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Joined 08-28-08, id: 628500, Profile Updated: 10-22-13
Author has written 7 stories for Thriller, Horror, and Young Adult.

Name: Hilma Thomas

Date of Birth: June 1, 1992

My Hobbies: Reading, Writing Stories, Playing Video Games, Listening To Music, Drawing/Sketching, Sewing, Crotcheting and Playing VOlleyball

My Current Titled Complete stories:

"Sweetest of Escapes"

"A Twist Of Fate"

"Drastic Measures"

"Perfect Scene"


My Current Titled In-Progress stories:

"Life Encounter"

"First Time Around"


please feel free to read and review

i'd deeply appreciate it

I'm have made up my mind to tread unfamiliar waters experiment with beta reading. I multitask very well and i'm adept at helping others. I am well practiced in the English language and have an eye for grammar I can also help with proper sentence constructions and such. If you need a beta reader just hit me up.

I've found new love in refreshing the Just In stories and reading those new outputs written by those fresh-faces. :-) what i like most about that, seeing how the comments grows both the story and the writer, and watching that progress from the budding stages. So if you have a new story and want some feedback, hit me up :-)

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Let's Play a Game by Crimson Melody01 reviews
When we were young, some of us had our own imaginary friends who we'd talk to and play with but we tend to forget them as we grow older. Nina Roosevelt was one of those kids. She didn't have much friends as a child so she pretty much spent most of her time cooped up in her room, talking to her imaginary friend. But what if that imaginary friend isn't so imaginary after all?
Fiction: Thriller - Rated: T - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 607 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 2 - Published: 6/19/2014
Unexpected by pharoahsqueen reviews
"I never asked for any of this. All I ever wanted was to remain invisible. Unfortunately, it is hard to be invisible when you're cursed." [Reviews welcome! Thanks!]
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Romance - Chapters: 2 - Words: 9,939 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 11/3/2013 - Published: 10/24/2013
Foolish games by kolgrim reviews
Joni is seventeen, he's a model and he's gay. Joni is used getting attention and being admired. Usually it's the other gay men who approach him and he can simply choose whether he likes the attention or not, this however was not the case with Misha. Misha is the older, gay brother of Joni's best friend. He thinks Joni is a spoiled brat. Joni decides to prove he can seduce him.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 55 - Words: 335,460 - Reviews: 326 - Favs: 247 - Follows: 168 - Updated: 1/17/2013 - Published: 4/2/2008 - Complete
The Music of My Heart by Zarinelle reviews
Kailey has a disturbing background and has promised to never let anyone close enough to hurt her again, but when Dominic comes into her life it changes things. He's going to show her what love is. Full summary on my profile
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 59 - Words: 137,816 - Reviews: 224 - Favs: 125 - Follows: 70 - Updated: 12/19/2011 - Published: 6/6/2010 - Complete
Rebel with a Reason by StaySassy94 reviews
Jared's a rebellious teenager whose father has given up on him a long time ago. After being tossed around from relative to relative, his fathers best friend, who's also Jared's girlfriends father, agrees to take Jared in and try to turn his behavior around
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Family/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 73 - Words: 140,726 - Reviews: 189 - Favs: 50 - Follows: 18 - Updated: 8/13/2011 - Published: 6/21/2010 - Complete
Love Like Lightning by Violetlover03 reviews
"You know, I heard love is like lightning." "Lightning can kill you."
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 4 - Words: 6,083 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 6 - Updated: 7/3/2011 - Published: 3/12/2011
Unloved by Candie Eddlir reviews
Candie Eddlir's whole life has been a lie. Her parents, her silent life in the moors of England. Everything was a big lie. She always knew she didn't fit in, but she never would have guessed that she was the devil's daughter. And so our story begins...
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Fantasy - Chapters: 6 - Words: 10,522 - Reviews: 57 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 4/22/2011 - Published: 3/14/2011
The Woman That Lost Her Man by CharlottetheDevil reviews
One of the best investigators in the country has been called out for a case again. However, this case is very unique because of the woman's-------oh, looks like you'll have to read and find out!
Fiction: Mystery - Rated: K+ - English - Mystery/Crime - Chapters: 2 - Words: 3,092 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Updated: 3/13/2011 - Published: 3/12/2011
Bring On The Rain by StaySassy94 reviews
Greg is 16 and depressed. His family doesn't know about all the things he's been doing to try to get rid of the pain, but what happens when they find out? And what happens when he meets a girl that changes his life? Story better than summary
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 61 - Words: 87,893 - Reviews: 208 - Favs: 93 - Follows: 48 - Updated: 3/1/2011 - Published: 5/5/2010 - Complete
New Students by jaliwo reviews
Seventeen-year-old Ava Locke is a junior in high school. Her wish for a less monotonous life is fulfilled when two new students, Matt Andrews and Ben Whitman, arrive. With them, Ava learns more about life and herself than she ever thought possible.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Friendship - Chapters: 56 - Words: 199,459 - Reviews: 242 - Favs: 186 - Follows: 66 - Updated: 1/18/2011 - Published: 6/12/2010 - Complete
Despair's Calms by Sakiru Yume reviews
He knew she was hiding something, and she knew he was hiding something. But both of their secrets were far more wide reaching than the other could possibly imagine.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Romance - Chapters: 29 - Words: 51,472 - Reviews: 50 - Favs: 12 - Follows: 9 - Updated: 1/16/2011 - Published: 4/19/2009 - Complete
