Laura B B
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Joined 10-31-10, id: 750079, Profile Updated: 11-29-10
Author has written 4 stories for Sci-Fi, and Young Adult.

Hello, I'm Laura Bareis, and 14 years old.

I've been writing my book "Celestial" for almost a yar and a half, and am almost finished with it.

The thing is, I'm just really paranoied that people are going to steal my work, so I won't post the entire book, or even a whole chapter or synopsis. Sorry, but I really hope you will reveiw whatIi do have for what it's worth.

I apologize for all the spelling and grammer errors, I only have Office Word, and the spell check isn't great. I also tend to use a lot of phrases, once again, sorry about that.

Anyway, all reveiws, good or bad, are GREATLY appreciated!

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Celestial: Cold Front
This another excerpt of my book. But this one is an entire chapter, and i really need some advice on it. Jess jumps into a freezing lake in order to save something precious to her, but in the end she is the one who needs saving. Please Review! thanks
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: K+ - English - Sci-Fi/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,118 - Published: 12/10/2010
Celestial: Beginning of Chapter 2 Jess's Dream
Another excerpt of my book, Jess has just fallen and is unconcious. This is her dream while she is unconcious, so it is a little confusing. I appreciate and respond to any reviews!
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 1 - Words: 672 - Published: 11/27/2010
Celestial: Beginning of Chapter 17 Devil's Spawn reviews
This follows right after my first entry, Orions Belt. Again, you will probably be confused, but thank you to anyone that can constructively critisize me. I appreciate it sooooo much!
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,064 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/3/2010
Celestial: End of Chapter 16 Orion's Belt reviews
End of chapter sixteeen in my book Celestial. Im not one to post my synopsis, because I'm afraid of my work getting stolen! So, i apoligize if it is confusing. Please just tell me if you like the writing content or not...
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: T - English - Drama/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 1 - Words: 961 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/3/2010