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Author has written 3 stories for Mystery.

UPDATE: I have uploaded my new story, THE CRYSTAL AXE. This will be my biggest story yet, and I can't wait to finish it. I am focusing all reviews on The Crystal Axe which means that The Hatred Key and Off The Radar have had review returns on hold until further notice. THANKS SO MUCH AND REVIEWS ARE RETURNED TO MY NEW AMAZING STORY, THE CRYSTAL AXE! :)

Hi, my name is Nick, and I have 3 stories currently at FictionPress. I love writing and reading, and I am so happy with all the reviews I am getting. If you review my story, I will review your story, simple as that! I have had lots of people came and read my story, so PLEASE REVIEW AS YOU WILL GET A REVIEW/S RETURNED!

Reviews 101 - My new forum. Read interesting stories, and get reviews yourselfs! You can introduce yourself on the Welcome page, and read interesting stories, and get reviewed in return on Reviews 101 Review Game No. 1 or Reviews 101 Review Game No. 2! Also if you are looking for Review Buddies, you can get one here, and there will be running monthly reviewing and writing competitions. If you are stuck for ideas for a story, Reviews 101 Idea Help will help get ideas and you can also help someone else. So check it out!

THE CRYSTAL AXE BLOG: My new story, The Crystal Axe, now has a new blog. The Crystal Axe Blog showcases all the chapters that are posted here and you can also comment there as well! Please visit! Thanks! :)




Mark Hush is just a normal person, until he picks up the newspaper, and discovers an advertisement that changed his life. Soon he is in the army, and heading towards Berlin in Germany for his first mission. Meanwhile unpacking cargo, he finds a key in a Russian Army plane, and Mark observes that the key he found is special, due to the stories he heard from the other members of the army. But not the nice type of special. The key could unleash dreadful powers, and kill every living human being on earth, and explode neighbouring planets in a blink of an eye.

Will Mark solve the dark mystery, or will the awful, killing powers be unleashed...


PROGRESS UPDATE: Posting chapters on this story is currently on hold until further notice. Sorry to those who would like to have more! :( THIS MEANS THAT REVIEWS WILL NOT BE RETURNED!


The New York spring of 1952 saw Syerl Goldsen found guilty of bombing a Pan American World Airways Douglas DC-6B killing all 82 passengers and crew onboard, including well-known and successful businessman, Bill Grater and his family. Syerl is punished to life in prison, but 58 years after his trial at the age of 99, he gets released due to a growing heart disease, and the doctor’s give him six to eight months to live. Syerl decides to fly to his home country, Java, Indonesia.

Will he survive, or will he become the victim?


PROGRESS UPDATE: Prologue has just been posted. Am currently working on Chapter 1 and will post once finished!


The Crystal Axe is currently a new story that will be my biggest yet. A summary will be written up on completion of story!


