![]() Hello, Everyone. I'm new to this site and i just wanted to post a story, i have not finished yet, on here. I'm not very good with punctuations or good choice of words, but bare with me here. I hope you enjoy and please review. I'll review for you in return when i have the time For those of you who have read my story before i made revisions on it, sorry if i confused you. I fixed it and hope it now makes more sense. Please review my stories and tell me what i need work on, and how to fix it, or if you would like to complement on it, then fill free to do so. As a writing novice, i would really appreciate it. Thank you! Sorry if i take forever to post stories. I have a bad habit of not finishing some because of the new ideas i have for a new story. As of right now, I am working on three stories, so for me to focus on one is going to be a challenge for me. My goal: To actually finish a story no matter how many days, months, years it may take me. (hopefully it doesn't lead up to a year) About myself: Hi, nice to meet you. Im 17 and i love to read! Im from India but was born in Kentucky. And i believe God is the way, the truth, and the life |