A little about me. Well I've been writting for a years but never brave enough to actually allow someone to read it. So I found Fictionpress after writting on fan fiction for a couple of months. I wanted to see what people thought of my own work and not characters from others. So please let me know what you think, what I need to improve on. I like all supernatural story lines. Of course with the twilight phenom sweaping the country I'm a twihard girl. I also love buffy and angel, vampire diaries (way before everyone else got into them. Back when they came out and I was in school.), Underworld, and so on. I love to read and creative writting is my favorite past time.

So check out the story and let me know.

I love reviews just like everyone else so check out my forum http://www.fictionpress.com/forum/Review_Zone/4463/

I love the fact that people make my story or someone's story their favorite but wouldn't it be nice to tell the author why it's your favorite? Or when you leave a review actually write one that is one. Not just something you can PM like "Can't wait! update soon." What's up with that?