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Jemima by Who Is This Girl Anyway reviews
A centuries-long antipathy between the lord of the maenor and the last witch in the land comes to a head. The witch's helper, Lucy, relays the story. A low-fantasy story with themes of cowardice, loyalty and the longing to live up to your heroes.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Drama/Supernatural - Chapters: 8 - Words: 12,922 - Reviews: 69 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 5 - Updated: 7/4/2023 - Published: 7/21/2011
Kid by Alias Blue reviews
This story is being rewritten as "The Conduit". Updated Weekly. Please R & R there!
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Drama - Chapters: 4 - Words: 100 - Reviews: 292 - Favs: 27 - Follows: 26 - Updated: 9/9/2013 - Published: 1/7/2009
Farro by Arreana reviews
PUBLISHED! She is the kidnapped prisoner of an assassinated priest. He is the assassin. They are thrown together, tortured slum girl and embittered Crown Prince, upon a perilous road to freedom. COMPLETE!
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 35 - Words: 121,390 - Reviews: 377 - Favs: 256 - Follows: 93 - Updated: 7/11/2013 - Published: 1/22/2011 - Complete
What Lurks Behind the Shadows by Bubblefish-Says-Meow reviews
When a mysterious shadow entity is killing random people all around the town, Ella doesn't really pay attention or care... Until his vengeance hits close to home.
Fiction: Mystery - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Adventure - Chapters: 4 - Words: 2,078 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 6/1/2013 - Published: 1/10/2011
Penumbrae by esthaelum reviews
As a typical princess, Jenna is spoilt and wishes for adventure and action in her life. Somehow, her wish is granted during her seventeenth birthday and she is suddenly thrown into a world of brutal reality and dark curses. Alongside her childhood friend, a grumpy thief, and a magical elf, Jenna must now find a way to get her life back before the darkness takes everything away.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 54 - Words: 283,736 - Reviews: 1123 - Favs: 152 - Follows: 153 - Updated: 4/13/2013 - Published: 10/26/2010
After the Storm by MercedesPhoenix reviews
Nobody expects a school shooting to happen, so what do you do if somebody sets off a couple bombs? This is about a group of kids coping to life after the tragedy, trying to find the person who did it, and coming to terms with life never being the same.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Drama - Chapters: 3 - Words: 3,996 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 6 - Updated: 9/21/2012 - Published: 10/21/2010
The Angel Kristoph by Dr. Self Destruct reviews
/Story Removed/
Fiction: Supernatural - Rated: M - English - Horror/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 7 - Reviews: 719 - Favs: 98 - Follows: 60 - Updated: 7/24/2012 - Published: 6/7/2011 - Complete
Rise From The Ashes by Kobra Kid reviews
Death never crossed Keira's mind, since she is an Immortal. But, all of that changes when a man, Alocer, pays a visit to her house on a dark winter night. Now, Keira is spiraling into a world full of death, tragic secrets, and despair. Reviews returned!
Fiction: Supernatural - Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Adventure - Chapters: 14 - Words: 51,372 - Reviews: 544 - Favs: 43 - Follows: 54 - Updated: 11/30/2011 - Published: 10/26/2010
Curiosity Killed the Kat by Angel Ella reviews
Katrina has met an unfortunate end and she has left everyone stumped as to what happened. Do you know?
Fiction: Mystery - Rated: T - English - Mystery - Chapters: 8 - Words: 4,729 - Reviews: 26 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 4 - Updated: 11/27/2011 - Published: 12/30/2010
The Seeker by Kristin Li reviews
Julian's world is blown apart when his best friend Thomas passes and the love of his life, Frances, disappears. With nothing left to lose, he attempts to find Frances only to find himself plunged in a world of video tapes and black magic. This story is old and not very good. This is the revised version of my story for National Writing Month 2010.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 14 - Words: 20,995 - Reviews: 125 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 8/27/2011 - Published: 1/10/2011
El Tierra del Poderoso by Angel Ella reviews
Abriella has been captured by demons and taken to a world that she didn't even know existed. A man from El Tierra del Poderoso has come to help her, but his world seems even stranger than the scary one into which she was forced.
Fiction: Supernatural - Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Adventure - Chapters: 3 - Words: 1,933 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 6/26/2011 - Published: 12/30/2010
Samantha Rose Gray by laurenc176 reviews
A young girl with nothing left, finds a new adventure through a simple letter her father left her on her 15th birthday, and her gorgeous blue-eyed nieghbour will help her find herself once again.
Fiction: Mystery - Rated: K+ - English - Suspense/Romance - Chapters: 4 - Words: 3,082 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 6/7/2011 - Published: 12/26/2010
Gold by blondechicka242 reviews
The Sea Walker, a notorious serial killer, is reaking havoc on Dallas, Texas. Will Anna Dae and the rest of the Robbery-And-Homicide team be able to stop him/her? Yeah, the summary sucks. Please give it a shot, though! It's better than it sounds!
Fiction: Mystery - Rated: T - English - Crime/Mystery - Chapters: 7 - Words: 7,736 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 6/3/2011 - Published: 1/10/2011 - Complete
