On the matter of giving me reviews please tell me why you liked something, not that you just did. And I also like to think I'm mature enough to take criticism as long as there is a why in there as well. Whatever you think of the poem/story, give a reason or something I can improve upon.

I'm not likely to put/keep anything here that I want to go anywhere with, so this will probably remain in the realm of poetry; writing exercises, and short prose.