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Author has written 20 stories for Horror, General, Fantasy, Humor, Supernatural, Sci-Fi, Action, and Spiritual.

For those of you who don't know me, I'm a writer by the same ID on, striving to better my skills as a hopeful author while looking for a story that I can enjoy writing in addition to having a solid plot line with good characters. I've recently decided to quit fanfiction and start working on original fiction full time. In spite of this, I am available for communication on both sites for those that want to talk.

To date, the purpose of this account is to post work that I have that didn't make the cut or to test out new ideas as I get them. All thoughts on them, be it in plot, development (character and story), grammar, and other criticism are welcome so that I may improve. Future updates to stories will vary depending on how much material I have for it, whether or not I wish to continue it, and what version the story is (as some have two to three drafts, necessitating some careful looking through in some cases).

I hope that you will enjoy my work, and that I can provide you with an enjoyable story.




Anonymous Reviews for: Blood Under any Morning Star, chapter 1

Guest: I'll see what I can do. Thanks for the review.

Anonymous Reviews for: The M Legacy: Masks, chapter 30

Type: Heh. Maybe Adam meant Monique and maybe he didn't. Only time will tell. ;P

Romana Pax is but one unseen flaw, and Adam did mean other things, some of which was hinted at during Jamie's 'surgery'. ;P Teruo may also be an unseen flaw.

I may be biased, but I'm going to say that the pacing is faster. The second draft, Icon, didn't even reach the halfway point at 36 chapters with the Romana Pax plot, while the third draft finished it off in 30. Don't know how much world building was sacrificed (if at all), but Jamie and Kira's relationship definitely suffered as a result. I'll be looking to correct that in the fourth draft, though it might be something that will likely be expanded on in the sequel.

No worries. Your grammar was perfectly readable and your review is very helpful. Thanks for taking the time to read my story and providing some thoughts. :)

Anonymous Reviews for: The M Legacy: Masks, chapter 30

Type: Good wow? Bad wow? Either way, thanks for the review.

Anonymous Reviews for: The M Legacy: Masks, chapter 24

Type: Sure seems that way. Thanks for the review.

Anonymous Reviews for: Blood Under any Morning Star, chapter 1

Willfullcookie: Glad I could surprise you. Thanks for the review. :)

Anonymous Reviews for: The M Legacy, chapter 18

Guest: Thanks for the review.

Anonymous Reviews for: The M Legacy, chapter 16

Type: Guess we'll see what Jamie is capable of as the story develops. :P

At the moment I don't want to give the impression that anyone is really a 'bad guy'. They all have their reasons for doing things; some of which seem like good reasons to them in their own minds. It will be questionable of course, but that's politics.

Weird. I could have sworn that I mentioned how old Jamie and Kira are in earlier chapters. I'll have to go back through again and double check. At the very least it's implied that they're both in middle school.

Nah, this is a completely different Planet Pol from the one in the previous draft. This one is more like a UN organization whereas the CHC is more local.

Glad you're starting to enjoy the story, and thanks for the review. :)


Anonymous Reviews for: The M Legacy, chapter 11


I don’t mind that you were frustrated. After all, enjoying a story is an emotional investment and to have it dropped while at an interesting point, as you said, is problematic. For me though, it was taking too long to get where I wanted the story to be, and some of the plot points and characters weren’t mature enough in their development to justify their inclusion (such as Adam Bishop and even Jamie and Kira to a lesser extent). Additionally, some bits either refused to move, or went in the wrong direction that distracted from the main plot for too long (such as the final scene I left off at). That is a bit sloppy on my part and I needed to rework things. Trust me, when it took as long as I did to get where I should have been chapters and chapters ago in Icon—even factoring in subplots and character development—I’m doing something wrong.

I can agree with you that time skips are a bit annoying (not much of a fan of them myself), but for me it helped speed things up, which was crucial to the pacing (note, pacing isn’t just day-by-day events, it’s the speed at which those events move without being jarring in their rapidity, or overstaying their welcome) and smoothing out various plot bumps in the road. It also freed me up to explore some aspects of the characters. As you noted, Jamie and Kira were both brought into the story more, which was a bit harder to do in the previous story (at chapter 31 I still did not have a full grasp on Jamie’s character or how to properly include any clues into the story—not a good sign).

Your grammar and ranting looked fine to me, so no worries. XD It was also an excellent review, thank you. :)


Anonymous Reviews for: Icon, chapter 36

Type: Icon is currently being rewritten under the story The M Legacy: Masks. All further updates will be there. Thanks for the review.

Anonymous Reviews for: Icon, chapter 27

Guest: Thanks for catching the mistakes. I thought I was thorough about my edits before uploading but clearly that was not the case. And no, the 'Dai' nickname was not intentional. Sorry about that, and thanks again for catching it. Thanks for the review.

Anonymous Reviews for: Hero Realm, chapter 13

Guest: Haha. In all honesty there's a lot about this story that's very prototype. A lot of the concepts and ideas weren't very well nailed down, which explains a great deal of its problems and plot juggling (I have a habit of doing multiple plots at once). Presently I'm working on a streamlined version on titled 'Icon'.

