Discipulus
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Joined 10-16-07, id: 585785, Profile Updated: 01-30-14
Author has written 4 stories for Fantasy, and Sci-Fi.

Reviews? Need reviews for your stories? I would be more than happy to trade reviews with anyone who drops by my page. I try to only leave well thought out and proper critiques when I read stories. Need reviews? Need ideas and feedback on your writings? Then lets start... Review trading! Because let's face it... Whether your an experienced writer or a new one, we all need love right?

StopthePress Monthly Newsletter! Here's a link to the Fictionpress page where you can find info about their monthly newletters. Everyone would appreciate feedback and/or participation.

You may also find me on Fictionpress' sister site fanfiction as the same pen name, there is a lot to read and I would love some more reviews and tips on how I can write better. Here's the link.

Pimpspace! -- This space is dedicated to excellent writers that I feel, warrant some light for those that view my profile. (All nine of you) Rose7 is an amazing writer that many, including myself, could learn a lot from. She really feels the words as she "pens" them out. Heatless Flame does action very well. His simple narrative holds a lot of liquid fluidity to it. Each sentence leads you nicely into the next. Disturblyis also quite good. My favorite from him is his superhero story. Lastly I'd have to say that I am one of my favoritewriters as well, despite the love/hate relationship I have. twitch

To those that place reviews, or send PMs, about my stories I greatly appreciate it! It's like a boost of confidence to keep going, thanks to all that have reviewed my stories thus far. Check out Stop the Press on here for writing tips, hilarious articles and a writing challenge!

What else? I like to read action/adventure and even some romance but what I love most is a purpose-filled writing style that has goals and is what I'd like to describe as 'romantically intriguing'. After several years of college level English by strict and obsessive teachers I, too, love to look at the wording and formations of sentences; how a story flows and what the writer's vision feels like to me as I travel their imagination.


Currently Reading -- Gotrek And Felix: The First Omnibus - An awsome warhammer 40k novel. Have a writer you think it awsome? Send me a message with the writers name and book so I can check them out!


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Blade of Baikon by Heatless Flame reviews
His Blade. A group of the most deadly law enforcer assassins ever seen. Or perhaps never seen, for their skills in the shadows are legendary. Is an internal war enough to destroy them?
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 6 - Words: 14,800 - Reviews: 31 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 9 - Updated: 3/1/2008 - Published: 2/2/2008
Roses and Wine by Micheal Lee reviews
An ordinary boy, Cloud Strife attempts to be one of the best soldiers in his Academy with the help of his best friend Raphael only to come across some unwanted attention from his idol, General Sephiroth. Read and Review, please!
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 2 - Words: 8,901 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 2/12/2008 - Published: 2/11/2008
The Dragon Born Rite by Trinity Dragon reviews
I went into my shell, I'm not sure how long ago. Now I sit and wait, wondering when it will be over, meditating on the things of life. Short fiction.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 745 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/14/2007 - Complete
Black Arrow Chronicles: Book 1 by Heatless Flame reviews
Glaze, a lone assassin, is accused of betraying the Resistance. Already the top enemy against the Empire, who will he side with? The one who he hates or the ones who betrayed him?
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,706 - Reviews: 15 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 11/11/2007 - Published: 10/11/2007
safety smarts by The Random Witness reviews
a bucket followed me home today
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 38 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/17/2007 - Complete
A Guide to Action Scenes by Heatless Flame reviews
This is a basic guide to writing an action scene, may it be actual pbattle, verbal, or anything such. This is NOT a full guide, and I suggest several others that can be found in my C2, Helpful Writing Guides.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,450 - Reviews: 34 - Favs: 20 - Follows: 2 - Published: 10/6/2007 - Complete
Villains by Stop The Press reviews
Stop the Press, Issue 4. A monthly collection of thoughts and useful information for writers and readers struggling with ideas or lack of.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Tragedy/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,803 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/2/2007 - Complete
The Living Dead by Torn and Tattered reviews
Taken down for re-editing.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 57 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/17/2006
Writing with Diversity by Eyetk reviews
[Complete] You've got a wonderful plot, and well developed, intriguing characters, but you're still striving to make your work better. Perhaps this can help!
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 7 - Words: 7,090 - Reviews: 106 - Favs: 96 - Follows: 8 - Updated: 6/28/2005 - Published: 6/18/2005 - Complete
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Death of the Elements
The Magus move against the people, time reaches onward in a sea of loops, and one man is stuck with the fate of the world in his hands. Memory of an Avatar begins here!
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,829 - Published: 2/5/2008
Scourge of Lodus reviews
After the death of the last Phoenix King, peace held the fabric of the country together. Desires now push against destiny as The Six rise again.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,562 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 11/21/2007
Champions of New Brooklyn reviews
Crime Lords spread their arms to embrace the city with their influence. As Heros struggle against the sinking of New Brooklyn, forces of revenge fade in from the shadows.
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,839 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11/20/2007
The Kingmaker reviews
The first among the Memories of Lodus series.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 2 - Words: 4,330 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 10/27/2007 - Published: 10/19/2007