KiwiHunch
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Joined 06-07-11, id: 780207, Profile Updated: 05-12-13
Author has written 3 stories for Life, Mystery, and General.

Hi!! I suppose you came to this page to see about me. If you did, well then, you're awesome. :D

I'm typically a writer of many words (as my story just came out as 52 pages on MSWord) and, I'm not sure if it averages out to excellent. I always have to go back and edit a few parts here and there, and, well, I imagine every writer does. I love writing mostly mystery/action fics, because, well, I watch a lot of Law Enforcement based shows, so those are really the only ones you're gonna see from me. All original, of course. If I have an idea, I'm going to write it down, may it be short or 1,000 pages (that's never happened). I have a cycle of characters, about 200 so, yeah, you're not gonna see the same name twice anytime soon. My inspiration comes from watching TV, school, family, and just everyday life in general. I'll take an idea and mix it up so much that it's like dang, I didn't need that thought anyway. I'm probably making no sense, I do that a lot, too, which is why I need this site. I need criticism other than from my family (Which is always somewhere along the lines of "That was good," "keep up the good work" "I liked it" "You spelled *insert word here* wrong" ...yeah, that'll help my future career as a writer). If you're going to criticize, be as rude as nicely as possible. I want to know where I'm going wrong. I mean, let's face it, I won't get anywhere with "I loved it."
What the heck did you love about it?

Yeah, that's half of my story, anyway. I like putting humor in stories, because the ones I'm writing now are, quite frankly, violent and serious. But I have one or two characters that are there to lighten the mood for each "novel," if you will.

I'm currently typing up a sequel, just got done with the first book, but improvising needs to be made (I skipped a couple of paragraphs just to get it over with), a LOT of improvising. I get stuck, so don't be surprised if I take a while to update, or I may just be re-writing a chapter. I think, when I was writing this story, I accidentally made it "Fiction Press"able. I didn't have any chapters or anything, just line breakes that split paragraphs, and that was it, pretty much.

"KiwiHunch?" Really?

Yeah, unique, right? Well, me and my friends were sitting at the table during lunch, and we started to give each other nick-names. Somewhere along the lines, Kiwi happened to cross the table and, soon enough, almost half of the school (or at least people I know) are calling me "Kiwi". Not sure what reference it has to my real name, but, whatevz. I kinda liked it, and so it stuck. The "Hunch" part happened when I was in gym sitting in the bleachers and we were discussing my present-nickname, and somehow, the Hunchback of Notredame came up, and thus, KiwiHunch was born. It was originally Kiwi Crunch, but after most protesting and a small argument, KiwiHunch was there to stay. :D

Do you really want to know anything else?

If you do, well, then...I like action/mystery fics, I love reading them because I have a thing for detectives, interrogations, things like that. I can't stand it when there's a majority of the same idea flowing out from everyone's keyboards. It's like taking an apple and just stabbing it in a random place so you can call it different. It's not going to work. I like to think that most of my ideas are original, I try my best to mix them up and what not so it looks like it fell from the sky, and will leave you with "Where the crap did she think of this from?" but in a good way. :D (And if you couldn't tell, the ":D" face is my favorite one.) :D

I get soooo bored.

I like to really think out all of my characters before I actually get to writing, sometimes I write full blown family trees and histories, jail records (if any) friends, aunts, uncles, people they hated in high school, people they dated in high school, what college they went to, where they were born, what their parents did, ect. Why? Well, 1) Who wouldn't? 2) Sometimes, if I have to write a scene where they're looking up personal history or something, then I won't have to pull out random stuff from the top of my head (because, frankly, the top of my head is quite empty most days.) 3) When I'm bored... 4) I like to know everything about a character when I can. I'd bore you with a 5), but yeah, that'd take forever. If you're still reading this, then I congratulate you.


