GOOD CRITIQUE WELCOME HERE
I figured this would be as good a place as any to post my stories and get good critique on them, which is what I mean. I'm hoping that there will be people willing to tell me what my flaws in my stories are as I would do for them.
So, without further ado, let's get this over with.
And if you review me I'll review you.
(1) Devil's Play
(1) Mirror, Mirror
(2) Not Happily Ever After