Author has written 3 stories for Supernatural, and General.
Hi there readers and writers alike. I'm just updating some things while I do some revisions. I am pleased to finally have the first few chapters of my novel Brimstone. It took forever to pen that first chapter, but now that the ball is rolling I'll start running more and more chapters.
Hey, does anyone think that the writing in the first chapters is too descriptive? I was reading over it the other day and felt the need to cut some words. Then again, maybe I'm just doubting myself again.
I've been doing some thinking lately. I might have to overhaul my plot for Brimstone, if I'll even call it that anymore. I did a search on the site and discovered that quite a few authors have choosen that name, either for poems, short stories, or even religious pieces. It all just seems a little too common for my taste, especially when you're competing with other authors. Simply put, it's all in the title. Plus I feel a little uncomfortable with the background I provided for christopher. I need to find a balance that explains his situation, but quickly moves the plot to the school, where the entire story takes place. Some other locations come into play as well, Including the Arizona desert, Shreeveport, and a lot of forrest. (Foreshadow for the )
Well, if you read what I have, thanks. If not, please do, I spent alot of time on this. And to everyone...PLEASE REVIEW! It give me motivation to know that people are actually reading.