The comic book allusions are very purposeful, so I'm glad you caught the nod to Spiderman. Once I become a bit more settled with my style and back to writing regularly I'll come back to this version and see if I can't straighten it out some. Until then, thanks for the review. :)

Falling Feathers by Ruki44 reviews
Death is nothing but a cruel joke. Two souls intertwined for all of eternity are a testament to that. Angel and demon. Friend and foe. Light and darkness. Glimpse through the moments of time of these two tortured souls.
Fiction: Supernatural - Rated: T - English - Spiritual/Tragedy - Chapters: 3 - Words: 4,610 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 1/5/2012 - Published: 10/31/2011
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The Crow's Eye
He awoke after the end of a terrible disaster, not knowing where he was or who he was. Now on the run, he hopes to find out just what happened. Unfortunately, the truth is miles away in the opposite direction, and the disaster has caught the attention of a power that would seek to use it and him to its own ends.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 2 - Words: 6,286 - Updated: 1/7 - Published: 1/4
The Aegis of M
In an undreamt Age of Miracles, the kingdom of Albion stands at a crossroads. As rumors of war reach their borders the search begins for one, a hero born from legend, who can protect civilization from destruction. The Hero of a Thousand Faces. The M.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure - Chapters: 2 - Words: 4,718 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 4/2/2014 - Published: 3/26/2014
Back Forward reviews
Richard was supposed to be a normal guy, until he found out he was dead. His 'normal' life ended far sooner than expected...
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: K+ - English - Sci-Fi/Mystery - Chapters: 6 - Words: 4,452 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 1/7/2014 - Published: 12/29/2013
Arthen Age: The Dreams of Gods
That first light of creation; that first breath that set the stars in order. Fae destroy for it and men die for it. Those that seek the light do so at their own peril, for it shall be their unmaking. In the last days of an age, the light comes to the world and destruction brings new life.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 2 - Words: 6,343 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 12/15/2013 - Published: 12/8/2013
The M Legacy: Masks reviews
"The world forces me to be something I am not. The universe demands that I be what I am. No matter where I go, I am a mask."
Fiction: Action - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 30 - Words: 111,082 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 11 - Follows: 7 - Updated: 11/16/2013 - Published: 4/8/2013 - Complete
That Last Step
Our First Steps on an alien world are our last.
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: K - English - Sci-Fi - Chapters: 1 - Words: 404 - Published: 10/4/2013 - Complete
Blood Under any Morning Star reviews
Having to live in a new place is never an easy transition, especially when one is forced to give up their humanity as well…
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: K+ - English - Sci-Fi/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,003 - Reviews: 4 - Follows: 1 - Published: 9/14/2013
Icon reviews
Fears of the Dark Age rapidly approaches. The old champions are lost; vanished amidst a sea of fear and distrust. New heroes must take up arms. They must rise and become the new defenders of the Age; the bearers of courage. The symbols. The...icon. Rise, and be true. Hero Realm rewrite. Being rewritten under story titled 'The M Legacy: Masks'.
Fiction: Action - Rated: K+ - English - Sci-Fi/Fantasy - Chapters: 36 - Words: 138,792 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 8 - Updated: 3/9/2013 - Published: 8/28/2012
Hero Realm reviews
Adam was living a normal life, and wanted it to continue staying that way. Too bad the world has different plans. In the shadow of an Age, the world is about to change. The heroes must return.
Fiction: Action - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 13 - Words: 43,665 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 6 - Updated: 6/5/2012 - Published: 2/21/2012
The First Word
Welcome to Noah's, where He knows your name.
Fiction: Spiritual - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,089 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/17/2012
Autumn Fall: All Hallows World reviews
I am the Gateway. I can open every door that exists. What doors? Death. Life. The past. Any door you want. I can take you down any path, any destiny. Any dream. Only, it's no longer the dream I thought it was. Now the person who saved me wants me dead.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 14 - Words: 54,665 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 4 - Updated: 2/19/2012 - Published: 11/17/2011
The Atlas Puzzle reviews
"I've been given something important. Something powerful. On one hand I know the 'right' thing to do with it, but on the other...lies."
Fiction: Action - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Suspense - Chapters: 17 - Words: 75,943 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 9/9/2011 - Published: 8/29/2011
My Third Life reviews
Love, romance, action, and adventure are the realm of games now. More and more, they are becoming more real than we are...and I love it. I don't know how the world would be without it..."
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: K - English - Sci-Fi/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,179 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/20/2011
The Observer
The world exists around us as it is because that's how we see it. The world is my playground...and the playground of others as well. Sometimes those others will play and be friendly. Other times, they don't want to share...
Fiction: Action - Rated: K+ - English - Suspense/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 3 - Words: 5,535 - Published: 3/20/2011
The Arc of the Oracle reviews
For as long as Alex Dorn had been alive, life was normal. Wake up, go to school…the life of a typical teenager. Then, one day, he discovers a strange object, and immediately upon touching it, his life loses all normality.
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: K - English - Sci-Fi/Suspense - Chapters: 5 - Words: 21,812 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 2 - Published: 3/20/2011
Halo reviews
An angel finds himself in our world, being raised by humans but having no memory of what his life was like before then. As he searches for answers, another 'exile' arrives on Earth, bringing trouble after her...
Fiction: Supernatural - Rated: K - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 5 - Words: 17,513 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Published: 3/20/2011
Halo: Angel and Demon reviews
Existence is all about learning and growing. For an angel and a demon exiled to Earth to live among humans, they will come to learn about existence and each other.
Fiction: Humor - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Supernatural - Chapters: 2 - Words: 3,006 - Reviews: 2 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 12/28/2009 - Published: 12/27/2009
Fire in the Desert reviews
An order. It all comes down to what a person is told to do. But should a person be complacent, following those orders to the end even if they happen to be wrong? how far down the road will our actions echo? For every action, there is an opposite reaction.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,006 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/24/2009
Siera reviews
Adam is your regular middleschool kid writing a story. But when the story starts to take on a life of its own he must search for the line between reality...and fantasy.
Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Supernatural/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 838 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 2 - Published: 9/7/2008
Haunting Memories reviews
For everything there is a price and all things must end. As an old man looks back upon his past,reminiscing about times long gone, the events of his past catch up to him. All things must end, and for everything there is a price...
Fiction: Horror - Rated: K - English - Horror/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,115 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/5/2008 - Complete
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