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Joined 03-09-08, id: 602786, Profile Updated: 03-13-09
Author has written 6 stories for Humor, and Love.

I'm back once again! Sorry for my long absences. I am writing again, and also beta reading! I would love to edit your story!

About me... Yay, my favorite subject!

I am a creative teenager with an active imagination and a deep and everlasting love for true fantasy. I love the fabulous and fantastical, especially whole new worlds such as those created in the Inheritance Cycle and The Lord of the Rings. I'll read just about anything though (even boring real-life stories) if they are really good.

Fav Stories: Harry Potter Series, Twilight Series, Inheritance Cycle, Lord of the Rings, Artemis Fowl Series, Gail Carson Levine books, Tennis Shoes Adventure Series, Pride and Prejudice, and the Clique books (they are a lot better than they seem.)

Music: On my Sony Walkman I am now listening to Kelly Clarkson, Taylor Swift, The All-American Rejects, Cute is What We Aim For, Coldplay, Reliant K, and Superchick.

Movies: The classic Disney Movies (Aladdin, Little Mermaid, Lion King, Beauty and the Beast) Jane Austen movies, and Princess Movies of every kind, National Treasure (one and two), Eagle Eye, the Chronicles of Narnia, and Lord of the Rings.

Editing style: I am a huge grammar freak and find the littlest punctuation errors. PLEASE point out any errors you may see on this page or in any of my stories!

Now about me personally... hmm... well I'm the oldest of five (an olympic feat let me tell ya) a Mormon (aka Latter-day Saint or LDS or-my favorite-"dang marmen") like several others on this site (go cougars), a teenager (as said above), and a female (duh, MS. critic.)

My Stories: Written and Imaginary

I have five stories up. All are very short and quite silly (except for the poem which I actually worked hard on) but I enjoyed writing them. Nothing new so far on here, but in a little while Double AA and I will (hopefully) have a fanfiction account, and we'll see what happens there! Stay tuned for some interesting stories I hope to have up soon on here!



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The Boy reviews
Its the story of a boy. A boy destined to save the world. My siblings and I produced this story one day. I'm not sure where it came from, but it sure was fun. Sit back and prepare to laugh your head off. Just don't take it too seriously
Fiction: Humor - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Adventure - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,428 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 8/17/2009 - Published: 7/27/2009
The Happy Life of Hopper reviews
Sick of being treated like he and his people were not important, Hopper decides to take the fate of his people into his own paws.
Fiction: Humor - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 976 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8/26/2008
The Story of Umm reviews
The first in a series of the magical adventures of Jenny Craig and her good friend Umm.
Fiction: Humor - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 825 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 8/26/2008
Movie Notes reviews
A humorous look at what one person gets out of a second-hand description of a story.
Fiction: Humor - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 437 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 5/17/2008 - Complete
Bond of Love reviews
The love between two sisters is strong, strong enough to bring light to the entire world, but is it enough to destroy the ultimate Evil and overcome the cold grasp of Death?
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Family - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,018 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 5/9/2008 - Published: 3/18/2008
The Cookie Chronicles:The Life of a Cookie reviews
This story shows what goes on in the head of a cookie as it thinks of its life before, after, and during consumption, and makes the reader wonder, what is the point of it all?
Fiction: Humor - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 437 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 3/15/2008 - Complete