michael you wonderful people you.

Sex- I am a girl! Yay me!

Age-16

Stuff I like- Well...stuuuufffffff.

Why do you want to know all this useless crap about me anyway? Well if anyone wants to say 'allo e-mail or message me at notthecreepyfatguy@

HEY GO AND ADD ME ON MYSPACE!!! /notthecreepyfatguy

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Blue Blood by MlleCilip reviews
The world is in the palm of her hand, but not everything is perfect for the beautiful, rich, and titled. Will she find a happy ending with a knight in shining armor? Newly updated after a long hiatus, but back in full swing. R/R for faster updates!
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 12 - Words: 19,612 - Reviews: 22 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 13 - Updated: 6/16/2010 - Published: 2/1/2007
Ghosts by Ashley Hyperkins reviews
A ghost learns the truth about herself, and in the process. . .
Fiction: Supernatural - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Supernatural - Chapters: 9 - Words: 3,227 - Reviews: 19 - Favs: 2 - Updated: 6/11/2008 - Published: 8/27/2006
Untitled by Dextera reviews
In black, and blue and bleach...I'll smear them across the walls...for ETS 151: Interpretation of Poetry. [criticism wanted. it's for a grade.] Please?
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 199 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/21/2007 - Complete
Jawlocked by createanarchy reviews
Jaw locked tight, where has your voice gone princess? It us to be so loud
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 210 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/19/2007 - Complete
At the End by citrus scented reviews
Imagine if one day you woke up with an eating disorder. This is the account of a girls last day, at the end of the tethers that bulimia has pushed her too.
Fiction: Biography - Rated: T - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 5 - Words: 10,363 - Reviews: 25 - Favs: 18 - Follows: 1 - Published: 11/20/2006 - Complete
Rollercoster Life by createanarchy reviews
Life is like a rollercoaster many ups many downs, pity I hate rollercoasters
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 126 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/16/2006 - Complete
Life Within by Persecuted Angel reviews
A poem written 1st person about a girl whose boyfriend wanted more than what she wanted to give him.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Horror/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 193 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/20/2006 - Complete
The Writer by kenansense reviews
You know those guys that pretend to like Dashboard Confessional and act sensitive but only do it to get chicks? One learns something important.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 240 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/19/2006 - Complete
Days Go By by SirenThird reviews
Tomorrow might be fairy tales and turpentine
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 62 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/17/2006 - Complete
Sparkles by Chaotic Charisma reviews
A tribute: to writers, to my nickname, to my sexuality, to hidden messages. A questioning: of stereotypes, of conformity. An abstract examination of everything I'm thinking about. I dont know what this piece is, but I really love it.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 177 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 3 - Published: 10/17/2006 - Complete
Always Prevailing by angelcloudsh reviews
poem about being crushed under the weight of peoples expectations
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 98 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/10/2006
North by Kitchen Checkerboard reviews
Happy birthday, Virginia... happy birthday, yes...
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 179 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/10/2006
Unexpected Visit, Unwanted Surprise by Dawn Castle reviews
Amy Lee Fox worked hard at getting female lead role in a summer musical. Her life time friend and secret love, Oscar Taylor received the leading male role as well. She hoped they could be more than friends by the end. But what two things stand in her way?
Fiction: Mythology - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,425 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/5/2006
Emerging From The Darkness by Dawn Castle reviews
Marianne was a bastard child. Her father knew of her and could care less. But it none of this mattered to her. Not after that stormy night on her birthday. Not after finding out that her brother and the one she loves are no longer alive, yet not dead. And
Fiction: Supernatural - Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Drama - Chapters: 7 - Words: 8,548 - Reviews: 13 - Favs: 2 - Published: 10/5/2006
whore by citrus scented reviews
this is my own exorcism. (please, do not judge me) -finished-
Fiction: Biography - Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 6 - Words: 2,544 - Reviews: 78 - Favs: 36 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 10/1/2006 - Published: 7/17/2006
House of Cards by xhaiiro reviews
And our house of cards will fall..
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Tragedy/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 144 - Reviews: 15 - Favs: 3 - Published: 9/22/2006
my dahlia by caralita reviews
she spun star dust.
Poetry: Song - Rated: T - English - Horror/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 166 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 2 - Published: 9/17/2006
I Saw You by Ashley Hyperkins reviews
A song that I wrote while I was listening to the news about 9/11 5 year anniversary, not really related though
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 83 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 2 - Published: 9/10/2006
Evil by Ashley Hyperkins reviews
A poem that just came to me as I was trying to write a sonnet for Shakespeare class. Please R and R
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 36 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/7/2006
