Hobbit4Lyfe
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Joined 08-29-09, id: 686733, Profile Updated: 04-28-13
Author has written 51 stories for Kids, Fable, Family, Nature, Supernatural, Horror, Humor, Politics, Humor, Play, Biography, General, Essay, Love, Life, Thriller, Song, Historical, Young Adult, and Fantasy.

Hobbit4Lyfe


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Sorry I'm not on here that much. I'm mostly on my FanFiction account (See the link below).

A lot of the stories I have on here are really old... and mostly for cheesy school or summer camp projects.

Well, actually, I exetended my currently untitled story from one I wrote for a summer camp. It used to be only about 98 percent of Chapter One, but I decided I liked it enough to continue with it.

Please review my stories! The more the merrier!

BTW... I have constructive criticism issues. I like good reviews, but for some reason, I have trouble dealing with negative reviews...


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http://www.fanfiction.net/hobbit4lyfe

My Teen Idols 4 You profile

http://www.teenidols4you.com/videos/profile.html?u=186FleetStreet

My YouTube channel

http://www.youtube.com/user/ChattergeeSquirrel42

My Psycho 50th anniversary poem

http://www.thepsychomovies.com/films/psycho/50years/cagedfreedom.html

Webber's Woods by Thomas White reviews
While looking over a possible site for investment, I stumbled upon a strange story over forty years in the telling. What I found there, in the remains of Lindy Park's "Webber's Woods" still haunts me to this day.
Fiction: Horror - Rated: T - English - Horror/Supernatural - Chapters: 3 - Words: 2,963 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 10/19/2010 - Published: 10/17/2010
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The Mansion in the Woods reviews
A young woman's eighteenth birthday party takes a series of wrong turns when she and her friends decide to take a walk down a driveway in the woods at night. A horror story based on when I was at my friend's party and we decided to try it. Please review.
Fiction: Horror - Rated: T - English - Horror/Suspense - Chapters: 3 - Words: 344 - Reviews: 3 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 1/21 - Published: 1/14/2011
Views from Atop Playground Ladders reviews
The title is kinda self-explanatory. These are poems I wrote based on instances in my life. Please review.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 3 - Words: 782 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11/3/2013 - Published: 1/31/2012
Anna, Not Rapunzel
This is my own spin on the Rapunzel story. Princess Anna de Hulse of the Kingdom of Georgmasn isn't your normal damsel in distress. Heck, she isn't even in distress. She won't take crap from anyone and makes her own destiny. Please review.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Humor/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 143 - Published: 5/23/2012
Bloodlust Sacrifice
This is adapted from my 2012 Script Frenzy submission. It's a vampire story as anti-Twilight as possible meets ancient religious sacrifices. This full moon, the vampires and werewolves are at war again... over a mortal girl. Please review.
Fiction: Thriller - Rated: T - English - Horror/Supernatural - Chapters: 5 - Words: 3,490 - Updated: 5/23/2012 - Published: 5/15/2012
The Future School of Lucy Ross reviews
Lucy Ross is a normal high school student. The problem: It's 3535. Unfortunately, high school hasn't changed much. That is, until something goes terribly wrong... Please review.
Fiction: Thriller - Rated: T - English - Crime/Mystery - Chapters: 7 - Words: 466 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4/13/2012 - Published: 7/24/2011
The Whitten Gazette
This is the only published edition of the class newspaper my classmates and I wrote in the beginning of 5th grade. Please review.
Fiction: Kids - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Friendship - Chapters: 16 - Words: 1,223 - Published: 2/1/2012 - Complete
Sunset Runaway Twins 1: Into the Sunset reviews
Samantha and Kailani are twins. They live in Old Town Manassas. One day, they decide to run away one night after play practice. They run along the train tracks by night and shop or rest by day. Read along as their journey unfolds. Please review.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 2 - Words: 578 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/31/2012
Rachel's Crazy Day
This is a story I wrote in my 6th grade English class, featuring my friend Rachel. I can't remember what the prompt was, though. Please review.
Fiction: Humor - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 259 - Published: 1/31/2012 - Complete
What If: A Girl Scout Poem
This is a poem I wrote between third and fourth grade about Girl Scouts, as a Brownie. Please review.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 69 - Published: 1/31/2012 - Complete
FAVS 100 Final Paper
This is the final paper I wrote for one of the film classes as part of the film major at my college. Please review.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: T - English - Drama/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 932 - Published: 1/31/2012 - Complete
Studio A Critiques
These are critiques for a TV-about-film series I did for one of the film classes as part of the film major at my college. Please review.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 4 - Words: 1,107 - Published: 1/31/2012 - Complete
One of Your Own
William Ulrich is used to change. He expects it. His senior year of high school will bring him changes that even he can't see coming. Please review.
Fiction: Thriller - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 7 - Words: 1,549 - Updated: 1/31/2012 - Published: 7/24/2011
