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Joined 10-07-06, id: 542942, Profile Updated: 03-24-12
Author has written 42 stories for Romance, Life, Friendship, Family, War, Love, Young Adult, Essay, Mystery, Nature, Religion, and Fantasy.
I am a college student and I have been writing since I was in middle school. I love to write and I hope to become published someday. I am really eager to improve my writing, but to do so I need some people to read my works and let me have some constructive criticism. Please don't flame me though, tell me what I can work on but don't insult me. Everyone can always work on writing skills. My time is spent watching anime, reading, drawing and playing my guitar. Most of my time is really spent studying for exams! I wish you all well, happy penning :)
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The Road Not Taken by DeleteConvo reviews
my own take on the classic robert frost poem. i dont mean to plagarize i just meant to put my own interpretation. tell me what you think ! R&R
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 169 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/6/2009 - Complete
Finding Peace by Lady Saphira reviews
Alia Hamilton learns to live, love and most of all find peace. Please R&R. Also suggest a new title if you can think of something better.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 5 - Words: 3,537 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 1/21/2008 - Published: 11/2/2007
Remembering 911 by Ainur Agar reviews
This is something that I wrote on 91102, but decided to fix the spelling and repost it.
Poetry: War - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 274 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/27/2007 - Complete
Faithless Star by fangs of faith reviews
a young man wanders the earth, feared and on the run he finds his element in the presence of a beautiful young mage. but the Gods become furious and... I will be updating soonNEXT CHAPTER3 TROLL ATTACK soon just check out my profile page jus g2 type it
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 4 - Words: 2,771 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 2/20/2007 - Published: 11/2/2006
Dancing Under the Full Moon by Jareth Sparrow reviews
This poem is about a woman dancing under the full moon.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 333 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Published: 12/15/2006 - Complete
Dream Prince by Jareth Sparrow reviews
This poem is about a woman dreaming about her prince.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 377 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/12/2006 - Complete
Tell Me, Lady Liberty by ArinAAW reviews
A poem about what has happened to liberty and the foundations of our country.
Poetry: Politics - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 162 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 3 - Published: 12/4/2006 - Complete
Crimson, Dark, and Pale by PsychoLady reviews
the world is crimson, dark, and pale'
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 63 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 2 - Published: 10/30/2006 - Complete
Nothing Wrong by topthiscliff
I'm fine really
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 127 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/29/2006
All I Can Do is Dream by fading innocence reviews
A sequel to Dreamin' Away. It really makes me frustrated sometimes that all I can do is dream of a happier world for all of us.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/27/2006 - Complete
Cardboard City by fading innocence reviews
And we'll stay one more day in this cardboard city lie...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 156 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/27/2006 - Complete
Forget, but Don't Forgive by The Ghost Drowned reviews
Believe it or not, it really can go the other way. It's all a matter of instinct, and trusting that instinct.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 596 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 2 - Published: 10/21/2006 - Complete
A Werewolf's Tale by Jareth Sparrow reviews
Arianwen, a werewolf, loses her love during the Inquisition and loses her faith in the human race. Throught out the centuries, Arianwen copes with her loneliness until she meets, Robert McGowan, whom she saves his life. Eventhough he is mortal human being
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,451 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 10/20/2006
Over the Edge by Living Life Free reviews
This is a poem i wrote about somone who has been in a lot of pain and jumps and commits stuicide.. It's kinda sad.. but that is somtimes how i feel
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 130 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/31/2006 - Complete
Blood on the Hands by A. S. Reid reviews
An elf and her friend elf and a human male have to protect an artifact of great destruction and creation, while at the same time, finding themselves in eachother, and taking revenge out on the bad guys. packed with action and humor, with just a little rom
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: M - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 5 - Words: 12,152 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Published: 7/28/2006
Blind by Lady Mydnyt reviews
Ever thought of looking ariund you? As in, really look?
Poetry: Nature - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 68 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Published: 4/22/2006
Mirror by K's Moonshadow reviews
I am so far away from you, and no matter how I try, the mirror stays between us, making the distance larger and you start to fade away... I really like this one guys, PLEASE READ It's getting PUBLISHED!
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 201 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 2 - Published: 12/25/2005 - Complete
The Dark Lord by Alucard-666 reviews
A vampire takes an aprentice unnder his wing, and lets him start a new life as a child of the darkness...
