Bamara
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Joined 06-22-10, id: 731223, Profile Updated: 10-18-11
Author has written 1 story for Supernatural.

I'm just one of many.

I'm an aspiring writer. At the moment, I'm focused on honing my writing skills; I have only just started to write stories (Essays and such in school I have been writing for as long as I can remember). Well, I've been writing for the past two years, but I never managed to finish anything, just tidbits. Now, I'm making the attempt to finish my stories, because it's just so annoying to have unfinished stories in docs.

And because I want to improve my writing, I would appreciate it so very much if you read my stories AND critique them. I would like to hear positive reviews, but hey, if my story just isn't that great or my writing for that matter or both, I welcome constructive criticism. Really, I would. :-)

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I lay face down in bed, eyes shut tight against my pillow. Frantic, I prayed the Our Father. I prayed, I wished, I hoped that he wouldn't visit me tonight. All hope vanished when I heard the familiar, rhythmic tapping on my window.
Fiction: Supernatural - Rated: T - English - Supernatural - Chapters: 9 - Words: 7,779 - Reviews: 34 - Favs: 25 - Follows: 27 - Updated: 7/18/2010 - Published: 6/24/2010