Vince Loring
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Joined 10-21-08, id: 635795, Profile Updated: 03-30-09
Author has written 29 stories for Love, School, General, Fantasy, Religion, Life, Haiku, War, Nature, Essay, General, and Horror.

Favorite quote: "I may be some sorta crazy." Blue October, Sound of Pulling Heaven Down.

I live in Central Florida. I go to high school. My poetry doesnt reflect my mindset usually, but it does represent the extreams. Please ask questions, I love explaining it, and talking about it. And I also cant spell. If I spell something wrong, please tell me.

If you must know about the name, it is false. Just part of my middle name and a surname taken out of a very good book by S.M. Stirling. the name of the book is "The protector's war"

When I write, I like to just do a stream of consiousness. It really helps me cope with life and stuff. I like to use rhyme schemes, but I may not. I like to use alot of referances to history. I also like to referance mythology and hell. If you don't understand a referance, please tell me, I would love to talk about it. I also hate having stuff be flat. I try to put depth in my poems, though it sometimes just makes my writing more complicated than it should be.

The longer i am on this site, then the more i will probably put up here.

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The Loved and The Loveless by Antonella Marie reviews
How I feel about a certain someone...
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 157 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Published: 2/4/2009 - Complete
Morning Glories by Twyla Cole reviews
It would be new and so would we.
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 169 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/19/2008 - Complete
The Wall by Mal Beam reviews
Two short narratives based on a listening of Pink Floyd's 'The Wall'.
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 649 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/11/2008 - Complete
Standing Pretty by Adrien SaintClaire reviews
A poem based on the song, "99 red balloons."
Poetry: War - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 179 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 3 - Published: 10/29/2008 - Complete
Instant Gratification by Faint Daydream reviews
Started as a poem, eventually evolved into a song. At least, I have music in my head when I read it. Basically my observations of my generation, and my worries of our future.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 441 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/2/2008 - Complete
Dreamscapes by fallenflame13 reviews
I know it may not make a lot of sense, but please read and review anyway. I would greatly appreciate it.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/16/2008 - Complete
Tell me a Story by Twyla Cole reviews
POEM
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 226 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Published: 7/15/2007 - Complete
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Anger reviews
A rant of the Monster created by Victor Frankenstein, given to his creator as a monolouge.
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 303 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/7/2010
Morose Prince of Denmark reviews
Sonnet based upon Shakespear's hamlet
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/25/2010 - Complete
If your wondering reviews
Based off of a weezer song. Story about a guy and a girl sitting on the beach at night. Because it is based off of a song, the rhythm is a little odd.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 380 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/24/2010 - Complete
Elation reviews
A stunning realization recovers me from the depths i have delved.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 88 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/30/2009 - Complete
Release reviews
Poem written in response to empty. Expresses the way i felt after letting out all the negative emotion in "Empty"
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 50 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/30/2009 - Complete
Empty reviews
First poem i have written in a while. It is about a low point in my life.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 125 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/30/2009
The Ship is Sinking
A not so happy poem about a world gone wrong. Makes me wish I didnt have to live in it.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 67 - Published: 5/4/2009 - Complete
I Walk into the Rain reviews
My take on the "i cry in the rain" poem. Please Review.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 69 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 3 - Published: 4/1/2009 - Complete
Stifled reviews
A poem about feeling Stifled. Please review.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 69 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 2 - Published: 4/1/2009 - Complete
Rainbow Sunset reviews
written because i felt like it. pretty good. please read.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 66 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/23/2009 - Complete
In that one paticular harbor reviews
poem with a few literary referances
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 144 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/16/2009 - Complete
Message in a Bottle reviews
The story was originally a poem. became a story.
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 581 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/9/2009
Is that Me Behind the Mirror? reviews
The man on the other side of the mirror isnt what he appears. Started as a poem, worked it's way to being a monolouge. explores concepts of mental disease and supernatural.
Fiction: Horror - Rated: M - English - Supernatural/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 386 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/2/2009
A Cry for Sol reviews
A stream of thought that flows to a river of dislike and ends in a ocean of contempt
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 230 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/18/2008 - Complete
Apathy or Bust! poem
A poem about a man's loathing of his consiousness and morals.
Poetry: General - Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 128 - Published: 12/15/2008 - Complete
Apathy or Bust! essay
APATHY OR BUST! an essay about one man's loathing of his consiousness and morals.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: M - English - Angst/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 445 - Published: 12/15/2008 - Complete
Moonlight Seance reviews
A girl goes to another world to be with her departed lover. edited
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 161 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/11/2008 - Complete
Held me Under reviews
A poem about me and my Ex-girlfriend.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 187 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/8/2008 - Complete
Raisin in the Sun reviews
poem about me and my now ex girl friend. fun fun.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 137 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/4/2008 - Complete
Wind reviews
Poem written while hyped up on monster. it was good.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 58 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/4/2008
Celtic Crusade reviews
Based on an invasion of Scotland by the Romans which has historically happened, but this is fiction and not accurate at all. Incorperates battle between old religion and Christianity. Disclaimer: material may be found disturbing. Read at own risk.
Poetry: War - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 250 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/5/2008
The December Rose
Abstract set of haikus that revolve around some rose that blooms in december. Loosely based on giving up the hope of loving someone.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Published: 11/2/2008 - Complete
A Lonely 12 AM reviews
Written one night at 12, like alot of my poems. One of my better ones.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 270 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/1/2008 - Complete
Ragnarök reviews
This poem is highly abstract. It can be taken any number of ways.
Poetry: Religion - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 151 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/1/2008 - Complete
The prologue of Ravin
I just started playing Dungeons and Dragons with some friends i am a nerd, i admit it and felt so inspired to write a backstory for my chacter.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,266 - Published: 11/1/2008 - Complete
Cold Steel reviews
A poem about returning from the ashes of defeat.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 134 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10/29/2008 - Complete
The Scarlet Letter
Basicly, it is a poem that expresses the characters in the scarlet letter through metaphores and other poetic devices. I also worked with a fun little rhyme scheme. That was auctually one of the harder parts.
Poetry: School - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 178 - Published: 10/28/2008
Oh Beautiful reviews
This was written in the fall of 07, Because my teacher wanted us to write for some competition thingy. I this won me 40 dollars and really inspired me to express myself though poetry. Since then, i have been writing stuff on and off ever since.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 267 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/28/2008 - Complete
Loneliness reviews
This was written basicly from the heart during lunch one day in 08. sometime in spring i think.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 268 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10/28/2008 - Complete