Antonella Marie
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Joined 02-01-09, id: 652087, Profile Updated: 09-23-10
Author has written 21 stories for Love, Life, General, and Fantasy.

I'm Yalina and I am 16.

My pen name as you can tell isn't related to my name at all. Well, Antonella was going to be my name that my mom wanted for me but my grandma named me Yalina (I don't know why). Also, Marie is just my middle name.

I'm kind of new at poetry so advice, comments, and criticism is greatly appreciated. Thanks!

As you might've noticed, some of my poems look kind of messed up. That's because I uploaded them from Notepad (because this is my brother's laptop so he doesn't have Microsoft Word yet) If you don't know what I mean, then this could show you:
i.e. That little girl Thinks she's a "teen"

When it's really supposed to be:
That little girl
Thinks she's a "teen" (part of my poem of "The Little Girl")

Get it? Well just please try to look over that ok? Thanks for all your help everyone!

Peace.

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I Walk into the Rain by Vince Loring reviews
My take on the "i cry in the rain" poem. Please Review.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 69 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 3 - Published: 4/1/2009 - Complete
Stifled by Vince Loring reviews
A poem about feeling Stifled. Please review.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 69 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 2 - Published: 4/1/2009 - Complete
In that one paticular harbor by Vince Loring reviews
poem with a few literary referances
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 144 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/16/2009 - Complete
I want to be Mother Earth by Twyla Cole reviews
B E T W E E N M Y T O E S
Poetry: Nature - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 177 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 3 - Published: 2/21/2009 - Complete
Held me Under by Vince Loring reviews
A poem about me and my Ex-girlfriend.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 187 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/8/2008 - Complete
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Jay
He's not coming back, even though he wants to. I love him so much and he loves me. I don't want him in Georgia. I want him here...
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 43 - Published: 12/30/2009 - Complete
The Road to Wherever reviews
The poem says it all.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 62 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10/22/2009 - Complete
Everything
This was just a poem I wrote while I was bored in the middle of the night. It has no meaning but please review!
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 46 - Published: 6/15/2009 - Complete
The 19 Year Old
This is about me not telling the whole truth to my ex boyfriend on why we had to break up. Please review!
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Published: 6/14/2009 - Complete
I'm Sorry, GoodBye reviews
I'm about to break up with my boyfriend. I know the poem seems cruel but that's not exactly how I feel; it's just the only way I could write it and I never felt that "spark" with him.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 63 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5/24/2009 - Complete
Nightmare reviews
I just started writing and it actually creeps ME out! Lol. I'm still not done with it but please review!
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 143 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5/9/2009
I Want To Forget
Old poem.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 144 - Published: 5/6/2009 - Complete
Clearing My Mind reviews
I'm so confused! That's really all I can say. Please review!
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4/29/2009 - Complete
Different reviews
This is actually based upon how I've felt my whole life. I've always felt different in the bad way but now I realize that it's a good thing. Please review!
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 141 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/10/2009 - Complete
BLAH reviews
I can't explain it, really. Just read. Please review!
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 41 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4/4/2009 - Complete
Moving On reviews
I'm slowly trying to move on no matter how hard it is. Even though I can't have him, I'll try to be there for him as a good friend. Please review!
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/30/2009 - Complete
Life reviews
It's as simple as it gets. Please read and review!
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 248 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3/28/2009 - Complete
The Breakup reviews
The title says it all. Please review!
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 60 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/27/2009 - Complete
The Dance reviews
I went to my boyfriend's military ball and I had a very embarrassing thing happen to me so this is based on what happened. Please review!
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 212 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3/1/2009 - Complete
Fateless reviews
It started with a sentence and then ended in a detailed poem. Please review!
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 227 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2/18/2009 - Complete
Unspoken Words reviews
I wrote this on Valentine's Day. Tell me what you think.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 53 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2/16/2009 - Complete
Changes
Originally a song that I wrote a while back. It really has no meaning. I was just bored one day. Please comment!
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 210 - Published: 2/11/2009 - Complete
Deadly Romance reviews
This is NOT based on the book Twilight. It's an older poem of mine before I even knew what Twilight was that just HAPPENS to seem like it, but it's NOT. Please rate!
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 178 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2/11/2009 - Complete
The Little Girl reviews
Just mainly about my first day of freshman year.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 171 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2/5/2009 - Complete
Regretful reviews
This is how I USED to feel about my ex-boyfriend who is a major jerk.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 190 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2/5/2009 - Complete
The Loved and The Loveless reviews
How I feel about a certain someone...
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 157 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Published: 2/4/2009 - Complete