Fiction: Supernatural - Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 910 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/14/2005
Orphean Wing by Adrian Ashcroft reviews
Sorcery, swordfights. love, betrayal, murderous rage, blood, pain, sacrifice, anguish, and death-Orphean Wing, a tale of dark fantasy.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: M - English - Drama/Adventure - Chapters: 2 - Words: 5,375 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 2/5/2005 - Published: 12/24/2004
LOL by DarkKnight8 reviews
The angst filled poetry of a teenage writer.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 134 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 2 - Published: 12/24/2004
Without Me by Amara Ryden reviews
It's time for me to leave you.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 103 - Reviews: 15 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 1 - Published: 6/8/2004 - Complete
Pure Sin by Amara Ryden reviews
Society drives a young girl to commit suicide.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 218 - Reviews: 34 - Favs: 8 - Published: 4/30/2004 - Complete
Heaven by Amethyst Horizon reviews
To the one who showed me how wonderful Heaven really is.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/14/2003
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Cloaked Strangers
A girl born to a vain and impulsive queen is tossed into a realm of fantasy when her mother makes a promise to a Goddess and the girl is forced to become the fated hero of their world, Cama. Will she save Cama, or succumb to darkness' power?
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 2 - Words: 9,419 - Published: 3/31/2011
God I Need a Lift reviews
I've broken tendons, broken bones, I can't do this on my own..
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 88 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/23/2010 - Complete
With You
A new love story unfolds this December, 2010.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 128 - Published: 12/23/2010
No Longer A Slave reviews
Dear Jerk my mom married. She's finally divorcing you. This poem is a little angry and dark for me, but this guy is probably the biggest jerk and most evil man I have ever met.
Poetry: Family - Rated: T - English - Family/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 155 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/23/2010 - Complete
Music of The Woods
Music Of The Woods, let yourself go
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 115 - Published: 1/21/2010 - Complete
I Know
Even when I'm alone I know I'm not. "I carry your heart, I carry it in my heart - e.e.cummings"
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 112 - Published: 11/15/2009 - Complete
Are You The One?
Is he the one? Maybe? Have I found who was made for me?
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Published: 11/15/2009 - Complete
The Barbed Wire Rose reviews
Lillian Danae accidently kills her very best friend, her parents disown her and send her to her Great Aunt's where in a new town and new school,Lillian must try to heal from her past&move on.Thankfully a boy with a hidden past reaches out to her.R&R pleas
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Friendship - Chapters: 9 - Words: 12,118 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 4 - Updated: 11/6/2009 - Published: 3/8/2008
The Dreams Hurt reviews
Your hands are healing my heart, but the dreams hurt so much.. r&r please
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 11/6/2009 - Complete
Mirror, mirror
SHow me the beauty that I don't see. I'm not an angel. I brush my hair, as though I could brush the beauty underneath out. As if I could brush the ugly away. Read and review..please
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 141 - Published: 10/14/2009 - Complete
Somewhere A Clock Strikes Midnight
A poem I wrote the morning after prom, which was a romantic and friend-filled night. It was more than I would have expected it to be. It downpoured on us as we were dancing to Journey, but I won't ever forget that night. Read and review pleaase
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 211 - Published: 9/15/2009 - Complete
If I Were A Princess
A poem written in a new form. Read and review, I find its good if you've ever wanted to be a fairy tale princess, but life hasn't turned out quite the way you planned it to
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 124 - Published: 9/15/2009 - Complete
Happy Ending
I want a happy ending a happy hopeful poem in a new format I learned PLease read and review, its very sweet and relatable
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Published: 9/15/2009
Better Left Forgotten reviews
A murder in a marine laboratory? That's what Gregory Briggs, an arrogant psycologist, and Michelle Adler, a young toxicologist intern, are out to find out. Includes hidden identities, sarcasm, and red haired, hot tempered female villainy! PLEASE R&R!
Fiction: Mystery - Rated: K+ - English - Mystery - Chapters: 4 - Words: 9,693 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/14/2009
Shades of Grey reviews
I had a dream that someone I love completely ignored me and was unresponsive and cold. This a poem based on my dream.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 134 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/14/2009 - Complete
Waiting To See You Again
Sometimes waiting is worse than just your everyday pain..
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 246 - Published: 12/30/2008 - Complete
Too Long reviews
Its been too long since I've seen him, or since I've talked to him.. way to long to go without seeing someone you care about
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 226 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/30/2008 - Complete
I Wonder
Am I already just a memory? Do I even exist? I wonder... R&R please
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 86 - Published: 11/14/2008 - Complete
Anger reviews
I don't have a better title for this, if you have an idea I am open to it. It's about how I feel when I am angry but I hold it all in so I don't hurt anyone with it. R&R please
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 68 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/14/2008
The Last Hug reviews
I can't hug my friend anymore, for reasons difficult to explain. But she always gave me the greatest hugs and I miss them so much. R&R please
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 165 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/14/2008 - Complete
Impossible to Define reviews
My first taste of love? IF its not love I dont know what it is... "Its a disease that has me trapped...A beautiful disease..."
