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Enjoy the short stories of Devon Pitlor and want to critique on his forum.

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The Invasion of Crackland by Devon Pitlor reviews
Different forces gather in unlikely places to disturb the tranquility of King Zack's realm.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Romance/Supernatural - Chapters: 3 - Words: 69,821 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 2/23/2011 - Published: 2/6/2011 - Complete
Tyshawn Rodamar and the Cetacean Mystery by Devon Pitlor reviews
The new leader of the Plus Sized Club flexes his tribal muscle and enters a supernatural horror story.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Supernatural/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 12,376 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 1 - Published: 1/11/2011 - Complete
The Plus Sized Club: Brooke and Jared Nescott by Devon Pitlor reviews
Jared's new club promises a welcome evolution to the human race and saves a young girl from death.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 14,440 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 1 - Published: 12/19/2010 - Complete
Christmas in Crackland: The Annual Pageant by Devon Pitlor reviews
King Zack becomes a god at the annual Christmas event in Crackland.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: M - English - Fantasy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,210 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 3 - Published: 12/12/2010 - Complete
Jabari the Magician: Nikki and Trey in Crackland by Devon Pitlor reviews
Nikki and Trey discover the power of magic over logic.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Romance/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 12,895 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 4 - Published: 12/5/2010 - Complete
The Triumph of the King of Crackland by Devon Pitlor reviews
The stability of a new colony is ensured by a former prom king and his court.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15,221 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 4 - Published: 11/5/2010 - Complete
The Abduction of Mrs June Rea by Devon Pitlor reviews
A Gray Alien abduction seen from the abductor's perspective.
Fiction: Supernatural - Rated: M - English - Supernatural/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 7,548 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 3 - Published: 10/2/2010 - Complete
The Adventure of the Shield Bug with Nikki & Trey by Devon Pitlor reviews
Nikki Barazan saves herself from becoming a lifeless zombie in the clutches of a lecherous maniac.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 12,525 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 3 - Published: 9/20/2010 - Complete
The Green Lion Man: The Return of Dragonsnort by Devon Pitlor reviews
Brooke Nescott is reunited with her former lover under eerie circumstances.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Romance/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 10,157 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 3 - Published: 9/4/2010 - Complete
The Orange and The Black: Brooke & Jared Nescott by Devon Pitlor reviews
Brooke Nescott and her son Jared once again become embroiled in an enigma.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Romance/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 14,011 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 3 - Published: 8/11/2010 - Complete
Black Eyed Kids: The Story of Jamie Cyan by Devon Pitlor reviews
Former teen idol Jamie Cyan discovers the truth about Black Eyed Kids and the favors they demand.
Fiction: Horror - Rated: M - English - Horror/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 9,023 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 3 - Published: 7/25/2010 - Complete
Duke Barvo: The True Story by Devon Pitlor reviews
A dying man relates the truth behind an incredible mystery.
Fiction: Mystery - Rated: M - English - Mystery/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 11,971 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 3 - Published: 7/17/2010 - Complete
Leather Birds by Devon Pitlor reviews
Brooke Nescott examines the issue of racism with terrifying after effects.
Fiction: Supernatural - Rated: M - English - Supernatural/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 13,861 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 3 - Published: 6/23/2010 - Complete
The Mary Smith Murder Mystery by Devon Pitlor reviews
A student pursuing a horrendous murder makes an astounding discovery.
Fiction: Mystery - Rated: M - English - Mystery/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 9,407 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 3 - Published: 6/3/2010 - Complete
Brooke Nescott in the Secondary Alternate Realm by Devon Pitlor reviews
Brooke Nescott, nearing age 36, enters a frightening contingent universe and is nearly executed by its vengeful inhabitants.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Romance/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 8,811 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 3 - Published: 5/23/2010 - Complete
The End of the World and Beyond with Nikki & Trey by Devon Pitlor reviews
Ilystra Damals, on schedule, threatens to shatter the Earth.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 8,828 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 3 - Published: 5/9/2010 - Complete
Ilystra Damals: Trey and Nikki Return by Devon Pitlor reviews
Trey Agremont is rescued by his best friend from childhood, Nikki Barazan
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 10,201 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 4 - Published: 4/24/2010 - Complete
Best Friends Forever by Devon Pitlor reviews
A boy driven to desperation descends into a terrifying underworld to retrieve his best friend.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Romance/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 9,100 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 4 - Published: 2/25/2010 - Complete
The Christmas Legend by Devon Pitlor by Devon Pitlor reviews
A young couple's perfect Christmas is disrupted by inexplicable strangers.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,241 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 3 - Published: 12/23/2009 - Complete
The Baby in the Trashcan by Devon Pitlor reviews
A prep school graduate intoxicated with a strange skill finally veers from evil toward the good and finds a kind of eternal love.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 10,288 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 3 - Published: 12/15/2009 - Complete
Dragonsnort:The Continuing Story of Brooke Nescott by Devon Pitlor reviews
Brooke Nescott's disinterest in life is erased by a mysterious stranger.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 8,009 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 3 - Published: 11/26/2009 - Complete
Desperate Inquiry: The Love Life of Brooke Nescott by Devon Pitlor reviews
A young woman NOT in love is forced to make a decision with mind-boggling consequences.
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 7,590 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 1 - Published: 11/15/2009 - Complete
Alien Invasion by Devon Pitlor reviews
The long-awaited interstellar stewards finally arrive on Earth in a way not anticipated by anyone.