Je t'aime by Delium'sQueen reviews
Poem about love
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 370 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/30/2006
Behind The Door by Punk'N'Rock Chick reviews
It's about what's behind the door in life, so to speak
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 44 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/23/2006 - Complete
Tomorrow by Delium'sQueen reviews
a meditation on the emptiness of the promise of tomorrow
Poetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/16/2006
Kissing In The Rain by createanarchy reviews
Turn, twist, twirl, fall kiss in the rain
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 72 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/29/2006
Miracle of the 90'sYou Wish by createanarchy reviews
About some one who feels they are better then everyone, their whole generation when really we're all the same, hopelessly unoriginal
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 127 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/22/2006
Flawed by Michael Aliester Smith reviews
A broken doll breaks more and gets tossed. No big deal.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 197 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/20/2006
So Long Since by createanarchy reviews
It's been so long since I've felt so much, I wonder if what I thought I was feeling was just made up, and this is life
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 231 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/11/2006
Brigher Then The Sunshine Never Gonna Be Mine by createanarchy reviews
It's sunny outside, not written about anyone, I guess it's just sunshine and love songs make me write strange things...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/6/2006
Punk by Basara reviews
I noticed that punk style and music is on...so yeah, I wrote something about it...
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 12 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/2/2006
Doll and Shadow by slaveofmydreams reviews
A dark fairy tale of a little doll who must find an answer on why a shadow can not be undone.
Fiction: Fable - Rated: M - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 641 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 2 - Published: 5/15/2006
Moving On by createanarchy reviews
Moving on can be really hard, if your still not sure about the other person
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 77 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/2/2006
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Habit For a Habit reviews
I took up smoking because of you.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 133 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3/13/2009 - Complete
You're Not Worth It reviews
You're not worth it, you never were.
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 148 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/15/2008 - Complete
Sweet Things reviews
When I first kissed you it was like being transported back to the nervous fumblings of middleschool...
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 120 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/31/2008 - Complete
Stock Market Jesus reviews
My heart beating furiously in my chest, remind me with each thathump that..
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9/2/2007 - Complete
Forced To Pretend reviews
I choose to ignore those glances that you so frequently send her way.
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 152 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9/2/2007 - Complete
Easy reviews
All that I seem to attract are horny losers that think....
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 6/6/2007 - Complete
BulletProof Junkie reviews
You’re a bulletproof junkie girl...
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 4/26/2007 - Complete
Enough reviews
Sure lets all take a crack at the bulimic whore...
Poetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 122 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/26/2007 - Complete
Sickly Love Poems reviews
They’re coughing up rejection and too sweet lies.They quietly whisper all the things I’d like to hear you say and then some...
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4/26/2007 - Complete
Stage Fright reviews
Everyone’s staring, waiting,For me to say something,
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Drama/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/25/2007 - Complete
Untitled2 reviews
Fuck all of you and your popular drugs, You all say that the trip is what made you...
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: M - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 125 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4/25/2007 - Complete
Choke On Those Words reviews
You're nothing.Not even a blip on the screen.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 133 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 2/17/2007 - Complete
Untitled reviews
Fickle as can be.I fall in love with the snap of two fingers.
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 141 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2/17/2007 - Complete
My Rant reviews
You kill yourselves and BRAG about it!Your racist and you LAUGH about it!
Poetry: School - Rated: M - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 187 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/17/2007 - Complete
I'll Die reviews
A girl talking about how she will die. Slightly emo I must admit.
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 11/9/2006 - Complete
Making Our Mark reviews
Some rockstar teens wanting to make their mark on the world, or at least some messed up kid.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 115 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/9/2006 - Complete
Poetry by the Debate Inspiration reviews
I got bored in Debate and wrote a series of poems about thoughts floating through my head.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 314 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/7/2006 - Complete
