The Rebellious Observer
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Joined 06-01-01, id: 75547
Author has written 21 stories for General, General, Song, Life, Religion, Love, and Family.

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Disfiguration reviews
puffy like the blubbery, exaggerated kiss of a fish
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/31/2006 - Complete
Overdose
your hand on my arm was squeezing me much too tight
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/29/2006 - Complete
Browntown reviews
"I almost dug up our yard entirely / tunneling, tunneling away from Browntown."
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 160 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/14/2006
A Day Like Today
"The crabs are out today,/ their naked skittering bodies like long spiders/ creepy-crawling into holes."
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 74 - Published: 8/21/2006
I do not love you like your husband loves you reviews
"My love for you is in the perfect oval of my mouth/ sucking/ the tender curvature of your neck"
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 2 - Published: 6/25/2006
The Execution of Us reviews
I never wanted anything but all of you;/I wanted what anyone wants: to own, to covet.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 98 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/13/2006
To Dream
Your heart knows the landscape it helped create.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 120 - Published: 5/11/2006
Princesses
I took you on adventures/with Rumpelstiltskin, and the Golden Goose./I took you into gingerbread houses and/let you laugh at naked kings.
Poetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 191 - Published: 5/11/2006
Vanessa’s perfume
I’m getting tired of Vanessa’s perfume/lingering lovingly on your shirt.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 100 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/11/2006
Boys and Girls and You and Me and Us
If I loved you like I loved myself—Well. I never loved myself.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 81 - Published: 5/11/2006
Character Description
"Breathe, Dave, breathe. Breathe, Dave, breathe. Your future is waiting."
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 304 - Published: 11/13/2005
…and always remember to keep breathing reviews
"and you’re beautiful and that was me not thinking"
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 225 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 3 - Published: 11/10/2005
Object Writing Exercise
A study in objectifying yourself. Literally.
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 401 - Published: 11/10/2005
Shove it reviews
A furious moment: stop; freeze-frame.
Poetry: General - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 129 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/10/2005
Neoteric Operetta reviews
This is what she's become.
Poetry: Song - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 126 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/10/2005
Setting Writing Exercise
"There are black-and-white photographs taped and tucked into the edges and folds of her dresser mirror—frayed, worn, old things, yellowing at the edges, limp and bleak as they stare out at the pretty pale pink babydoll walls."
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 378 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/9/2005
Jesus Loves Me
"Jesus loves me, He loves me, He loves me even like this"
Poetry: Religion - Rated: T - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 245 - Published: 4/11/2005
The Sometimes Series reviews
"your face is turning red and your nose is drooling snot, so you close the door"
Poetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 261 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/11/2005
An Ode to Pretty Plastic Girls
Take it with a sense of irony.
Poetry: Song - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 361 - Published: 4/10/2005
Grito reviews
"We’ve got this word, where I’m from..."
Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 282 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/10/2005
For Ashley C. reviews
I just found out today that someone I know commited suicide. This is for her.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 136 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/15/2001