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Joined 11-05-08, id: 637984, Profile Updated: 12-10-10
Author has written 12 stories for Sci-Fi, and Song.

To anyone whom I took off my favorites list: Sorry, don't take it personally, I just sort of cleaned out near everything.

Updates at bottom, newest to oldest in descending order


I'm "And Then Came Twilight" (NOT a Twilight reference btw), aka Ducky. I've had an account on quizilla for quite a bit, but have gotten so sick of the repetitive stories I have decided to try something new. Fictionpress looks like it has a much wider variety of stories and I'm looking forward to reading and reviewing them. I also have an account at LiveJournal under the name Dawn's Arrival, where you can find some of my ramblings and shorter works, and an account on fanfiction under the name Take Another Look. On all three sites my "name" is Ducky though.

For my writing, I really appreciate constructive criticism, but please no put down comments. I'll do my best, hopefully you guys will enjoy reading it. Please do review :D



My story update schedule (currently ALL are on break):

Here Today, Gone Tomorrow - Hiatus. Sorry. No one seemed interested. If I get some reviews for it maybe I'll pick it up again.

When all Else Fails - Please do take a look, am currently starting to work on it again.


Random Update 12/10/10: Well, the hard term at school is coming to an end, most of my college applications are in. And, I want to get into writing on fictionpress again. I'm currently working on When All Else Fails and have figured out where I want to go with it.

Random Update 9/2/10: As is visible by the dates on my previous random updates, I haven't been on Fictionpress for about a 1.5 years, so all my stories are currently on pause. I apologize (though by now I've probably lost any readers who would have been interested...)

Random Update 2/18/09: I love how all of my previous updates were always something along the lines of "Sorry I didn't update in time". So yes, I am currently quite the busy little high schooler so no updating will come until a couple of weeks from now (possibly one this week cuz I have break) except for little songs or chapters of Intruder for my fanfiction account: my account

Random Update 12/19/08: Again, sorry about the overlong wait. I'll try to get another chapter out either today, tomorrow, or Sunday. IF MY UPDATE IS LATE BY OVER ONE WEEK MESSAGE ME TELLING ME TO SPEED IT UP! Often I'll be like "oh, well... I have stuff to do... I'll do it later..." aka, I am a severe procrastinator. Messages will get me to actually write, unless that is I get like 50 of them...

Random Update 12/17/08: I'M SO SORRY!! I know, I haven't updated in such a long time! And I owe you about three chapters of When all Else Fails, and one or two chapters of Here Today, Gone Tomorrow. I'm about half done with the next chapter of W.A.E.F. and am about a third done with the next chapter of H.T,G.T. I have been extremely busy lately and I know that's not a good excuse. :-( I do try. I've noticed that I am able to write a lot faster when I first write the chapter in one of my notebooks instead of on the computer. Second note, holiday break is coming. I have almost two weeks of break, which will mean... MANY UPDATES!! Look forward to it!

Random Update 11/29/08: Rock and Roses is now officially on hiatus, aka no more updates for a while. I have no more ideas for it, and I'm sorry :-( If you have ideas you can send them to me since I sorta lost my plan for what was supposed to happen because I started writing it almost 2 years ago.

Play It Again by lael1bologna reviews
—It clicks/Tempting you/To play it again.— About a magic music box. Please tell me what you think because I'd love to know! Thanks!
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 310 - Reviews: 14 - Favs: 4 - Published: 1/26/2009 - Complete
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A Chance, Just a Chance reviews
Trying to get to writing lyrics more often again. Just one of those songs that I randomly come up with. Also has to do with relationships, though any kind really, friends, family, etc. A positive song, not a "RAWR I'M MAD" song. Read and Review? :D
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 164 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 2/18/2009 - Complete
Just Not Quite reviews
Looking at the good and bad of a relationship... sort of. Let me know what you think, ppllleease!
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 192 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/4/2009 - Complete
And I Wonder reviews
hmmm, I don't actually know why I wrote this. I just kind of felt like it. POV of after finding out someone cheated on you and breaking up with them. It's not one of those really aggressive angry songs though. Read and review please! :D
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 175 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/4/2009 - Complete
When All Else Fails reviews
A planet is on the verge of extinction. Everything rests on the shoulder of one young woman. When a young man joins the picture things may go terribly wrong. Please review! I'll have longer updates/be more inspired to write if you do!
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Romance - Chapters: 5 - Words: 4,305 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 12/31/2008 - Published: 11/8/2008
Gone reviews
Wrote this for my English class as a creative project. It's referring to a book, if you can tell that would be really funny :D try guessing if you're up for it.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 177 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/13/2008 - Complete
Free reviews
Another song, this and Gone are the last two songs of the album "This Upside Down World Called Earth". I'll be starting my second album soon.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 177 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/13/2008 - Complete
Truth reviews
This is not supposed to be a depressing song so don't take it that way! Read the note at the beginning and you'll understand more what I mean by it. Again, please review! :D
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 205 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/9/2008 - Complete
Our World
some more song lyrics. Please do review, I'd be really really happy!
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 420 - Published: 11/9/2008 - Complete
review please! :D any tips would be helpful. I didn't really like this one as much as the other ones I wrote; it's really hard to put a tune to and the chorus just doesn't feel right, so any tips would be greatly appreciated.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 206 - Published: 11/9/2008 - Complete
Illusion reviews
Hope you like it :D
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 177 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/9/2008 - Complete
Confusion in the Cold
Just a little something. The formatting got messed up on my computer, so the verses are probably grouped a bit weirdly, sorry. Hope you like it.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 211 - Published: 11/9/2008 - Complete
Face To Face With Reality reviews
wrote this a while back, just some song lyrics. It's not perfect, I know, but I try. Reviews/critiques?
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 315 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/8/2008 - Complete
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