Gods reviews
Why we worship the teen rockstars the way we do.
Poetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/7/2006 - Complete
For You reviews
They told me that the worst was over
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 248 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 10/7/2006
Ponder reviews
I wish I could scream it in your face over and over again until you got it.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/7/2006
Your Regret reviews
How you wished you hadnt or how you cant believe that you didnt
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 129 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10/7/2006
Fake reviews
They giggle and hide behinf their fake beauty
Poetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 10/7/2006
Take The Drag reviews
Funny how little you see the real
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 161 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10/7/2006
Take It Away reviews
Call me a Liar. Call me a fake.
Poetry: Family - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 125 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10/7/2006
Because I Loved You reviews
I cried because you did everything you always told me not to.
Poetry: Family - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 188 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/7/2006
Insults reviews
I take it out on myself with my own thoughts.
Poetry: General - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 159 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10/7/2006
War Hero reviews
Okay this poem hasn't got much attention but its one of my personal favorites.
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 127 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10/7/2006
Save Me reviews
For the suicide and those who helped prevent it.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 270 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/29/2006
Performing reviews
"I laugh in order to cover the sob"
Poetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 156 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 9/29/2006
Force reviews
"Your idea of right is..."
Poetry: Family - Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 172 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9/29/2006
Unanswered reviews
"I prayed to god for him to make you stop but I heard nothing."
Poetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 144 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9/29/2006
Ruler, Ruler reviews
Cleopatra, Cleopatra that is who you are.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 147 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 9/19/2006
Shattering reviews
showed me how to gracefully fall
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 215 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9/19/2006
Growth reviews
They told me that regret was guilt and guilt was a lie so I shouldnt feel it.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 160 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9/19/2006
Bubble Gum Bubble reviews
Bubble gum bubble carry me away.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 138 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9/18/2006
Inflicted reviews
GET OVER LOVE
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 242 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9/18/2006
I Wish You Had Understanding reviews
Breaking down the barriers of the unwilling isnt fullfilling, Dont make me hate you.
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 193 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9/18/2006
Idol Worship reviews
When adoration for a band or a singer goes to far.
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 145 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 8/18/2006
Lack of Interest reviews
Lack of intrest from a guy makes a girl question herself
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 178 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 8/11/2006
Perfect Bigot reviews
This is a poem about when I asked a couple of questions about God and a woman yelled at me.
Poetry: Religion - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 8/9/2006
Your Taste reviews
A girl wakes up in the morning to find she's been used and thrown away, left with only the taste.
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 166 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8/7/2006
Dr Pepper reviews
Its about the killing nature of Dr.P. Anyway read it and laugh.
Poetry: Humor - Rated: T - English - Humor/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 173 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/7/2006
Happy Now? reviews
This is on pollution and corruption that I see going on around me with no effort to stop it.
Poetry: Politics - Rated: M - English - Poetry/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8/6/2006
Tell Me reviews
This girl finds out her boyfriend has been using her and questions him as to why she hates him.
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 215 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8/6/2006
The Delicate Few reviews
This is about how America turns a blind eye to many of the problems that are going on right in front of them.
Poetry: General - Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 233 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/6/2006
The Demon reviews
A girl turns to her mother for help when she is in trouble but the mother turns her back.
Poetry: Family - Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 233 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/6/2006
This Is My Thank You Letter reviews
A girl thanks the person who influenced her most.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 270 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/6/2006
Magic reviews
A girl sees a picture of a famous musical artist and afalls in love with him soon after her
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 255 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/6/2006