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Author has written 3 stories for Fantasy.

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I'm a college student, looking for some decent feedback. I return reviews. I've participated in critique groups and taken English classes, so I know how to write a detailed critique, and I will absolutely pay it forwards.

If you ask me to beta-read anything for you, I probably will. This includes novels. Especially novels. Especially now because I'm on break.

I have a couple of projects going, but right now I'm exclusively posting short stories from Hymn for Matilda (working title).

Hymn For Matilda:Currently, the manuscript stands at 90k. It is a series of interlocking short stories set in the same world, which is made up of privately owned space empires. After an ill-fated space flight uncovers a cosmic horror that lives on the other side of the mirror, feeding on life and willpower, the powers that be attempt to combat it. Along the way there are thieves, arsonists, androids, washed up starlets, reality warping school kids, professional dreamers, riots, surealist board games, and a general disregard for the hypocratic oath.

All sort stories that I post are a part of this, unless otherwise noted. You do not need to read one to understand the others, but they do compliment each other, and the same characters begin to crop up. I would love to know what you think.

Thanks.

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The Death of the Dark Lord Thirilight by Kyllorac reviews
Meet Thirilight, Dark Lord and current recipient of a sword through the liver. And to think this is just the start of things...
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 15 - Words: 47,837 - Reviews: 67 - Favs: 12 - Follows: 16 - Updated: 8/16/2012 - Published: 7/5/2008
Heir to the Labyrinth by J.L. Lofthouse reviews
She thought she was a normal student but when demon slayer zabriel comes her life gets complicated. She must end a war between light and dark and claim the throne to the underworld but how can she when the guy she is falling for has been sent to kill her
Fiction: Supernatural - Rated: T - English - Romance/Supernatural - Chapters: 15 - Words: 27,613 - Reviews: 24 - Favs: 9 - Follows: 16 - Updated: 7/28/2012 - Published: 11/28/2009
Occupied by RM Jamieson reviews
The world I woke up in that day was very different than what I was used to. Hot, empty, and terribly lonely. Let me tell you how it all began, and how it ended, through my eyes. Let me know what you think!
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: M - English - Suspense/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 831 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 1/1/2012
Sleek Little Black Suits by Faraway Thoughts reviews
Since Man first stopped clubbing each other for dominion and discovered how to conquer minds instead...
Poetry: Politics - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/26/2010 - Complete
An Abiotic Annexation by Lost In Segue reviews
Take the Time...
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/8/2010 - Complete
Hypatia of Alexandria by ivyfurl reviews
She's the symbol of the human race.
Fiction: Historical - Rated: T - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 298 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 3 - Published: 6/21/2010 - Complete
Lost Lenore and Maple Man by Alysia Of The Pen reviews
Lenore and her father were opposites. He was a man made out of ironwood . . . and Lenore was lost in a tornado of color. A short story for writing class. Please read, review, and enjoy!
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: K - English - Family/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,353 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/29/2010 - Complete
Midnight Musings by Ashen Inclementia reviews
The one who steals our last thought is the one we love the most.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Published: 5/21/2010 - Complete
Stars by Prelectricity reviews
Spitballing.
Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/11/2010 - Complete
Comfort Food by SunriseHighway reviews
It's not that hard to figure out, read it to see for yourself.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 129 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/24/2010 - Complete
What Sarah Said by Proud Alien from Planet Reu reviews
I was inspired by Death Cab for Cutie. But this i about my friend, not named Sarah named Stefanie.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 2 - Published: 4/23/2010 - Complete
natural disaster by Minor Masterpiece reviews
lookin' like the hills have eyes !
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 81 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/15/2010
the city is my home by pako-tono reviews
The city streets are my hallways. The skyscrapers my sky. This is my playground: where the dogs run wild and the cats lay low. I have no other home. This is New York City, where no one is actually there. Everyone is a ghost looking for their next life.
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,319 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 4/11/2010 - Complete
Love and Pain by Mindyy Lovely reviews
When my boyfriend/bestfriend was going through a tough part of his life, i wrote this for him.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 118 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 2 - Published: 4/10/2010
Settling by SingViolence reviews
Don't let go. *One of my shorter pieces.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 17 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Published: 4/8/2010 - Complete
Demon Butterfly by xxChao reviews
are you ready oh caught one to face your fate?
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 62 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 3 - Published: 4/7/2010
the ballad of ellie may by pigeons reviews
dependency.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 157 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 2 - Published: 4/5/2010 - Complete
rush by chris spits venom reviews
wrote it on a bus in florida around 5am. R&R, let me know what ya think, thanks in advance
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 46 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Published: 4/5/2010 - Complete
Sam and Max kiddnapped by Averyslade reviews
I was 12 and Sam my older brother was 13 when we were kidnapped. I awake one morning in a dark cold room and i can't see him. I call out for him but i don't get a reply back. Did he leave me? We promised we wouldn't leave each other.
Fiction: Horror - Rated: K+ - English - Horror/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,129 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 4/5/2010 - Complete
Sorry, Scars and Mirrors by The Mandyfish reviews
well...as with most of these, they are just random stuff that I need to get off my mind...
