Master Judgment
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Joined 07-28-08, id: 623833, Profile Updated: 01-15-09
Author has written 1 story for Fantasy.

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Gender: Male (with an "anima" consisting of a love of cooking, fancy for creative writing, and being emotional)

Cerebral Alignment: Right Hemisphere

Interests & Favorite Activities: cats, drawing, painting, video games, hanging out with friends, riding ATVs, cooking, sleeping, traveling, going to amusement parks, playing pokèmon cards, writing stories, ice-blocking, broom-ball, LARPing, plays, musicals, and playing with my cat

I like Harry Potter and Star Wars a lot. And... I absolutely love the Disney Channel.

Favorite Shows: The Suite Life of Zack and Cody (but it's over T_T), The Simpsons, Family Guy, Phineas and Ferb, Pokèmon, Hannah Montana, The Office, House, and My Name is Earl. I also am a fan of reality television shows on ABC and Fox.

Favorite Books: Harry Potter (series), Jane Eyre, Hamlet, A Separate Peace, The Five People You Meet in Heaven, The Stranger, A Doll's House, Tartuffe, and The Giver

The SN, Master Judgment, does not describe my personality. The name is a pokèmon reference.

I have written two stories. However, Cat Wind is the only one posted on this site. This story was extracted from my 8th grade journal, and I have edited it for better flow ever since.

I really want to know what readers think of my work. Please criticize to your heart's content! Suggestions are also welcome.

Updates: Beta reader-Eragon2000, Still working to improve the prologue, Currently considering suggestions and modifying the story accordingly; school starts Aug. 24 (probably means I'll be off for a while)

ABOUT MY STORY

Purpose: Entertain, Have audience establish pathos with the main character(s), Set a tone, Imply a couple themes, Challenge readers' minds, and (although this might change) have readers have a chance to decide the fate of the main characters.

Thematic Elements: The Strong Bond of Friendship, The Destruction of Innocence, Courage, Coping with Grief or Loss

Symbols: Bastet, Anubis, Gold, Water/Fountain, Red, White, Backpack, Weapons, Stairs


Dear reviewers,

Thank you for all of your comments. I have considered them profoundly and modified accordingly. I'll see what I can do to improve the story some more.

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Ashes of a Phoenix by Celestial Angel reviews
As the Matriarch, Gwen leads the fight to rid the world of vampires. Now in order to fulfill her destiny to save mankind, she'll have to work together with one of them. Blood made them enemies, circumstances made them allies, but fate made them lovers...
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Adventure - Chapters: 2 - Words: 7,574 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 8 - Updated: 8/6/2008 - Published: 8/2/2008
The Golden Scepter by GenevievePlz reviews
Orloh, an elf, & Kea, a mere mortal meet in a dangerous wood after her escaping from slavery. Kea is enthralled by his magic, but they soon find out that the Power she has is far stronger than his. The thing is- she doesn't know it yet. But evil does.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Supernatural - Chapters: 4 - Words: 4,954 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 8/6/2008 - Published: 8/5/2008
Sail Across the Sky by Kagerou453 reviews
Paige is a young lady who happens to catch the eye of the prince...until she decides that she hates cliches as much as anyone. She just never knew that running away involved being stalked by a thief, a bard, and an overprotective elven knight...
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 3 - Words: 13,065 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 6 - Updated: 10/29/2007 - Published: 8/4/2007
Cat Wind reviews
A girl discovers strange things happening at her school when a substitute arrives. Her best friend soon becomes a part of these atrocities. This story starts in Media Res. Read the prologue first.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Horror/Fantasy - Chapters: 11 - Words: 20,862 - Reviews: 22 - Updated: 4/17/2009 - Published: 7/31/2008 - Complete