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Joined 05-22-09, id: 669866, Profile Updated: 03-16-11
Author has written 20 stories for Young Adult, Supernatural, Love, General, and Life.

Here's the question:

Should my one shot Kill To Be With You turn into a real story?

I've had a few reviews requesting for something of the sort, but this is one of those things that I won't pursue unless enough people think I should. Also, it (of course) won't be in 2nd person anymore. I could imagine writing this in two POVs (point of views), but I think it would still be just fine from the girl in the story or you, rather. Another IMPORTANT note is that I wouldn't be able to be dedicated to writing this until my story "Crash Course Lover" is completed (hopefully, it won't take too long). Anyway, so if you like it enough then just tell me so and I'll start plotting this whole thing out.

Please read it if you haven't or if you have, just hit up the poll above!

Thanx Lovers!

--bleedingvalentine

Hey.

I really don't know what to write here. It kills me to see blank pages though since I always feel the need to fill them.

First off:I love my devoted readers: BoredumKillsTheBeast (until she changes her name again), CatchUrWave, BeautifulSurreal, Lweven, Lillian Casey (hope reality sucks a little less), just to name a few. I'm one of those people that love to keep in contact with my readers and see most of them as friends and not simply "readers". I don't mind talking and discussing stuff, whether it has to do with my writing or not.

Okay About ME:

Well, I'm 22 (stuck with a 17 year olds state of mind, sometimes I'll even say that's my age by mistake. It always takes me a bit to figure out how old I am)

I'm a mommy of a gorgeous little boy, whose name I will not state simply because it's awesome and I want no one else to have it.

I'm married to an awesome guy, whose name can be found in the Bible. Haha! That really narrows it down.

I'm a strange, quirky person and my hair is rather bipolar-that meaning that it doesn't know how it wants to behave. I could be using the same shampoo and treat it the same way everyday and it'll still come out different. So, I never do anything the same with it! I can't say that my life is "average" because I really wouldn't know what people classify as "average" or "normal" these days. Nevertheless, I could never loop myself in with the rest of the world. I don't live a charmed life, but it never gets boring with all the dream worlds existing in my head. :sigh:

I'm very firm in the way I believe, whether we're speaking about religion or anything else for that matter. I'll be the first to tell you that you're foolish if you think you can teach a child not to see a person's skin. A child seeing colors doesn't make them or their parents racist; it simply means that they aren't BLIND. I watch too many of these shows where the host shuns the parents because their child can tell the difference between a white and black person. And why do those colors seem to be the only ones that matter? Hell, I'm Asian! Why is that less important? I'll never understand this world. So, I'll teach my kids that everyone looks different and it makes the world more interesting and gives it more flavor. That there's perfection in imperfections, and what I mean by that, is when people find a person or child to be less than "normal" when we're all less than normal in one way or another. So yeah. Feel free to disagree, I really don't mind.

SURVEY

Siblings: Two bros and one sis. I'm the lil' sis stuck in the middle.
Girlfriend\Boyfriend: Hubby
Family: Sure, what are you asking really?
Are you funny?: When I'm not trying.
Do you have a job: Mommy
Name one of your many flaws: That would be that I think too much into things. I'm a person that always needs clarity to be satisfied.
Eye Color: Deep brown. So lovely, I get lost in them
Hair color: Black and you wished you had it cause it cooperates soooo well!
Every been arrested:
Does it count if it's been exsponged from my record? LOL No, not really.
Ever been brought home by a cop: Yes I have actually! Got into a wreck that totalled my boyfriend's (husband now) car. Copper took us to my place.
Ever shot a gun: A water gun
Ever been shot: By finger pistols.
Ever shot someone: With water guns and finger pistols. There have been many casualities under my reign!
Ever Drank:
Gotta survive. Let's see, first taste of alchohol was at 18 while we watched Corpse Bride at a friend's place. I didn't like most of the stuff until I got ahold of some Black Smirnoff. The next time was when I was 19 or 20, and having issues and my big bro bought us a six pack of Sour Apple Smirnoff's that we drank in my convertible. That was the last time. I'm not a drinker.
Ever smoked: NEVER. I'm allegeric. Daddy did, but quit. Big bro does. But I can't breathe and my eyes tear up and I choke. ITS CRAZY... makes you smell gross too. YUCK!
Ever done\sold drugs: Never seen any kind of drug actually. Though some of my friends used, I never did, sold, or even seen a roach. that's what they're called right? LOL I"m sheltered.
Do you believe in love: Of course. I believe in hate too cuz you could never know true love until you hate something.
Ever kissed: Yes. Many times.
Are you a virgin: Naw Sherlock. I just make my husband lie naked in bed next to me!
Who is your favorite person in the world: If I MUST pick one: My little boy-- that's never a dull moment.
Ever done something BIG to your apearance: No, but I'm trying to lose weight to get a tattoo.
Descripe yourself in one word: Unique
Do you hang out with people your own age: I don't exactly "hang" anymore. I "talk" to a wide range of people as long as they're intelligent enough to handle me.

Are you in love: Very.
Ever been in love: Read the above
Do you think you have talent: Writing and being the best ME out there
Do you live in your own world: A good writer has to
Do you enjoy hanging around people: Eh... not for long periods of time
Ever been depressed: Well of course
Random fact: My shins really hurt right now.

Blah! Okay enough about me!

Please. I really want your opinion. Good. Bad. I don't care as long as you're honest.

Thanks.