Savannah Travel Diary: Spring Break 2004
This is the travel diary of two sisters that go to Savannah, Georgia with their family. Please review.
Fiction: Kids - Rated: K - English - Friendship/Humor - Chapters: 24 - Words: 720 - Published: 1/15/2012 - Complete
University 100 Journals and Responses
These are journals and school event responses I wrote in my intro to college life class my first semester of my first year of college. Please review.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: T - English - Drama/Friendship - Chapters: 5 - Words: 1,023 - Published: 1/15/2012 - Complete
Public Speaking Discussions
These are discussion responses I wrote the first semester of my freshman year of college for my public speaking class, when we had online discussions instead of meeting in the classroom. Please review.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 2 - Words: 555 - Published: 1/15/2012 - Complete
The Enlightenment and the Government reviews
This is an essay I wrote in my 12th grade government class. Please review.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 294 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/15/2012 - Complete
On the Right Path
This is the research paper I did my first year of college, the first semester. It's about creating bike paths for the safety of riders. Please review.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 678 - Published: 1/15/2012 - Complete
English 101 Research Topic
This is something I wrote in my English class the first semester of my first year of college, about the process I used when writing the research paper I did in that class. Please review.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 510 - Published: 1/15/2012 - Complete
Fall for the Book
This is a response I wrote in my first semester English class my first year of college about a local literary festival. Please review.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 308 - Published: 1/15/2012 - Complete
The Journal of Marie Lest
This is the journal of Marie Lest, a girl living during the American Revolution. I wrote this in 5th grade, so it's not necessarily historically accurate. I tried to fix as many mistakes as possible. Please review.
Fiction: Historical - Rated: K+ - English - Family/Drama - Chapters: 6 - Words: 775 - Published: 1/14/2012 - Complete
Founding Fathers' Principles
This is a short essay I wrote in my 12th grade government class. Please review.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Published: 1/8/2012 - Complete
My Favorite Toy
This is an essay I wrote for my 6th grade English class. Not my best work. Please review.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Humor/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 190 - Published: 1/8/2012 - Complete
Mr Whitten and the Murder Mystery
This is the sequel to Mr. Whitten and the Case of the Missing Class. The kids are back to pull a new prank on the teacher. Please review.
Fiction: Kids - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 164 - Published: 1/8/2012
Beach Travel Diary: Summer 2003 reviews
This is the travel diary of two sisters that go to the beach with their family. Please review.
Fiction: Kids - Rated: K - English - Friendship/Humor - Chapters: 3 - Words: 126 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/23/2011 - Complete
Lock Up the Door reviews
This is a song I wrote in 8th grade about running away. Please review.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 120 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/23/2011 - Complete
Someone Save Me (This Crazy World)
This is a song I wrote in 8th grade about music and wanting to be different. Please review.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 118 - Published: 12/23/2011 - Complete
Rain reviews
A poem about the end of the school year, new friends, and reflecting on the fun had with them that year. Please review.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 306 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5/16/2011 - Complete
Poem on a Bathroom Stall 2
I found this poem on a bathroom stall at my school when I was in my first year of college. I don't know who first wrote it, but I decided to copy it down and eventually to put it on here. Please review.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 46 - Published: 5/10/2011 - Complete
Poems reviews
These are some random poems I wrote a long time ago. Please review.
Poetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 12 - Words: 473 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4/25/2011 - Published: 9/1/2009 - Complete
School Lunches PSA reviews
This is a PSA I wrote in my TV Productions class in 11th grade about the lunches at my school being really bad, even though a lot of people bought them. Please review.
Fiction: Humor - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 101 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 2 - Published: 4/19/2011 - Complete
The iParag reviews
This is what I did for my TV productions midterm in 12th grade. It's a parody of Nigahiga's YouTube iPod Human parody. Please review.
Fiction: Humor - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 314 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 4/18/2011 - Complete
Selina reviews
This is a short essay/story I wrote on my own one time, I think over winter vacation, in the fourth grade. Please review.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Friendship/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 50 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/5/2011 - Complete
Therapy reviews
This is a skit my friends and I wrote for our theater class during my freshman year of high school. Please review.
