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Joined 11-07-09, id: 696763, Profile Updated: 02-19-14
Author has written 8 stories for Fable, Horror, Life, General, Kids, Romance, and Thriller.

I remember once upon a time I had a profile page filled with information; I also had at least five stories on the site. For some reason past me though it was best to take everything down. I did that so that I would actively pursue my dream of being a fiction author; it didn't work. Not only did it not work it did nothing for me. Now no one can read my work and that's a little depressing for someone like me.

I'm 19 years old and live a (unintentional on purpose) isolated life in Montreal, Quebec. I say this so that you have more information to judge my work thoroughly. I attend the school Dawson College and have been "writing" since grade 9.

I say I've been writing, writing in quotes, since grade 9 since that's the day that I realized what a joy it was to write; not only that but I found out the joy of reading that year as well. Previously to grade 9 I had difficulties reading and despised it. It was hard, it took forever to read something; why not just watch a movie. I thought everyone has the same problems as me. Well, not everyone; in grade 7 I was placed in a special class that was designed to help students like myself to read better. Two years after I finally picked up my first book unrelated to school: Darren Shan's "Cirque Du Freak" series. For those of you that have read the series you understand how naive a reader I was when I say that the introduction, where he said this was a true story, convinced me that the story was indeed true; That is until the second book. I found this gem of a book in grade 9 and never stopped reading the series; I almost failed because I was reading the books during class and wouldn't do my homework in place of reading.

I went a bit off track, back to the reason I put writing in quotes. I'm a bit of a perfectionist; that is, I have trouble to start writing an idea and I wont allow myself to move on to a different project without finishing the one I started. This leads me to not write anything for a long period of time. So although I've started writing since I was 13, I've only actually written approximately 10 stories. A bit of good news though, the gaps between when I stop writing and start again are getting smaller and smaller still.

I want to review as many stories as I can on this site to try and help other people with their writing; take note that it may sometimes appear that I'm writing words of malice but I'm honestly trying to help. However, I will not read or review stories written by people with no profile information nor profile picture. Take the time to say something about yourself; otherwise I will assume you are a selfish writer only looking for other people's opinions without the intent of reciprocating.

My Legacy User Stats:

You are on the favorites list of 4 members

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You have submitted a total of 67 signed reviews

total words achieved: 11,315

Average number of words per story: 1,414

Total views to your profile page: 504

Most popular story: "Void" with 142 views


My hobbies include; writing, reading, anime, music, criticizing, gym.

My favorite story that I have written: "One Hour"

Favorite book: "Lolita" by Nabokov Vladimir

Favorite anime: can't choose only one; "Angel Beats", "Usagi Drop", Mirai Nikki", Kimi to Boku"

Favorite musical piece: currently "Lion", Undead Hollywood - Night core version

Favorite criticism: "The trouble with most of us is that we would rather be ruined by praise than saved by criticism." -Norman Vincent Peale

Favorite gym: I have only ever gone to the YMCA

That's all for now,
Uncivilized

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Rex, My Old Friend reviews
Will is adamant on getting further in life. Rex, though, is doing what he can to make sure that his buddy Will doesn't end up stuck doing what he doesn't enjoy; Rex takes him out for a fun night out to introduce him to new things. Who knows maybe they'll find out what Will is really good at, his passion.
Fiction: Thriller - Rated: T - English - Crime/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,876 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/23/2013 - Complete
Overlord
The position of authority is powerful and in need of responsible people; the position of authority is so easily abused. A story about the power of authority.
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Family/Crime - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,165 - Published: 11/13/2013 - Complete
Void reviews
Beverly is a beautiful lady, stunning actually. Beauty can't fill the void.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,210 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/13/2013 - Complete
A visit
A visit to his grandparents cabin with his friend gives these to kids the opportunity to an adventure that doesn't present itself often. But adventure entitles a certain amount of risk as these two will soon find out.
Fiction: Kids - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,303 - Published: 11/13/2013 - Complete
One Hour reviews
Jerald has a hard time to get started on his work so he bought an hour glass in hopes that he could start working when pressured. The hour glass isn't your average hourglass; but it works.
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,106 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11/12/2013 - Complete
I Had a Dream of Fame and Fortune
A different perspective on the common notion of Fame and Fortune.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 177 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/11/2013 - Complete
Fragile Hearts reviews
The heart is such a fragile thing, both physically and emotionally.
Fiction: Horror - Rated: T - English - Crime/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 515 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/9/2013 - Complete
Land of the Large
Though not a typical fable, five potential superintendents must test themselves in order to prove which among them is capable of standing next to the King as his most trusted ally.
Fiction: Fable - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 963 - Published: 11/6/2013 - Complete