YOU SHOULD TOTALLY CHECK OUT:

Nigella00 She's so awesome and she knows it. :D Her stories are very unpredictable and unique, her characters have lots of feeling and emotion--heck, might as well plug up the TV and watch them, they're so darn good. :)

x Obsessed with Spencer Check out her story Obsolete Minds (has a nice ring to it, eh? XD ) with Cassandra, the awesome FBI agent solving a suicide/murder case. It's so grawesomeful, you know you wanna read it, and she such a dang good author, and...well, why still read? Click the link, darn you! XD

Animaester.of.the.Islands Loved his story The Only Truth, he's still writing it, so go check it out, go read about High-Schooler John Wolfe as he deciphers cases faster than an actual detective! And read his other case files! :DDD

BookAddiction Make sure you keep up to date with her!! Not sure when the next story's comin', but read the current one! Leaves you on the edge of your seat for, like, hours!!! Read, dang it, read!!! :D EDIT: READ "Human" IT'S AWESOME!!!!! READ, DARN YOU, READ!!!!

x krime-rider Read. Frozen. Lead. Just read it, it tells you everything. :D

Josephine Grace You should like, all seriousness check out--scratch that, read her story Hope and Despair--and anything else she writes! It's so beautiful and almost enough to make me cry, but it has awesome meaning behind it with a sci-fi background and...well, go read it darn you, I can't explain all of it in words. :D


9/6/11

YAAYYY!!!

After FOREVER I finally posted my story!! Yay me!! Please, read&review if you get the chance! :D

6/4/12

*Ahem...


Okay, I know I am taking forever and a half to update, and I am terribly sorry. I do not want you guys to be reading a horrible chapter 4 of Mission: Omission. I really don't. Because right now, it is horrible. That and I've had some major changes done to the plot, the set up, thanks to InflictedDemise and of course the *lovely* Lynn K. Hollander. It's actually going to be better, and I thank them both for the wake-up call. I am going to be fixing all of the chapters, dissecting them down to the core, just an all-out operation, because as much a I'd like to believe I'm "fantastical" at writing stories...I'm okay, I guess. It's funny how a year can change you, isn't it? I will update as soon as I love and have profounded (yes, I made that word up, and if you're looking at this Lynn, I know it probably doesn't make sense, no need to PM me but thanks for the insight) Chapter 4 to death and so your eyes will not bleed to death while reading it. Oh, and if you didn't notice, Mission: Omission starts out with a "1"...Who's ready for sequels?!

5/13/13

Hey. No, I have not died. To those of you who still love me (I seriously don't blame you if you hate me now) Chapter four will hopefully be up tomorrow, if it is deemed worthy enough to be passed out of the revising/edit mode. It's a little lengthy. I'd also like you to know that 2012 me tended to lie a lot. I'll continue it. Chapter 5 and all the rest will be quick to come, as I've figured out and planned and dissected a plot line and all of that. So R&R if you get the chance...if you want to.

