Author has written 1 story for Fantasy.
Gender: Male (with an "anima" consisting of a love of cooking, fancy for creative writing, and being emotional)
Cerebral Alignment: Right Hemisphere
Interests & Favorite Activities: cats, drawing, painting, video games, hanging out with friends, riding ATVs, cooking, sleeping, traveling, going to amusement parks, playing pokèmon cards, writing stories, ice-blocking, broom-ball, LARPing, plays, musicals, and playing with my cat
I like Harry Potter and Star Wars a lot. And... I absolutely love the Disney Channel.
Favorite Shows: The Suite Life of Zack and Cody (but it's over T_T), The Simpsons, Family Guy, Phineas and Ferb, Pokèmon, Hannah Montana, The Office, House, and My Name is Earl. I also am a fan of reality television shows on ABC and Fox.
Favorite Books: Harry Potter (series), Jane Eyre, Hamlet, A Separate Peace, The Five People You Meet in Heaven, The Stranger, A Doll's House, Tartuffe, and The Giver
The SN, Master Judgment, does not describe my personality. The name is a pokèmon reference.
I have written two stories. However, Cat Wind is the only one posted on this site. This story was extracted from my 8th grade journal, and I have edited it for better flow ever since.
I really want to know what readers think of my work. Please criticize to your heart's content! Suggestions are also welcome.
Updates: Beta reader-Eragon2000, Still working to improve the prologue, Currently considering suggestions and modifying the story accordingly; school starts Aug. 24 (probably means I'll be off for a while)
ABOUT MY STORY
Purpose: Entertain, Have audience establish pathos with the main character(s), Set a tone, Imply a couple themes, Challenge readers' minds, and (although this might change) have readers have a chance to decide the fate of the main characters.
Thematic Elements: The Strong Bond of Friendship, The Destruction of Innocence, Courage, Coping with Grief or Loss
Symbols: Bastet, Anubis, Gold, Water/Fountain, Red, White, Backpack, Weapons, Stairs
Thank you for all of your comments. I have considered them profoundly and modified accordingly. I'll see what I can do to improve the story some more.