Paranoia by ohemgitsal reviews
Marilyn Hughes was seventeen when she disappeared. Who can solve the patterns and clues Marilyn left before she vanished?
Fiction: Mystery - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Tragedy - Chapters: 20 - Words: 19,092 - Reviews: 54 - Favs: 10 - Follows: 6 - Updated: 5/27/2011 - Published: 12/31/2010 - Complete
Elias: The Gifted by Iristar reviews
Elias is a somewhat gifted detective, with the ability to see what another person has with ease. He definitely gets more than bargained for when he runs into a criminal that knows him far too well.
Fiction: Mystery - Rated: T - English - Horror/Supernatural - Chapters: 2 - Words: 811 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 5/17/2011 - Published: 1/16/2011 - Complete
Kidnapped by Melody H reviews
So letting a neighbors dog out turns into a huge hassle when some men,sounding as though they know me,kidnap me.I'm taken to an unknown place where a whole story slowly unfolds before me.I'm introduced to some weird people and one that becomes my friend.
Fiction: Mystery - Rated: T - English - Mystery - Chapters: 4 - Words: 1,852 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 5/12/2011 - Published: 12/12/2010
Minor Talent by Dreamers-Requiem reviews
Hazel East has met them all; she fits men into catagories, Singer, Guitarist, Bassist and Drummer. Her life revolves around music. She breathes it, talks it and writes it. Until she meets a band called Minor Talent, that is.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 34 - Words: 7,208 - Reviews: 353 - Favs: 131 - Follows: 97 - Updated: 4/6/2011 - Published: 2/25/2010 - Complete
Yours Truly, An Indian Pessimist by StoryMonster reviews
I was the pretty amusing girl with the funny accent. I hated him. He liked me. Did I like him? I certainly thought not. Yours Truly, An Indian Pessimist. Nominated for SKoW!
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,380 - Reviews: 174 - Favs: 10 - Follows: 23 - Updated: 2/26/2011 - Published: 11/25/2010
Ione by Eva Rieycoit reviews
Old evil haunted that lake, something that feasted on the flesh and blood of men. Drawn to the cruelly beautiful woman in the mysterious lake, Rhys finds himself not only in danger of losing his life to her, but his heart as well. Full summary inside.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Horror - Chapters: 4 - Words: 15,018 - Reviews: 55 - Favs: 13 - Follows: 13 - Updated: 2/22/2011 - Published: 3/3/2010
67 by Dreamers-Requiem reviews
Snapshot from I Found Away The Black Cat always thought she could work alone; on a mission, she is proved very wrong.
Fiction: Action - Rated: K - English - Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,476 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/2/2011 - Complete
Who the hell am I? by MelissaTakashi reviews
Life can be a little rough sometimes. I should know, I’ve been through it all. My names Melissa Rose. I am a 16 year old female, who has no idea who I am or where I came from
Fiction: Mystery - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Romance - Chapters: 4 - Words: 3,575 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 1/21/2011 - Published: 1/11/2011
Fear by OMFGcupcakes reviews
Strange dreams and nightmares have been affecting the student's of Stelle Academy. Amy, Elisabeth, and Ryan do their best to figure it out.
Fiction: Mystery - Rated: K+ - English - Mystery/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 919 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 1/11/2011
Honest Heart, Lying Mouth by Purple Lex reviews
OneShot: Sophie saw it coming. She is who she is. Hopefully he understands.
Fiction: Mystery - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 461 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 1/7/2011 - Complete
Kidnapped by Invisi-Camryn reviews
Just because Kaitlyn went up to listen in, she was pushed behind the door and not seen when they took everyone else away. Now it's all up to her to bring back her classmates and friends, alive or dead. Suck at summarys. R&R I need 1 review per chapter.
Fiction: Mystery - Rated: T - English - Horror/Mystery - Chapters: 3 - Words: 960 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 12/26/2010 - Published: 12/25/2010
Static by capyle reviews
A man wakes up in an empty office, staring at a TV with no signal. He has no memory of his past, nor does he know who was responsible. He has no choice but to follow cryptic clues that seemingly lead him nowhere.
Fiction: Mystery - Rated: T - English - Suspense/Spiritual - Chapters: 14 - Words: 15,473 - Reviews: 28 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 4 - Updated: 12/14/2010 - Published: 11/19/2010 - Complete
Melody by EndingLove reviews
When time stops will the melody still continue?
Fiction: Mystery - Rated: K+ - English - Mystery/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 455 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 3 - Published: 12/9/2010 - Complete
Secrets by JoJo69 reviews
All we know about Jessica is that she changed her name,changed schools,and has something to hide. What is her secret and can she keep it around all of the gorgeous guys and preppy girls at WestWick Acadmey? Or will she break and tell someone what she did?
Fiction: Mystery - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Romance - Chapters: 4 - Words: 7,949 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 12/3/2010 - Published: 11/21/2010
Ghost Cat Preview by Chatty Confusion reviews
