Tortured Breath
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Joined 12-14-07, id: 592419, Profile Updated: 02-09-10
Author has written 4 stories for Mystery, Romance, General, and Biography.

Mmmmk... where to begin and where to end...

I know that most people don't read the profiles, especially before they read the stories...
Why then do people put things about their stories in there profiles?
Especially when they are relevant to the plot, or characters?
Their logic escapes me...

I hate long profiles that carry on f...o...r...e...v...e...r
Let me read your stories without the fluff...
Not leaving out the fact that the word "fluff" in and of itself is amazing.

I don't get along with my parents.
I love my little brother to death.
My husband is my rock and the love of my life.

Freedom.

I have trouble with sympathizing.
I feel more like people are just complaining.
Look at what you still have.

Choppy sentences can make good writing.
But they do not make up for a bad writing form...
No matter the excuses you make...
So don't give me that shit.

Honestly...

I am an insomniac...
For one reason or another...

I am a hopeless romantic.
Living with someone is amazing.
Falling asleep in their arms is ten million times better.

I am a huge fan of parties...

I x3 anything with mango in it.

I am a writer and want to be critiqued.
Returning the favor is necessary.

Anyone can write poetry.
It takes a special person to bring fiction to full light.


"I'm selfish, impatient, and little insecure. I make mistakes, I am out of control, and at times hard to handle, but if you can't handle me at my worst, then you sure as hell don't deserve me at me best."

~M. Monroe


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Gray's Lock by Thomas Heureux reviews
THERE are many secrets in this world. Discover one of them. UNFINISHED
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 449 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Published: 2/9/2010
insert feeling here by lonely.dancer reviews
Is it better to feel pain, or nothing at all? A story of love, loss, and struggling to accept the two.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 14 - Words: 15,791 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 4 - Published: 10/6/2009 - Complete
Beyond the Reflection by Elavielle reviews
A bad date leads to an even worse situation for Taline. A visit to the circus, throws her into an unknown world and right into a prince's bedroom. An 'occupied' bedroom...
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 9 - Words: 22,060 - Reviews: 108 - Favs: 48 - Follows: 95 - Updated: 4/30/2008 - Published: 12/14/2007
fragile by adsaige reviews
she belonged to another, and still i know she is mine. sad, romantic tale
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,411 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 2 - Published: 1/27/2008
Hit the Road by Lieutenant Violet reviews
Mags wakes to a call that leads her to find her boyfriend in bed with another girl. When she jets off to Europe with her best friend, Carter, what will happen?
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 3 - Words: 3,870 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 7 - Updated: 12/16/2007 - Published: 12/14/2007
Bride of the Immortal by Morikumo reviews
It is a myth all Immortals scorn: that there is, for each, one woman...a Bride whom they will forever crave. Unfortunately, it isn't a myth. And human Sophie Paul is about to find that out firsthand. Rated M. :Discontinued:
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Fantasy/Supernatural - Chapters: 11 - Words: 64,488 - Reviews: 748 - Favs: 804 - Follows: 869 - Updated: 9/24/2007 - Published: 10/29/2006
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MY WINGS WERE LONG BROKEN reviews
Brielle's mind wants nothing from him but her body wants everything. Geoffrey returns the favor three fold in his visits to her every night. She is locked away to keep her from the world, all to himself. But she knows she is expendable...who will save her
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Romance/Fantasy - Chapters: 8 - Words: 10,612 - Reviews: 49 - Favs: 14 - Follows: 37 - Updated: 2/9/2010 - Published: 12/20/2007
YOUR LITTLE GIRL reviews
Yes. Yes. Mother. Father. I did what you never thought I could do. I moved on. At the tender age of seventeen I removed myself from a situation that most people now gaze upon as "normal." Sure. Well it was not normal for me. To say that least that is...
Fiction: Biography - Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,014 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Published: 5/11/2008 - Complete
TO BE LEFT IN SILENCE, AGAIN reviews
There is an old tricycle sitting in our backyard. One of the older kinds with the red and white paint, chipped and rusted, the white streamers hanging from the handlebars, dirty and torn. Papa got it for me and my baby sister. . . before she died.
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,235 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/13/2008 - Complete
LIKE MY BROTHER'S AND SISTERS reviews
I used to have nine brother's and sisters... They were all older than me, so I guess that makes me the youngest... But I don't have that many brothers and sisters anymore. Three have left and they're never coming back...
Fiction: Mystery - Rated: T - English - Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,343 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 4 - Published: 12/20/2007 - Complete
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