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: K - English - Sci-Fi/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,232 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 3 - Published: 11/4/2009 - Complete
Searching Through the Distant Night by Devon Pitlor reviews
A personal essay about forgotten or ignored wisdom
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,904 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 3 - Published: 10/27/2009 - Complete
1952 by Devon Pitlor by Devon Pitlor reviews
A "living fresco" of the dead as experienced by film location scouts.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: K+ - English - Mystery/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,735 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 3 - Published: 10/2/2009 - Complete
The Chip by Devon Pitlor by Devon Pitlor reviews
Is some food worth dying for?
Fiction: Horror - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,496 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 4 - Published: 8/19/2009 - Complete
Alfred, The Classroom Bunny by Devon Pitlor reviews
The backlash of time travel
Fiction: Horror - Rated: K+ - English - Horror/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,011 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 4 - Published: 7/29/2009 - Complete
Power by Devon Pitlor by Devon Pitlor
A adulterous state governor, fighting for her political career, is attacked by a gruesome monstrosity.
Fiction: Supernatural - Rated: M - English - Suspense/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,658 - Favs: 3 - Published: 6/29/2009 - Complete
The Expiation of Cameron Clench by Devon Pitlor reviews
A killer with a new identity is drawn into Armageddon.
Fiction: Supernatural - Rated: M - English - Supernatural/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,754 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 3 - Published: 6/9/2009 - Complete
Timmy Calvino by Devon Pitlor reviews
A neighbor's life is altered forever by a strange boy next door.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 7,172 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 3 - Published: 5/26/2009 - Complete
Christian Barzoy, Tobacco Broker by Devon Pitlor reviews
A bored commodities broker undergoes a strange transformation.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Romance/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,822 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 3 - Published: 5/10/2009 - Complete
The Time Capsule by Devon Pitlor reviews
A group of kids exact revenge on a drunken killer and return thirty years later.
Fiction: Horror - Rated: M - English - Crime/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,001 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 3 - Published: 5/10/2009 - Complete
The Supreme Council of the Coalition of Planets by Devon Pitlor reviews
A dark tale of childhood problems.
Fiction: Horror - Rated: M - English - Tragedy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,619 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 4 - Published: 5/10/2009 - Complete
The Last Present by Devon Pitlor
A poverty-stricken family finds happiness during a dismal Christmas.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Family/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 910 - Favs: 3 - Published: 5/10/2009 - Complete
Charmaine Descastries by Devon Pitlor reviews
A trailer park horror story.
Fiction: Horror - Rated: M - English - Crime/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,362 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 4 - Published: 5/10/2009 - Complete
The Week That Nothing Happened by Devon Pitlor reviews
A phony psychiatrist provides a unique solution for depression and mental collapse.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: M - English - Supernatural/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,290 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 3 - Published: 5/10/2009 - Complete
The Wife Murderer by Devon Pitlor reviews
A beautiful model finds a creative escape from a murderous stalker.
Fiction: Mystery - Rated: M - English - Drama/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,553 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 3 - Published: 5/10/2009 - Complete
SixtyTwo Years of Hell in Ohio by Devon Pitlor reviews
A business traveler enters an alternate universe.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: M - English - Supernatural/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,694 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 3 - Published: 5/10/2009 - Complete
The Last Date, A Sudden Love Story by Devon Pitlor reviews
An online dating coincidence almost turns to tragedy.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Mystery/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,189 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 1 - Published: 5/10/2009 - Complete
La Cagoule by Devon Pitlor reviews
It takes only three words to cause a mother to kill on command.
Fiction: Mystery - Rated: M - English - Mystery/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,273 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 3 - Published: 5/10/2009 - Complete
Le Bon Billet qu'a La Châtre by Devon Pitlor reviews
A captive Uzbek mail order bride finds a unique solution to her captivity.
Fiction: Horror - Rated: M - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,047 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 3 - Published: 5/10/2009 - Complete
The Loneliness of the Lone Star by Devon Pitlor reviews
A tale from the most deserted county in the U.S.
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: M - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,447 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 3 - Published: 5/10/2009 - Complete
Phalanx: The Story of a Border Collie by Devon Pitlor reviews
A loyal three-legged dog makes a sacrifice for its owner.
Fiction: Horror - Rated: M - English - Mystery/Crime - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,626 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 4 - Published: 5/10/2009 - Complete
The Loaded Shotgun by Devon Pitlor
An old woman is haunted by the chimera of an ancient crime.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Tragedy/Crime - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,525 - Favs: 3 - Published: 5/10/2009 - Complete
The Diary by Devon Pitlor reviews
A shrinking girl leaves behind a diary which grows veins and pulsates and gives a warning for the future to a woman in danger.
Fiction: Horror - Rated: M - English - Mystery/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 7,085 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 4 - Published: 5/10/2009 - Complete
The Brown Crayon and the Burden of Free Will by Devon Pitlor reviews
A young boy's solution to a problem changes the world.
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: M - English - Drama/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,402 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 4 - Published: 5/10/2009 - Complete
The Green People by Devon Pitlor reviews
A man with only half a body intervenes into the troubled relationship of a young couple.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,464 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 3 - Published: 5/10/2009 - Complete
How I Met My Wife by Devon Pitlor reviews
A man is seduced by a woman capable of shape-shifting.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: M - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,881 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 3 - Published: 5/10/2009 - Complete
Dana Drive and the Belinki Twins by Devon Pitlor
On the eve of the JFK assassination an old woman tells a strange tale.
Fiction: Historical - Rated: M - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,082 - Favs: 3 - Published: 5/10/2009 - Complete
Creative Writing for Seniors: A Summer's Tale by Devon Pitlor reviews
An old man relates a strange tale that suggests a human breeding season.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Suspense/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 7,268 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 1 - Published: 5/10/2009 - Complete