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 228 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/14/2008 - Complete
What is Left?
When your heart is broken, and for no reason, what is left?
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/18/2008 - Complete
Let Me Pretend reviews
I told someone how I felt, they admitted feelings as strong..a tiny assumed thought &it was all over before I even got a chance to know him or a chance to love him. I wish I got the chance to..
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 208 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9/19/2008 - Complete
Is it Real? reviews
A poem I wrote about how I felt about my best guy friend. We went out, and it didn't work out, and now we're trying to fix the friendship. Anyways its pretty good, and from a third person point of view. please r&r
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 68 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9/19/2008 - Complete
A Sailor's Philosophy reviews
A good inspiring poem, told using metaphors that a sailor would. PLease R and R. Its one of my best and its a happy poem.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 61 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/30/2007 - Complete
What Irritates Me reviews
A short rant catcher in the rye style about what irritated me one day while I was washing the dishes and watching the news. Its an English Class piece, About The world and its ignorance with money.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,120 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 7/27/2007 - Complete
Minna's Star reviews
Tragic tale of two sisters, the younger is voiceless and the elder is trying to solve the puzzle of her parents' death. Trauma, romance, betrayal and sisterly love. R&R Please!
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,064 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/27/2007
To Put Them At Rest reviews
Theodora doesn't beleive in love and is hunting the murderer of her family. She created a vow to never stop until she kills the assassin. Then she falls in love...will she let the vow she took control her? Or will she choose love? R&R please!
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 11 - Words: 29,337 - Reviews: 6 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 7/27/2007 - Published: 10/21/2006 - Complete
My Rebellious and Unrequited Heart reviews
This is a poem I wrote this year. I really like someone and know it is impossible to love him or vice versa...in other words its not supposed to happen but it kinda is. Very sad and troubling.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 115 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 6/7/2007 - Complete
Your Sorrowful Tears reviews
I was very deppressed when I wrote this...I want to end the hatred I seeStop the world from implosionOr explosionJust let me die andSave your tearsYour sweet sorrowful tears..
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 295 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/28/2007 - Complete
Hope's Losing War reviews
This is yet another of my deppressing poems...it's way morbid. But, please, R&R!
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/7/2006 - Complete
Not Even The Moon reviews
I wrote this when I realized that I had people that cared for me but never took notice. Especially when I felt this way...R&R!
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 12/7/2006 - Complete
Acid Tears reviews
I wrote this poem two years ago in eighth grade. It was how I was getting sick of making my friends sad, so this poem was created upon a situation where I reprimanded myself.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 47 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11/4/2006 - Complete
The Wishing Star reviews
This poem is about how my friend is always there for me no matter what. I wrote it for her to say that I felt grateful and if in any way I could do something for her, I would. R&R Please!
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 134 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/4/2006 - Complete
Smile reviews
A poem about someone talking to me and my response about my family life.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 67 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11/4/2006 - Complete
A Dog's Point Of View reviews
This is a poem about people and how I feel about war in general. After I wrote it I named my poem Dog's Point Of View because I think that a majority of humans do not think this way as maybe some animals do.
Poetry: War - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 11/4/2006 - Complete
Not Real reviews
My parents got into yet another huge fight. All I want is to be a family again and I wrote a poem to express my feelings.
Poetry: Family - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 50 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 2 - Published: 11/2/2006 - Complete
Warmth reviews
My parents were arguing last night and I went outside and started writing. This poem was how I was feeling when they were fighting.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 59 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 11/2/2006 - Complete
My Fire reviews
This is an inspirational poem I wrote for fun. it's really deep when you think about it. I won an award for it so R&R and tell me if my poem deserved the award.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/25/2006 - Complete
Nothing reviews
Yet another of my depressing writings. I think it's good. Please R&R and tell me!
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 34 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 10/25/2006 - Complete
The Rain reviews
Something that I wrote when I missed a girl. She had just died at 19 years old and neither my sister nor I got over her. R&R please!
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 10/25/2006 - Complete
A Farewell reviews
Something I wrote when I was sad. My friends say they love it but R&R please and tell me what you think about it.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 1 - Published: 10/25/2006 - Complete
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