Darkness Dawn
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Joined 03-15-09, id: 658607, Profile Updated: 06-20-14
Author has written 4 stories for Romance, Young Adult, and Family.

Howdy. Thanks for stopping by my corner of Fictionpress. I'm Kai. Pleasure to make your acquaintance.

My profile contains stories with slash and femslash, so if those things aren't your cup of tea, I'd suggest clicking the back button on your browser and you can pretend you never stumbled upon my page. Although I can't rule out a straight story coming out of me... It depends on my muse.

I've been a writer for fourteen years, but I still haven't perfected my craft. My vocabulary is atrocious sometimes and it could still use some polishing. That's why I welcome constructive criticism. I wouldn't be the writer I am today without a critique I received, so rest assured you won't be wasting your time. I take every piece of criticism (harsh or no) to heart and use it to improve my future stories.

I review when I feel I can leave a satisfactory one. I tend to like leaving reviews on stories with a low review count than a high one, but if I see something needs work, I'll likely point it out regardless of how many reviews it has. I prefer short stories over longer ones, solely due to my short attention span, but if the writing is good, I'll stick around and read 100,000 words in one sitting.

What do I look for in stories? Good question. I look for inviting summaries (it helps if you don't say "sorry the summary sucks" or "the story is better than the summary"), slash or femslash as a main element, fantasy stuff (vampires, werewolves, warlocks, fairies, etc), and other things like that. If you know any stories with these perks, let me know in a private message and I'll check them out!

If you want me to leave a critique on your work, simply leave me a private message stating the story you want me to read. I prefer to read something under 2,000 words for a critique. If you want me to comment on a specific thing (grammar, spelling, characters), please say so in your message and I'll make it the main focus.

If you want to do a trade, I'm down for them. Send me a message (see a trend here?) with your characters and plot and I'll get it done ASAP. I'll generally write something under 2,000 words for a trade, but if your characters interest me enough, I might do longer. I prefer to write slash or femslash for trades, but I have no qualms with writing a straight pairing. However, if you want to trade with me, you have to be comfortable with gay pairings because I'll almost always ask for one.

That concludes this profile. Adios 'till next time.

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My Pace by Yaoi-sama reviews
SLASH It goes at my pace, slowly. Someday, you will play for me. Who knows when, but I'll let it sleep until I find the right opportunity to say...that is, if the opportunity ever comes, to say... to say it. To ask. Or simply, be quiet...Dunno...
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,199 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/18/2011 - Complete
Pomegranites by Shidoni8 reviews
These new vamps just aren't sticking to tradition. The ensuing schism, and a rogue dhampire race to power, promises to affect the human race, particularly a lesbian prostitute named Persephone. A Lesbian, Vampire, Political intrigue novella.
Fiction: Supernatural - Rated: M - English - Supernatural/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,331 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 2 - Published: 6/4/2010
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"Dearest mother, would you be proud? Proud of what your daughter has become?"
Poetry: Family - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 128 - Published: 2/8 - Complete
Midnight Queen reviews
She was a regular at the bar. Every evening, at approximately 7pm, she would walk through the door and sit down at her table by the window. Contains lesbianism.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,074 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 2 - Published: 6/2/2012 - Complete
Broken Porcelain reviews
19 year old Ethan Kinlan lives on his own after his parents kicked him out two years prior. His sister has disappeared, and the only person he has left is his best friend, 21 year old Jake Harrison. Written for the International Day Against Homophobia.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,432 - Reviews: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 5/17/2011 - Complete
Cold reviews
A romance between a half demon and a demon hunter. Something forbidden, but at the same time, you cannot let go of your emotions, can you? Slash
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,114 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 2 - Published: 3/17/2009 - Complete