Unsuspecting Secrets by Gweta reviews
Vampires. Temptations lead to sin. WARNING: sexually explicit, violence
Fiction: Horror - Rated: M - English - Romance/Horror - Chapters: 68 - Words: 95,831 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 51 - Follows: 11 - Updated: 8/15/2009 - Published: 9/19/2008 - Complete
Allison Wonderland by DianaChristine reviews
Welcome to the teenage wonderland: everything from rebellion to self-destruction to, worst of all, love. Fifteen-year-old Allison Moss doesn't stand a chance. Or does she?
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: M - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 37 - Words: 53,726 - Reviews: 635 - Favs: 443 - Follows: 98 - Updated: 7/31/2009 - Published: 1/15/2007 - Complete
Internally Yours by The Lost Phantom reviews
COMPLETE! A student and teacher's forbidden, passionate romance. A father's dark obsession. When these two things are placed in the same setting, lives will change, lies will be told, and love will not be defeated... if Will and Stacey can help it.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 65 - Words: 197,754 - Reviews: 108 - Favs: 164 - Follows: 51 - Updated: 2/13/2009 - Published: 6/14/2007 - Complete
Embrace I: First Vampire by The Hellequin reviews
REWRITTEN. A human girl gets throw into a war between humans and creatures she used to think as myths. To protect herself and those close to her, she will give up her humanity to fight against those who threaten her kind. Vampires.
Fiction: Horror - Rated: M - English - Horror/Supernatural - Chapters: 10 - Words: 17,217 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 10/30/2008 - Published: 7/8/2008
Skate by takeabreath reviews
Harlan Keese is your stereotypical skateboarder. Laken Vogel isn't your regular girl. She has curly red hair, weird clothing style, and lives on the streets. He isn't to fond of her, due to the fact that she broke his wrist. But he can't seem to stay away
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 5 - Words: 11,244 - Reviews: 22 - Favs: 13 - Follows: 24 - Updated: 4/22/2008 - Published: 2/19/2008
Pierced by Polished Gem reviews
COMPLETE: Bri wasn't looking for love when someone unexpectedly summons Cupid on her behalf. She's only looking to fix her life. She ends up falling for the one guy she can't have: Cupid himself. And Ares is hot on his heels to reap destruction.
Fiction: Mythology - Rated: T - English - Romance/Supernatural - Chapters: 42 - Words: 93,756 - Reviews: 430 - Favs: 549 - Follows: 78 - Updated: 2/14/2006 - Published: 1/4/2006 - Complete
True to You by DianaChristine reviews
Shawn's running away to California when he finds Sarah, alone with a duffle bag full of cash, without the slightest idea of who she is or how she got there. So why shouldn't he pretend he's her boyfriend?
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 10 - Words: 12,312 - Reviews: 21 - Favs: 15 - Follows: 3 - Published: 12/8/2005 - Complete
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Souverign runs from a past which threatens her new life. Marie's use to getting what she wants so why's this time so different? Fresh out of luck & love, Tara thinks it's time to turn things around. Once a sweet, sickly child, Sophia becomes an equally sweet naïve woman; who could've prepared her for what came next? Join in as they fight to destroy the one thing that connects them.
Fiction: Thriller - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Suspense - Chapters: 10 - Words: 18,950 - Updated: 8/16/2013 - Published: 5/28/2013
MINA reviews
8 months after the disappearance of Carrie Myres, a gruesome discovery is made; her badly decomposed body in a shallow grave. Linked to a murder by sheer bad luck, Mina finds herself thrown into the epicenter of what could be THE most devastating trail of serial murders to rock that side of the world. RATED M FOR Sexual REFERENCES, GRAPHIC DETAILS.*COMPLETE*PLEASE READ AND REVIEW
Fiction: Thriller - Rated: T - English - Suspense/Crime - Chapters: 29 - Words: 58,750 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 8/16/2013 - Published: 9/24/2011 - Complete
Life Encounter reviews
Jasmine is a normal girl living in a normal world with the average experiences but life can kick ass and throws curves that none can see coming. To ensure that she lives to see her future she must be wary of the choices she long as the choice is still hers to be had...dive in to see what tolls she must endure in order to survive! Read& Review!
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 15 - Words: 21,654 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 4/22/2013 - Published: 3/17/2011
Drastic Measures reviews
The things a man will do for money...When a woman is faced with losing her child forever, the only she has is to give into the demands of a ransom note, but in the end, was it worth the money she didn't have...
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Suspense/Crime - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,757 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/31/2008 - Complete
Sweetest of Escapes
Doctor Joanne Brown Massey loved and married reputable lawyer, John Paul Massey Jr. She thought she had the happily ever after that everyone sought, only to discover her life became a living hell, with only one escape...
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,711 - Published: 8/31/2008 - Complete
The Perfect Scene
The most gruesome car crash in history leaves many deceased with only one survivor. Battling for his very life, but is is for real? Oneshot.
Fiction: Horror - Rated: T - English - Horror/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,226 - Published: 8/31/2008 - Complete
A Twist Of Fate reviews
Little Samantha was kidnapped....She had no idea why or by whom....but she has to wonder,what's taking her parents so long to get her back....will she ever see the light? One shot
Fiction: Thriller - Rated: T - English - Suspense/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 965 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/30/2008 - Complete
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