AGreatPerhaps12
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Joined 05-03-11, id: 775435, Profile Updated: 04-27-13
Author has written 5 stories for Family, General, Life, and Nature.

Hello, fellow Fictionpress enthusiasts! Thanks for visiting my profile. I created this account because I've never been able to take a proper creative writing class, and am looking for feedback/criticism on some of my writing. I often find that exchanging work with friends/classmates is unhelpful because people are unwilling to voice honest criticism. So please, read and review! I'm hoping that joining the Fictionpress community will help me to grow as a writer. And if you too are looking for someone to read/review your work, please message me!

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Stargazing
Emerald blades bow beneath my weight And tickle exposed flesh wickedly Stealing focus from tar pits above Sticking to skin in the heat...
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 240 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/26/2013 - Complete
Rushing
Rushing so quickly I thought I saw something I cannot now remember...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 70 - Published: 4/26/2013 - Complete
Mother's Love
A delicately folded paper crane Of sharp points and stern lines But possessing that subtle grace Perches on glossy mahogany...
Poetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Family/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 216 - Published: 4/26/2013 - Complete
Fair Weather reviews
We met in winter, That delicate haze of downy crystals And slick, jagged ice...
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 160 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/26/2013 - Complete
Being the Big Sister
Lately, like all adolescent boys He seems to have outgrown himself– All sharp angles and hard lines, Knobbly joints and overlarge feet...
Poetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Friendship/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 267 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/26/2013 - Complete