Author has written 3 stories for Romance. Chapter 3 of Blood Soaked Angel finally out. IMPORTANT AUTHOR'S NOTE: CHAPTER 3 IS NOT THE FINAL VERSION. The chapter 3 out right now has a lot of mistakes I know and a lot of places where things don't make any sense. This is where YOU come in. FREAKING REVIEW!! TELL ME WHERE YOU SEE THINGS THAT DON'T MAKE SENSE!! I won't know where those places are unless you tell me. I've been staring at this for so long. HELP ME HELP YOU UNDERSTAND IT BETTER!! So all in all: SEND ME SOME REVIEWS AND CRITICISM!! I DON'T CARE IF YOU DON'T LIKE IT, TELL ME WHAT YOU DON'T LIKE ABOUT IT AND I'LL TRY TO CHANGE THAT!! Name: Silver Likes: reading, writing, drawing, hanging out with friends, rotting my eyes out on the computer, fighting evil marshmellows! (its an inside joke), anime, listening to music Dislikes: doing homework (which I really should be working on right now...oh well), school, waking up early, being woken up by my super loud, inconsiderate brother Hobbies: reading, writing, drawing, surfing the internet, talking on aim, watching really stupid but funny videos on youtube Music: currently, I've become obsessed with Red Jumpsuit Apparatus, Gym Class Heroes, and 30 Seconds to Mars. They are amazing!! Along with Fall Out Boy, Panic! At The Disco, Backstreet Boys (yes, I'm still a fan. I went to their Never Gone concert and I had a lot of fun. They are NOT DEAD!!), Evanescence, Fort Minor, Linkin Park, My Chemical Romance, The Used, Vienna Teng (amazing artist, highly recommend her), The Killers, Plain White T's, All American Rejects, DHT, etc. Video Game Status: 2/14/08 Happy Valentine's Day! I've finally beaten Kingdom Hearts. Working on Kingdom Hearts II. I miss Roxas! I had so much fun with him. Right now, that's all I've been playing. My friend gave Devil May Cry 1 because I was going to buy the 4 one even though I've never played the others before. But I've been lazy and not playing it...Been working too much. I may be finally getting Assassin's Creed! I'll be so happy when that happens... 12/4/07 I'm poor as hell. All the games are so insanely expensive, I want Assassin's Creed so badly!! So I got a bunch of PS2 games cause I had a Gamecube before. A freaking GAMECUBE. There are NO good games out for that system!! Kingdom Hearts is amazing, as is Final Fantasy X. I missed out on so many games just cause of my stupid brother... I'm SO INSANELY STUCK on Riku. Can ANYONE give me some advice to beat him nice and easy?? Really would appreciate it. 9/16/07 Well, using my hard earned money, I got the PS3 and at the time, there were no games that interested me so I got Genji Days of the Blade cause it had fighting and swords and awesome characters. It is by far the most annoying game I've ever played in all my years. Never have I wanted to kill a boss so badly. I've fought against them at least 5 times before I could defeat them cause, they kept on coming back!! They kept on coming back in these huge forms with full health and packing a bigger punch... But! Finally today on September 16, 2007 I've finally killed the boss lady and I feel happy. I've never yelled at the TV so much...so if you're weird and like the awesome costumes and amazing music like me, this would be a good game for you. But beware that the boss people are extremely annoying, except for the pervy guy, can't remember his name. Stories: Blood Soaked Angel Chapters: 3 She was falling. Her wings couldn't hold her up anymore. When the darkness was about to consume her, he caught her. But there was too much blood. It was everywhere. She wondered if he could take it. Thanks for the Memories Chapters: 1 She was living in a dream, a shelter. He threatened to destroy it. Her dream world crumbled and she was thurst into a different light. Happy Birthday Complete He watched her death, the moment where it all ended. Story Ideas: Happy Birthday (Probably not the title. Complete version) He was exiled and branded a traitor, disowned by his parents and family. That was 3 years ago. Now he's back. And there's some people waiting for him. (A/N: This complete version will explain a lot. The short version is NOT the ending.) Her Revenge He broke her, destroyed her, tore her apart. Now she's getting payback. (A/N: Short story I wrote really quickly for Creative Writing to be submitted to Lit Mag. I've got to revise it a bit.) |