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Joined 06-06-09, id: 672486, Profile Updated: 10-10-11
Author has written 7 stories for Love, Life, Romance, Biography, and Supernatural.

Okay guys.

I am YourCritic

If I review you, I will tell you the truth.

You know why? People are too nice to writers on here.

Sometimes the truth hurts, but it's for the best really.

I never flame, I will try to nicely point out your mistakes and then try and tell you how to improve.

If you don't want to take my advice fine, but don't ask for reviews if you don't want to get them.

Thanks and have a nice day :)

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I know there's a light somewhere by x.your.brand.new.mistake.x reviews
REPOST Alexis Daniels begins a new school. Things are good but when they go downhill, the only person she has, is the one who caused her fall. WARNING:Rape, abuse, language, slight drug abuse and references to homosexuality
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: M - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 78 - Words: 72,645 - Reviews: 230 - Favs: 74 - Follows: 48 - Updated: 2/23/2013 - Published: 4/25/2007 - Complete
Sabotage by Mardy Bum reviews
They were untouchable. The seven deadly sins of her school had destroyed her brother. Now, she was out to destroy them. Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned...
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 24 - Words: 47,683 - Reviews: 485 - Favs: 431 - Follows: 386 - Updated: 6/4/2012 - Published: 2/25/2007 - Complete
The New Year by bacchanalianromance reviews
My boss is looking for his Cinderella, and he hires me to do it. And here's the clincher: I AM CINDERELLA. What the hell do I do now?
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 17 - Words: 46,172 - Reviews: 577 - Favs: 552 - Follows: 695 - Updated: 1/20/2011 - Published: 1/12/2008
Hush by PoorEnglishArtist reviews
The REWRITE is up! Go to my profile and it's called Hush REWRITE - now wasn't that imaginative of me?
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 8 - Words: 14,311 - Reviews: 80 - Favs: 25 - Follows: 43 - Updated: 8/8/2010 - Published: 4/16/2008
Operation: Eliminate Elites by jayniee reviews
Complete: High school doesn't get more dramatic than when three social outcasts make it their mission to change the highschool hierarchy. In other words take them DOWN!
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 14 - Words: 44,892 - Reviews: 62 - Favs: 42 - Follows: 19 - Updated: 9/13/2009 - Published: 2/2/2009 - Complete
Say It With A Card by Laura Schiller reviews
Taylor, who works at a greeting card store, wants nothing more than to be given a Valentine of her own. But what happens when she has to sell one to the boy she secretly likes?
Fiction: Romance - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,237 - Reviews: 129 - Favs: 487 - Follows: 28 - Published: 8/9/2009 - Complete
Litter Bug by Ravina reviews
She picked up the paper ball and threw it at his face. Again. This time, it hit his forehead. Before she could blink, she found herself pressed to the pole, with Vincent's body against hers. "I don't think you want to try that again," he murmured.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,429 - Reviews: 79 - Favs: 386 - Follows: 27 - Published: 3/10/2009 - Complete
Horrible Mistake by Penelope P reviews
The Devil grinned wickedly and stared down at her broken body. Her mangled wings spread out painfully and her bruises ached. The last Angel was dying and The Devil stood and watched. Oneshot
Fiction: Romance - Rated: K - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 753 - Reviews: 72 - Favs: 161 - Follows: 7 - Published: 9/2/2008 - Complete
Tutor by Pointy Objects reviews
I know I’m supposed to be encouraging and up building and make you love writing, but I have to tell the truth. You are awful. You are very, very bad at writing. Oneshot.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,596 - Reviews: 42 - Favs: 98 - Follows: 3 - Published: 1/11/2008 - Complete
Does This Make You Uncomfortable? by DancingChaChaFruit reviews
She stuck her hand in the back pocket of his jeans. "Does this make you uncomfortable?" He smiled and slid his own hand into the back pocket of the shorts she was wearing. "You'll have to try harder than that." It's funny what games become. -Oneshot-
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,516 - Reviews: 357 - Favs: 1,097 - Follows: 75 - Published: 10/29/2007 - Complete
Aelyn's story by timpanigirl reviews
:: Completed:: Aelyn has been trained as a soldier her whole life, but when she is captured by the enemy army, survival takes a whole new twist
Fiction: Romance - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 27 - Words: 59,307 - Reviews: 626 - Favs: 487 - Follows: 43 - Updated: 2/6/2006 - Published: 3/22/2005
Creator's Children by a rice lily reviews
Open-minded liberals have taken over the world, tolerating all but those they deem intolerant.
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: T - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 3 - Words: 9,696 - Reviews: 24 - Favs: 4 - Updated: 11/21/2004 - Published: 8/9/2004
How to Successfully Complete a Successful Story! by glitterjewele reviews
Can’t manage to finish the stories you start? Contracted writer’s block? Need a little help with summaries? Stop dodging flying vegetables. This is for you.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,843 - Reviews: 345 - Favs: 960 - Follows: 49 - Published: 9/29/2004
Just As Innocent by Katrina Forest reviews
16-year-old Vicky Anderon's life is devastated when she falls victim to a serial rapist. But after her mother suggests a pregnancy test, life is no longer a mere matter of healing, but also a decision that will change her forever.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 8 - Words: 8,870 - Reviews: 58 - Favs: 16 - Updated: 11/5/2003 - Published: 9/20/2003
In Sickness and In Health by treadondreams reviews
A heartfelt speech to a husband.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: K - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,894 - Reviews: 117 - Favs: 243 - Follows: 19 - Published: 5/20/2003
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Bite the Dust
Celeste just got caught by vampires. Luckily she's got some tricks up her sleeves. Unluckily, so do they.
Fiction: Supernatural - Rated: M - English - Supernatural/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,397 - Follows: 1 - Published: 7/4/2011
Alone reviews
Pick a word, any word, and write about it for up to twenty minutes straight. My word was 'alone' and here's what I came up with in ten minutes. Enjoy!
Fiction: Biography - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 318 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/27/2010 - Complete
Stockholme Syndrome is NOT Sexy reviews
The continual glorification of Stockholme Syndrome as a plot device/romance set piece drives me crazy. Here's what I have to say about it. Do you agree? Rating for my language getting carried away.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,159 - Reviews: 15 - Favs: 4 - Published: 12/14/2010 - Complete
Writing a Romance reviews
I have discovered various stereotypes in the average story on here, and here is my attempt to define them more fully. Please laugh, and don't be offended!
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 802 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 3 - Published: 4/3/2010
Failure reviews
On beauty and acceptance of ourselves.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 63 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9/16/2009 - Complete
Forbidden Fruit reviews
All the images that come to mind with an apple
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 52 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9/16/2009 - Complete
Goodbye reviews
Everytime I see someone that looks like you, it tears me apart. I miss you so much, and I love you.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 129 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/28/2009 - Complete