Okay, if you guys haven't noticed "Lollipops and Guitar Picks" and "Your Third Eye's Flash" has been taken down. (Yes, we're all crying a little inside : ) I plan on reworking them and recycling parts to make something worth (in my eyes) for publishing. Will you see a changed version of "Lolli etc" on the shelf someday? Hopefully. :) Ha! And then you guys will know who I really am! I don't plan on removing "Playing with Trick Mirrors" anytime soon. I'd like to give the devout more time to finish it. Thanx and sorry. I'd like to apologize to anyone who happened to be in the middle of reading either story (but if you had left reviews then I would've known). Okay! There will be more on here. Supernatural stuff probably and those teen dramas you guys seem to be addicted to. LOVE YOU!

Playing With Trick Mirrors:

The pretty little sequel to "Your Third Eye's Flash". Lexis has to give up a lot for the one she loves even the ONE she loves. But what happens when you've given up everything and have everything that you could careless about? What happens when the guy you'd kill for is engaged and spins words so fast around you that you lose your breath? Not everything is as it seems, lies aren't really lies but misunderstanding when you see what's only on the surface. Maybe she should start asking the "right" questions and she'll stop recieving the "wrong" answers.

Rebels of the Damned: This plot is subject to change since it's still in the works Aden just wants to stay with his family and live a normal life, but vampires have something else planned, something that had only worked once before. That would be Seth, a vampire that became what he was in false pretense. Their stories won't interlink for a while, but this'll be good. The prologue doesn't come into play until later. This is a new vampire story that isn't mainly about romance. But about vampires trying to keep domaniance by trying to recruit Seth to help them make a new breed of vampire. Then we have werewolves, who don't want to be ruled over because who would, right? Then rebel vampires are trying to keep this from happening. So if you're only into love stories then this isn't for you sorry. Love is very minor actually, simply leads them to the decisions that Seth makes, understand? It's difficult to explain and would be better to just read and find out. LOL

Breaking Sweet Playthings: (by far my best work on here to me)

Its told from three (possibly 4) perspectives:

-Hyrlai (H-ear-lie) : no POV but that's how you say his name.

-Narrator: just a voice that no one else hears... but Hylai sometimes makes comments too.

-The Craftsman: the vampire serial killer

-Sheldon Sanders aka Agent 10 or X (when he tries to be cool) aka Whatever I feel like calling him that chapter

That was the main part I wanted to get down so that it's not so confusing. I'll have whose "voicing" each chapter in bold. Don't get too weirded out with the Narrator if Hylai actually talks to him. It's meant to be a little funny, a little romantic, and of course has some creepy stuff shoved in. We'll see how this goes! Not sure if it'll have an ending, but :shrugs shoulders: its just for fun! I hope you guys like it. The description I left pretty much wraps up everything. This was just a little guide.

Plot: the VHA (vampire hunter association) hunts down really bad vampires, not necessarily all of them. The main targets being the "undead" which are people who have been bitten but didn't recieve vampire blood. They drink blood, but are basically gross rotting, walking corpses. Then we have the Craftsman who is a vampire that has gone insane and is an ex VHA member. He has an obsession with kidnapping girls, killing them, and setting them up like dolls. Hyrlai and Sheldon are partners and the get the assignment to track down the Craftsman and stop him. And some romantic drama along the way (no not with Sheldon and Hyrlai) Read and see!

Found this on my friend's page and thought it was something everyone should read:

A girl and a guy were speeding over 100mph on a motorcycle.

Girl:Slow down, i'm scared.

Guy:No, this is fun.

Girl:No it's not, please, it's so scary.

Guy: Then tell me you love me.

Girl:I love you, slow down.

Guy:Now give me a big hug

She gave him a big hug

Guy:Can you take my helmet off & put it on yourself, It's really bothering me.

The next day in the newspaper, a motorcycle crashed into a building due to brake failure. Two people

were in the crash, but only one survived. The truth was that halfway down the road the guy realized that the

breaks weren't working, but he didn't want the girl to know. Instead, he had her hug him and tell him she

loves him one last time. Then he had her put his helmet on so that she would live, even if it meant that he wouldn't

(Honestly, helmet or not, I think that if they crashed into a building at 100mph that they both would've died. Doesn't lessen how touching it is, but I always wonder why people don't swerve up into a field or let the thing go into a river or something. Not off a bridge, but you know what I mean. Maybe those aren't "great" ideas, but they are ideas at the very least)

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Crash Course Lover reviews
Sky's had a hard life. She ends up being caught between her 2 Good 2 B True BF and the Rough Edged Romantic who doesn't like to lose. He can't help it, he's Italian! Her boyfriend doesn't mean to hit her, and she doesn't mean to fall for someone else.
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Take Me Back reviews
The title speakes for itself. Read and Review if you will please!
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Kill to Be With You reviews
ONE SHOT. When you tell someone that you love them no matter what, do you mean it? It's in second person, so put yourself there and tell me what you think okay! Imagine it... you realize you fell for a serial killer. READ AND REVIEW PLEASE!:D
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When you look back and wish you could've changed something. Plus a question! Read and Review!
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Rebels of the Damned reviews
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Breaking Sweet Playthings reviews
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Playing with Trick Mirrors reviews
SEQUEL Lexis lost it all, now gave up her everything, Addison. What's left for her to lose but everything else to go down another road for the sake of the one she loves. Now she's in a world where "real" isn't real at all and no one's what they seem.
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A twisted one shot on where welewolves come from. Yeah, pretty disturbing. : stupid? not bad? read and review!
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