Fiction: Play - Rated: T - English - Drama/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 314 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3/5/2011 - Complete
Banksy
This is something I wrote in English when we were examining art. I can't remember why we did that exactly, but I think it was something about observing things and describing them in detail. Please review.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: T - English - Drama/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 121 - Published: 1/19/2011 - Complete
English Journals
These are some of the journals I did in my English class first semester of my first year of college. The others are on my FanFiction page. Please review.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 6 - Words: 1,055 - Published: 1/19/2011 - Complete
Mr Whitten and the Case of the Missing Class reviews
This is a short story I wrote for my teacher in the 5th grade. I based it loosely on a prank my principal had my class pull on the teacher one day. I corrected some minor grammatical issues before posting. Please review.
Fiction: Kids - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Mystery - Chapters: 9 - Words: 952 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Published: 1/10/2011 - Complete
Whose Artifact Is It Anyway?
This is a research paper I did in English in the 10th grade. It's about the theft of artifacts from their own countries. Please review.
Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Crime - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,376 - Published: 1/8/2011 - Complete
Snow reviews
This is a short poem I wrote about a snowy winter night. Please review.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12/6/2010 - Complete
Trash Can
A short story about Six Flags America in Maryland and a trash can. Please review.
Fiction: Biography - Rated: K - English - Humor/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 185 - Published: 11/26/2010 - Complete
Vocabulary Poems reviews
These are some poems my classmates and I wrote for a set of vocabulary words one year for English class. Some of them don't really make sense. Please review.
Poetry: Humor - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Poetry - Chapters: 9 - Words: 153 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 10/11/2010 - Complete
Vocabulary Skits reviews
These are some vocabulary skits my friends and I wrote in English class during various years of high school. Please review.
Fiction: Play - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Humor - Chapters: 2 - Words: 184 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10/10/2010 - Complete
Ways to Pass the AP US History AP Exam reviews
This is something my friends wrote for our AP US History class our junior year of high school the class period before the national AP Exam. Please review.
Fiction: Humor - Rated: T - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 69 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10/10/2010 - Complete
Why Did the Chicken Cross the Road?
I just randomly made up this spin on the old riddle. Please review.
Fiction: Humor - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Published: 9/3/2010 - Complete
Government Poems
Two poems I co-wrote with a friend for our government class during 12th grade. Please review.
Poetry: Politics - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 2 - Words: 312 - Published: 8/24/2010 - Complete
Random Poems reviews
These are some random poems I wrote a long time ago. Some of the later ones were co-written by my sister. They seem strange, but they were our first attempts at writing poetry. No, we weren't high or drunk writing them, just really young. Please review.
Poetry: Humor - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Humor - Chapters: 5 - Words: 170 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10/10/2009 - Complete
Stormy Night Murder
This is a story I wrote while coming up for script ideas for a drama camp a while back. See also: The History of the Ghost Train, one of my other stories. Please review.
Fiction: Horror - Rated: T - English - Horror/Suspense - Chapters: 3 - Words: 854 - Follows: 1 - Published: 9/25/2009
The History of the Ghost Train reviews
This is a story I wrote for a friend based on a story told in a drama camp play we were in and helped write. Please review.
Fiction: Supernatural - Rated: K+ - English - Supernatural/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 133 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9/25/2009 - Complete
Poem on a Bathroom Stall reviews
I found this poem on a bathroom stall at my school when I was in 11th grade. I don't know who first wrote it, but I decided to copy it down and eventually to put it on here. Please review.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 40 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/25/2009 - Complete
Fall Poems reviews
These are some random poems about fall that I wrote in English class a few years ago. Please review.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 3 - Words: 39 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9/2/2009 - Complete
How the Cell Phone Came to Be reviews
A myth that my friends and I wrote in English class after our Native American myths unit. Please review.
Fiction: Fable - Rated: K+ - English - Supernatural/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 621 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/1/2009 - Complete
Polly's Ice Cream Tree reviews
What happens when Polly finds a strange pack of seeds lying on the side of the road? Please review.
Fiction: Kids - Rated: K - English - Humor/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 326 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9/1/2009 - Complete