School work for the snow. 'Ghost Cat' supposed to be a mystery/supense story, but it kind of turned into a horror/humor/mystery. Oh well. Please give me some critical reviews, though any reviews are appreciated. Unknown if I'll finish this. May update.
Fiction: Mystery - Rated: K - English - Humor/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 597 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 11/30/2010
Journals in the City Alex in the Beginning by xandriacafe reviews
This a story About a few peope who have one thing in common. But what is it about them that makes them feel incomplete. Lets follow their thoughts and actions on ther journey to self discovery.
Fiction: Mystery - Rated: K - English - Mystery/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,689 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 11/22/2010 - Published: 11/21/2010
What Have I Done? by patelph reviews
A woman thinks her husband is trying to kill her. But what is really going on?
Fiction: Mystery - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,945 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 11/19/2010 - Complete
Charlie by Akadrama reviews
A night to remember. Please, please R&R, I'll do the same for you. Slash if you care, because it doesn't affect the story in the least.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,895 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 4 - Published: 10/25/2010 - Complete
A Recipe For Disaster by IronSpockMaster reviews
247 word limit. 246 words. A recipe that doesn't turn out quite as planned.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 254 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/11/2010 - Complete
Sense of Urgency by Moonraker One reviews
14 year old Jeff Vando is the most powerful kid in the world. He's indestructible. He can outfly a beam of light. His strength? Limitless. He can fire energy. All he wants is for people to stop wanting him to do annoying things, like be a superhero.
Fiction: Action - Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Adventure - Chapters: 12 - Words: 37,397 - Reviews: 81 - Favs: 21 - Follows: 16 - Updated: 9/18/2010 - Published: 10/17/2009 - Complete
Twisted Logic by Kobra Kid reviews
A poetry collection about the struggles, drama, and heartbreak of an average high school girl. any reviews are greatly appreciated and returned. thank you.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 5 - Words: 771 - Reviews: 44 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 2 - Published: 7/26/2010
Letters by ranDUMM reviews
Alcohol. Abuse. Fear. Words Emily, her mother and brother have lived with for their whole lives. But now things have changed. Together, they escape from their dad and build a new life for themselves, that will challenge everything they ever knew.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Family - Chapters: 9 - Words: 36 - Reviews: 160 - Favs: 13 - Follows: 18 - Updated: 7/18/2010 - Published: 7/10/2009
The Mesmerizing Murderess by thefaultinourpatronus reviews
She was good at her job. Perhaps too good. Until she met him. And suddenly, none of it seemed to matter anymore. Would that stop her? ONESHOT.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 11 - Reviews: 39 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 2 - Published: 7/9/2010 - Complete
Forget it by sparrowy99 reviews
Rebecca wants to forget her old life is Hawaii and move to New York, where she wants to become a model. But leaving so many people behind is hard for her, and her memories of her past continue to haunt her. Will she leave and start a new life, or stay?
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 402 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/26/2010
The Forest Is Alive by May Fox reviews
When you read this, you will find yourself asking these questions: Who was the girl? Why was she in the forest? How did she die?
Fiction: Mystery - Rated: K+ - English - Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 165 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/18/2010 - Complete
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The Crystal Axe reviews
The Crystal Axe, found by King Henry I in 1109, is the most priceless monument in Britain, stored in the Natural History museum, but when it is stolen in mysterious ciricumstances, only Mark Hush can determine the cause of the mystery that gripped the UK
Fiction: Mystery - Rated: K+ - English - Mystery/Crime - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,763 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 3 - Published: 9/2/2011
Off The Radar reviews
In 1952, Syerl Goldsen is sentenced to life in prison after bombing a plane killing everyone on board. At the age of 99 he gets released and decides to fly back to his home country. Will he survive or will his past actions come back to haunt him? R&R
Fiction: Mystery - Rated: K+ - English - Mystery/Crime - Chapters: 4 - Words: 4,756 - Reviews: 64 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 6 - Updated: 6/25/2011 - Published: 1/29/2011
The Hatred Key reviews
Mark Hush is just a normal person, until he reads a newspaper advertisement. He learns about The Hatred Key, that could unleash dreadful powers, and kill every human being on earth. Will Mark solve the dark mystery, or will the powers be unleashed! R&R
Fiction: Mystery - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Adventure - Chapters: 14 - Words: 10,563 - Reviews: 85 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 1/19/2011 - Published: 10/5/2010 - Complete
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