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 2 - Published: 3/31/2010 - Complete
all the kept pieces will lose their place by speakeasy-love reviews
and I will love you no more.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/26/2010 - Complete
Tomorrow, maybe by SunriseHighway reviews
Just read it :
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 156 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 2 - Published: 3/22/2010 - Complete
Taylor by Mindyy Lovely reviews
A sad break up between me and my boyfriend Taylor.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 124 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 2 - Published: 3/21/2010
Without Meaning by Negasi reviews
A song from FAWM and spoken word piece. Kinda blah but cool concept.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 137 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/16/2010
Shoot Laser Beams From My Eyes by Negasi reviews
A song from FAWM.
Poetry: Song - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 99 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/16/2010
Broken Glass by Pieda the Mokona reviews
I'm so sorry... It was my fault.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/16/2010 - Complete
Skin Deep by lights over sounds reviews
Beauty is, most of the time, the greatest deceiver.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Published: 3/13/2010 - Complete
Prayers for Judith by Brian William Barry reviews
Alright, so this will be my first upload. It's about my niece who passed a while back. I wrote it when I was really upset. But I think it has room for improvement.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 133 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/25/2010
Dreaming in Technicolor by Artistik reviews
Shakesperian sonnet. Everyone's had a dream where they're falling; and everyone hates to wake up screaming.
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 3 - Published: 2/25/2010 - Complete
sWINGset by Artistik reviews
21 lines, of a past friendship. A "Found Poem" from a conversation in the past.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 218 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Published: 2/25/2010 - Complete
Laugh it Off by Ashen Inclementia reviews
Even when you're crying inside.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 182 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/21/2010 - Complete
Remember by talented red rose reviews
Remember is a little poem I wote for school and I was told it was ok. It's about remembering someone you lost.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 139 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/28/2010 - Complete
Blood & Hot Sauce by fictionalboyfriend reviews
It's surprising, the things you end up missing the most.
Fiction: Supernatural - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 635 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 5 - Published: 1/20/2010 - Complete
Green Eyes by TheGreyOne reviews
A young girl named Allison was never liked by her classmates or teachers.Since her family passed away,she's been secluded and quiet.Then a new student arrives with a secret,and Allison soon discovers interesting things about herself.
Fiction: Supernatural - Rated: T - English - Romance/Fantasy - Chapters: 2 - Words: 3,417 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 1/15/2010 - Published: 1/9/2010
Untitled by Fairy Genocide reviews
The shallow end of my thoughts.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 47 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/8/2009 - Complete
Play, Pause, FastForward, Rewind Stop by ninemillionhigh reviews
Her eyes were bloodshot and his chest was heaving and Jesus, didn’t they look gorgeous next to each other?
Fiction: Romance - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,261 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 5 - Published: 11/12/2009 - Complete
cross your heart and pray to live by kissing walls reviews
religious breakdowns have no place in a church
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Angst/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 223 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/25/2009 - Complete
A damn sweet tale for you by lymli reviews
read and get scared?
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/3/2009 - Complete
Severity by S.C. Riley reviews
When a vicious storm-without-end begins to brew over the Sea of Naerin, tensions across the continent rise. The land falls into disarray, and chaos begins to take hold. To save themselves, can the people of Adrafàn find the cause of this storm?
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 4 - Words: 8,979 - Reviews: 22 - Favs: 9 - Follows: 8 - Updated: 2/15/2009 - Published: 1/18/2009
Pwned by its.Nothing.Special reviews
So maybe my best friend chose his girlfriend over me, and maybe he only remembered my birthday a week after it had passed. The scrap of paper on my locker said: "I R SORRY." How could I stay mad at a boy who apologized like that? Oneshot.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,578 - Reviews: 88 - Favs: 377 - Follows: 20 - Published: 7/9/2008 - Complete
My city of make believes by normallyabnormal reviews
it's about a city where i'm with my perfect fantasy but i'm all alone
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 195 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/30/2008 - Complete
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Fall in the Empire
"Why have you got a shadow and I don't?" "I think that's a question for your mother. Why don't you ask her, once winter comes?"
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Sci-Fi - Chapters: 1 - Words: 598 - Follows: 1 - Published: 12/27/2013
Transmissions from a Tin Can reviews
The grating white noise was replaced by a the broken voice of a mission control operative. "Matilda, come in…Come in. Come in. Is there anyone there? Anyone? Do you read me? It's been almost a week since we've heard from you. Come in. " A doomed space flight uncovers a cosmic horror that lives on the other side of the mirror. Reviews returned.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Adventure - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,461 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12/27/2013 - Published: 12/22/2013
The Snow's Coming Down Soon reviews
"You don't even know when you're dreaming anymore, do you?" She looks at him and he looks back at her waiting for her to blink in Morse code or slip him the paper wrapper of the sandwich so that he can decode it but she doesn't. She says, "I hate this place."-With the help of a friend Terrence-a professional dreamer-fights to keep from losing his grip on reality. Reviews returned.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Friendship - Chapters: 4 - Words: 2,216 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12/27/2013 - Published: 12/22/2013
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