luisthepoet
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Joined 08-05-07, id: 577928
Author has written 20 stories for General, Life, Friendship, Politics, Family, and Love.

Name: Luis Lopez

Age: 17

Background:

I write what I am inspired to show to the world. I write poetry in all kinds of genres, both about what i feel and other things that are only fantasy. People say that my writing is sometimes so realistic that they think that I feel the horrible and sad thoughts that I write down in my poetry. Sometimes i do, and sometimes i don't. I do not always write from experience; I am only a messenger, and I send the message that God wishes me to send.

This profile was started by my friend Doris (http://www.fictionpress.com/~ssharry) so that I can show my poetry and have it copy writ. Hopefully when I have enough I will make a poetry book that you can buy from me. I don't like destructive criticism and will ignore you if you send me messages with stupid things like "omg u r a dum ass i h8 u" because responding would mean i am as "dum" as you said I am and I will not stoop down to that level.

please enjoy my poetry and send me comments,

Luis

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Wolf reviews
Through the eyes of a wolf
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8/10/2007 - Complete
Why Am I Like This?
I don’t know what I did wrong, my heart has an empty song, but there is one thing why I can not sing, is that my heart is full of sadness,
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 191 - Published: 8/10/2007 - Complete
The Walking Dame
When we walk along a path, I want to hear your angelic voice laugh.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 81 - Published: 8/10/2007 - Complete
The Eagle reviews
As I fly through the daylight sky, I can see many that can’t fly.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 364 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/10/2007 - Complete
Sunset Romance
No one can stop a sunset, But I will for my love with any powerful net
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 127 - Published: 8/10/2007 - Complete
Retaliation
my heart was broken from all your destruction,and you will see my harmful retaliation.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 183 - Published: 8/10/2007 - Complete
The Friendship Duet
These are two poems together, Real Friends and AMIGOS.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 219 - Published: 8/10/2007 - Complete
My Moonlight Sonata
We were destined to be one flesh, mind, and body, Like the beautiful eyes that never looses its heavenly glow
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 125 - Published: 8/10/2007 - Complete
My Harsh Life
I am always treated like a rat
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 181 - Published: 8/10/2007 - Complete
Love, Courage and Hope
In the world that is dying, From all its ambition for dividing, Many forgot the qualities that made this place great, Love, Courage, and Hope, are the qualities that made
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 219 - Published: 8/10/2007 - Complete
Love and Greif
That love that I felt for you is fading slowly, And I am starting to become more lonely.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 136 - Published: 8/10/2007 - Complete
Humiliation
In that point in time, people should realize how the victim feels when humiliated many factors lead himher to embarrassment
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 159 - Published: 8/10/2007 - Complete
Here is Love Tonight
until the morning sunlight, we will still be together next moonlight
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Published: 8/10/2007 - Complete
Family
a hole of emptiness of resentment and abandonment
Poetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Published: 8/10/2007 - Complete
Depression
Only Destiny and God can help me from this awful curse
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 72 - Published: 8/10/2007 - Complete
Delta Friendship
As my heart begins to change from this drastic moment,I will change and try again to make our friendship decent,we should both make our hearts sanctify,as well as to purify,so we can become real friends,and play our role until the end.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 248 - Published: 8/10/2007 - Complete
Capitalism reviews
Exploited for their pleasure, to ensure their treasure, from my sweat and strength
Poetry: Politics - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 137 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/10/2007 - Complete
Best Friends
Best friends are people who care about you in many ways,
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 91 - Published: 8/10/2007 - Complete
Being In Light
Shadowed by light, within its might creating joy and happiness, throughout the world of emptiness
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 70 - Published: 8/10/2007 - Complete
Afflicted
there is someone who can untangle the lives of many who are in constriction, with affliction and hatred.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 142 - Published: 8/10/2007 - Complete
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