Kay Marie
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Joined 04-06-09, id: 662229, Profile Updated: 06-09-13
Author has written 6 stories for General, Romance, Young Adult, Sci-Fi, and Thriller.

Hi... I'm Kay Marie, and for short you can just call me by K. I love writing, obviously, since I post stuff on here. I'm just going to add a little bit of info on here to tell you about each of the plots I have up. I love getting reviews with critique, so if you have some time, please feel free to do so.

Carniveil is the story of a girl named Skylar who is abused at home and ends up joining a world famous circus of people who have supernatural abilities. She falls in love, makes friends, etc. Unfortunately, the owner of the circus becomes engaged to a horrible woman who threatens the happiness of all of them, so they must all try and figure out how to stop the wedding without hurting the owner, who is a beloved friend of everyone there. There's a lot going on, and I really hope you decide to try it out. (Most of the chapters are short, that's why there are so many).This novel is basically my blood, sweat, and tears since sometime in 2008. The writing itself isn't the best, but I started it in 7th grade, and i feel the plot is interesting enough in itself. As i finished Carniveil in December, I have devoted my summer to editing it so that it can be submitted to a publisher. My goal is to have the final draft complete by July 30.

Carniveil Volume Two is obviously the sequel to Carniveil. I'm not going to really say anything about it because it will be a spoiler to Carniveil, but once i finish editing Carniveil, I will start adding a lot more chapters.

Autumn's Fall is a short story I wrote several years ago in seventh grade for an English assignment. I spent a lot of time on it and thought it turned out nicely, so I posted it up here. It's about a town that is ravaged by a deadly disease that quickly becomes and epidemic. It's about nine pages long on Microsoft word, and completely finished.

Shackled Roses is another short story I wrote about a woman mourning the death of her son who died in the military overseas. It's only a couple pages long.

HARSH is a project I began working on in October. I'm hoping that it can carry on and develop like Carniveil has, but most of my plots kind of crash and burn as i give them up to focus on Carniveil. Keep an eye on it, though, because I feel like it may have some potential. I am also focusing on writing it in a much better style of writing than Carniveil is currently at. It's basically about a school that has alterior motives other than teaching students who have various issues. They promise to make these students good and productive members of society, but they don't really fill in the parents with all of the details. This boarding school doesn't sound very honest right from the start, but it's free of charge to anyone who attends and includes a college degree. I have officially stopped writing HARSH, though I cannot say I won't continue it at a later date.

Guilty is a story about a boy who kills his neighbor and is sent to an experimental lab instead of prison for his crime. It is set in a futuristic United States in which the countrywas split in two over differing political ideals. The war-torn world has caused massive migration to the United States and he eventually finds himself in the middle of a war against the government. It's really hard to explain in a couple of short sentences without giving the plot away, so I encourage you to see for yourself. I've been working on it since I finished the rough draft of Carniveil, and this summer I won't update it as often due to my busy schedule editing Carniveil. However, I will still be posting updates. I'm not through with it yet! I really enjoy this plot and suggest it to all kinds of readers. I will warn you; it's a different story from Carniveil, but not necessarily better or worse.

Enjoy my writing, please review or message me any questions you may have!

3/15/11: Carniveil reaches 1000 hits! I'm pretty excited about that.

7/19/11: Carniveil reaches 2000 hits!

11/16/11: Carniveil reaches 3000 hits!

12/4/12: Finished Carniveil!!!!

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White Pages: The First Part of Thirteen Letters by Kennie Lynn
Life? A joke. An unjust, cruel, pointless freaking joke that we're all stuck with until we finally die. Sorry to rain on your precious parade. But why my life? It sucked enough already. This is the last thing I need. Reveiw!
Fiction: Action - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 6 - Words: 18,844 - Favs: 2 - Updated: 3/16/2012 - Published: 2/9/2011
Dear Addison by stormy.rawr reviews
He left nothing but a short note behind, enlisted in the army. Addison lost the love of her life with a two line note as way of goodbye. Its been three years, he is back she is bitter still holding the grudge of being left.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Friendship - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,080 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 3 - Updated: 7/17/2011 - Published: 7/16/2011
Alone by savetheheartache reviews
Lonely girl plus lonely boy equals..?
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Romance - Chapters: 6 - Words: 5,191 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 4/29/2011 - Published: 12/30/2010 - Complete
Head Games by Mitchie Love reviews
Here's the deal: You get Emo Boy to go out with you for a month, and my Prada is all yours."
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 21 - Words: 24,588 - Reviews: 100 - Favs: 27 - Follows: 15 - Updated: 8/21/2010 - Published: 6/10/2010 - Complete
Creepy Bum by Mei-Lien reviews
Nine years of living like a bum has not really changed me much. I still make the same mistakes, I still act crazy and poor pitiful humans are still getting stabbed with forks. Why the cops havent shown, i dont know why! But this is me, so there. please r&
Fiction: Humor - Rated: T - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 3 - Words: 6,053 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 4/17/2010 - Published: 3/31/2010
Blank Stare by RachelJaNell
Kailey didn't have it all but she sure lost everything she had. This sad tale follows the heartbreaking and life-threatening journey of Kailey Larsen who needs every ounce of heart her mother left behind to win against the frightening, manipulative unknow
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Suspense/Angst - Chapters: 5 - Words: 9,056 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/27/2009
Just Great by HotFudgeSundae reviews
Kelsey's life if pretty average. She has a good job, a pretty normal family and great friends. Over all, she's pretty happy. One day, she meets Leo, and things kind of change. But is it for the better?
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 3 - Words: 8,183 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 5/4/2009 - Published: 4/21/2009
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Guilty reviews
He would be executed for his crime. But there's a way out. He could agree to be a government test subject for ten years, then he'd walk free. He doesn't find himself in a doctor's office. He finds himself in the middle of a war against a government that wants to decimate the population, a government that has been controlling the people for years but is losing ease review.
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Drama - Chapters: 25 - Words: 82,998 - Reviews: 22 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 11 - Updated: 7/16/2014 - Published: 3/31/2013
Anghell (Sequel)
Zeline has taken over the circus and leaves the other performers starved and abused. All of them are locked in the downstairs dining hall with nowhere to go and no way out. Weak from starvation, they struggle to survive. They wait for a hero while Zeline plans her wedding with Roderick Talbot and prospers from Oscar's death. Please review. NOTE: This is the SEQUEL to Carniveil.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Tragedy - Chapters: 26 - Words: 40,634 - Updated: 5/16/2014 - Published: 12/31/2012
Fading Embers
A short story about two criminals breaking into and robbing a home-but there's a twist.
Fiction: Thriller - Rated: T - English - Suspense/Crime - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,438 - Published: 10/7/2013 - Complete
Carniveil reviews
All she'd ever wanted was to escape. But the place she ran to began to fall apart right in front of her eyes. Weddings don't always mean a happy ending, and "love" can lead to a hopeless disaster. Please review.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 99 - Words: 129,591 - Reviews: 20 - Favs: 10 - Follows: 11 - Updated: 12/4/2012 - Published: 6/26/2010 - Complete
Shackled Roses: A Short Story reviews
She knealt beside her bed, and what she found was worse than she could ever imagine. Please Review.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,439 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/22/2010 - Complete
Autumn's Fall
What would you do if your best friend, love, and the rest of the town were dying, and there was no way you could stop it?
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,886 - Published: 4/18/2009 - Complete