ValenceDeatrick
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Joined 01-21-08, id: 596889, Profile Updated: 08-12-15
Author has written 4 stories for Romance.

Name: Valence Deatrick (I finally decided on my OFFICIAL pen name XD)

Age: 20

I will probably write mostly just Yaoi (M/M, Slash, Homosexual, etc), but I also do some Yuri (F/F, Lesbian, etc) and F/M stuff.

Every one of my stories I pour my heart and soul into so if you are just gonna flame me, GO AWAY. Flaming and Constructive Criticism are different. The biggest difference being I like the latter and will hate people who post the former. Anyways, so all of these are Copyrights of mine. They belong to no one but me, and I would greatly appreciate it if no one stole them, because I love them.

Alright, well, I (seriously) doubt if anyone even reads this profile, but on the off chance that someone does, I'll say this: I'm still rewriting and reorganizing everything... But I want to know if the things I write are even liked. And fictionpress is the best place for original stories.

Small Talk is still being rewritten, BUT I'll go ahead and post the rewrite. The rewrite is a thousand times better I think. :3 (I'd post the original, but it says you're not supposed to post the same thing multiple times, and while they are VERY different in a lot of ways, they are still the same story... So if you're interested in the COMPLETED, slightly crappy version of Small Talk, feel free to PM me.)

Please enjoy.

(8/12/15) I'm just gonna apologize about the Alpha King because I'm a failure as a human being sometimes and I'm trying NOT to re-write it before it's finished. lol. I figured out a lot about the universe and such it's set in... so a lot has changed... but I want to finish this version first. I'll be trying to finish it soon... Sorry and thanks for the patience! As for Small Talk, I forgot I had that laying around, I'll definitely get to work on that too (I think I already have some of the next chapter finished, or at least started). Um... I wrote some porn (Scent of Coconut, this is also posted on tumblr) to let off steam and to get used to my new tablet's keyboard (obviously, I still need to get used to it, because I made so many mistakes.) Also, I plan to maybe try and doodle some of the characters at some point (I'm an awful artist though, so meh) and post them on my tumblr. When I get around to that, I'll make a note on here... I MAY or may not post the finished 'Prelude' for my story 'Journey through Darkness' (originally this was supposed to be the 'Prologue' for the book and just one chapter but by the time it was hitting about 80 pages written excluding some scenes and cutting others short, I figured making it into it's own little short story might be better.) Anyway, I'll figure it out after it's been typed up and cleaned so it's not a silly mess.

Thanks for everything! Sorry I can't seem to focus on anything.

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My Wonderful Life by Complicated Addiction reviews
COMPLETE! He's the jackass of my high school. The richest, the most arrogant egotistical guy I have ever met... My house burnt down and now I'm living with him. Someone shoot HIM please!
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 3 - Words: 5,383 - Reviews: 360 - Favs: 313 - Follows: 130 - Updated: 6/4/2009 - Published: 9/1/2007 - Complete
His Touch by GiraffeAtePenguin reviews
Matty always blended in, melded himself into the background. He's always protected himself. Now Jade has come along, bringing so many dangers. Even reserved, cautious Matthew can't resist Jade's abundant charms. M/M Rated for language
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 5 - Words: 9,970 - Reviews: 13 - Favs: 10 - Follows: 6 - Updated: 3/27/2008 - Published: 3/14/2008
Act III by Asenka.N.Chernyaeva reviews
[Slash, completed, under revision] Two boys. The first, Max Kennedy: Soccer forward and elite college socialite. The second, Eddie Calhoun: Band nerd. It will be a battle of the wills and the pills, and it will change their lives forever. Look out!
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 23 - Words: 69,770 - Reviews: 532 - Favs: 475 - Follows: 41 - Updated: 6/26/2006 - Published: 2/7/2006 - Complete
Take Me From This Pain, Brian's story by Esquirella reviews
Completed. MM Slash. BE WARNED! Abuse, mentions rape. Matt is a bully and Brian is his target. But one day Matt finds out something that changes their relationship forever. Can he save Brian from his pain, or is he already lost? Chap 40: Daddy dearest.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 40 - Words: 81,794 - Reviews: 1008 - Favs: 588 - Follows: 101 - Updated: 5/10/2005 - Published: 3/11/2004 - Complete
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Scent of Coconut reviews
[M/M; Explicit; One-Shot?] "Hello," he said, his voice a husky whisper. It caressed my skin like something too rough to be gentle but just smooth enough to be comfortable. I couldn't tell if that was what turned me on, or if it was the warm coconut scent that assaulted my senses. It was intoxicating.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Romance/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,132 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 2 - Published: 8/12 - Complete
The Alpha King reviews
[ALPHA/BETA/OMEGA DYNAMICS; M-PREG.; M/M] The world went to hell, but it was improving thanks to the Neorians. Rumors about these aliens spread like wild fire. Derek didn't care, he had a life to better. Of course, what can he do when he's offered up to the Neorian's new king for the sake of a peace treaty? (Sorry, I'm bad at summaries. :/ )
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Romance/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 6 - Words: 15,317 - Reviews: 20 - Favs: 29 - Follows: 56 - Updated: 3/1 - Published: 7/17/2014
Small Talk Original reviews
[M/M - Explicit Sexual Content - Etc. Etc.] This is the original version of Small Talk. I'm working on the rewrite, but I figured, that it'd be nice to have a complete story up (even though it's going through some big changes). When I finish the rewrite, I'll remove this version. Until then, enjoy my five chapter one-shot version of Kosuke's and Dorian's story.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 9,151 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 1 - Published: 8/21/2014 - Complete
Small Talk reviews
[Re-Write][M/M] Kosuke has just moved back to the United States from Japan to start college at MTSU. However, school hasn't even started when he meets his first roadblock: Dorian, his new roommate at the on-campus apartments. Dorian is an open homosexual who is not shy about it. And Kosuke is JUST his type. Of course... anything can happen. (Sorry, I'm so bad at summaries. Y.Y)
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,248 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 6 - Published: 7/17/2014
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