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Blind by Animaester.of.the.Islands reviews
Two youths, stalked by an unknown force... A detective, seeking the truth... And a woman, the mysterious love of John "Wolfe" San Miguel. Who is she? What's the truth? Please read and review!
Fiction: Mystery - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Drama - Chapters: 5 - Words: 6,592 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 6/1/2013 - Published: 5/23/2013 - Complete
Human by BookAddiction reviews
In a sci-fi-esque setting, Alex finds herself hiring mercenaries to kill her former teacher in illicit magic. But when the Guard raids the tavern during her "job interview," she's on the run with a demon, an empath, an anti-mage, some kid, and a hostage.
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 10 - Words: 38,950 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 9/12/2012 - Published: 3/14/2012
Perfect by booksareamazing reviews
Lily is abused by both her boyfriend and her dad and only one person knows but he himself is abused. Can he safe her and himself before it's too late? Has grafic child abuse. If you don't like that then don't read. Please review! This is my first story!
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 2 - Words: 679 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 7/18/2012 - Published: 5/28/2011
The Restaurant Incident by peter799 reviews
A romantic dinner date takes a dark twist when a man is murdered in the very restaurant that Antei and his date, Alessa, are in and the accused is none other than Alessa. Antei knows Alessa is innocent and must seek the help of his detective friend Adrian to clear Alessa of the crime and find out who the real murderer is.
Fiction: Mystery - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Crime - Chapters: 4 - Words: 5,774 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 6/3/2012 - Published: 6/2/2012 - Complete
The Murder Incident by peter799 reviews
A person is found killed in a bizarre way in his apartment twenty stories high. The only two means of escape: a door that was locked from the inside and a window that leads to a fall straight down to the ground with no ledges or fire-escapes. How will Adrian, the rising local detective, solve this case?
Fiction: Mystery - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Crime - Chapters: 6 - Words: 8,526 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 1 - Published: 6/1/2012 - Complete
Kyle and Orville by Luna Carn reviews
What does it mean if zombies invade your dreams? How can one tie a tie without choking? Does talking to plants really help them grow? These are just a few of the things that Kyle and Orville Flynn want to learn.
Fiction: Humor - Rated: K+ - English - Family - Chapters: 47 - Words: 35,843 - Reviews: 205 - Favs: 37 - Follows: 25 - Updated: 1/11/2012 - Published: 3/5/2011 - Complete
Staff of Shadow by Silver Shadowing reviews
Silver, a thief, with his friends, Owl and Ty plan to steal the staff of shadow, a priceless artifact with a legend. But he finds out a gang called the Holy Five has already taken it and is each holding a piece of it.My first story on this site. R&R
Fiction: Mystery - Rated: K - English - Adventure/Crime - Chapters: 12 - Words: 12,502 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 12/23/2011 - Published: 6/21/2011
Once Cruel and Cold by bluecharlotte reviews
His now lost eyes were once cruel and cold, picking out flaws and tearing others apart.
Fiction: Mystery - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,024 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/13/2011 - Complete
Hallucination by bluecharlotte reviews
She brought her eyes into focus and thought she was hallucinating. A man was limping across the pavement on the other side of the tracks...
Fiction: Horror - Rated: M - English - Horror/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,777 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 4 - Published: 10/2/2011 - Complete
LunaTic by EmikoRose reviews
Luna lives in a children's home in the middle of nowhere. After having a 'show-down' with her enemy, she meets Kurai Raiden, a boy who couldn't be any more similar to her. Her goal: To find her father. Will she get the happy ending she deserves?
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,318 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 8/28/2011 - Published: 7/7/2011
Frozen Lead by krime-rider reviews
When a no-nonsense homicide detective and her all-nonsense partner are assigned to a seemingly random murder, they uncover a much larger and and more complicated plot that will prove deadly in more ways than one.
Fiction: Mystery - Rated: K+ - English - Crime/Mystery - Chapters: 4 - Words: 12,744 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 7/1/2011 - Published: 6/14/2011
Inside Matters by Birdnut reviews
We all feel upset with our body image at one point or another. But how far would you go to achieve a perfect body? Would you become anorexic? This story explores how one might journey to such a sad state of unhappiness inside of us.
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,033 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/1/2011 - Complete
THE STALKER by SiriMelk reviews
Welcome to the life of stalker James Thorn. Yes, he's a stalker. It's actually his job... Join James on his journey to becoming the government's No.1 stalker!
Fiction: Action - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Humor - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,237 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 4 - Updated: 6/30/2011 - Published: 6/28/2011
The Phantom Hiker by TennisQueen12 reviews
Not many people think about the possibility of a serial killer lingering in the woods as they hike along the mountains in the Rockies, but what if there really was a killer lingering in the woods? Would anyone find them?
Fiction: Mystery - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Crime - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,025 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/25/2011
Incentive Enough by BookAddiction reviews
A schizophrenic man is compelled to murder, suffering painful physical symptoms if he resists. He pleads with a detective to stop him through notes in blood at his crime scenes. That is, until the voice he hears orders him to kill the detective.
Fiction: Mystery - Rated: T - English - Crime/Suspense - Chapters: 3 - Words: 11,682 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 1 - Published: 6/20/2011 - Complete
Playing the Game 6: Revenge by agentkirb reviews
Mike investigates a murder that at first glance seems like a simple case of revenge. But he soon finds out that this is just the tip of the iceberg. It the biggest case of his career and it threatens to shake the very foundations of what he believes in.
Fiction: Mystery - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Crime - Chapters: 10 - Words: 47,094 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 5/29/2011 - Published: 2/21/2011 - Complete
Number 81 by Asenka.N.Chernyaeva reviews
An abused teenage hockey player. A compassionate coach. A miracle on ice. Nikolai Graham escapes his prison to wrestle with his past, his heart, and eventually with God.
Fiction: General - Rated: M - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 13 - Words: 62,352 - Reviews: 133 - Favs: 55 - Follows: 64 - Updated: 2/28/2011 - Published: 12/8/2008
Playing the Game 5: Tournament by agentkirb reviews
When a customer is killed outside a game store where a tournament is being held, Mike has a suspect. But with a strong alibi and no evidence it's an uphill battle to convince the Chief he has the right guy.
Fiction: Mystery - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Crime - Chapters: 9 - Words: 48,301 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 2/15/2011 - Published: 11/12/2010 - Complete
Playing the Game 4: Crash by agentkirb reviews
#4 in the series. Usually Mike gets called to the scene of the crime by the Chief. But this time the scene of the crime nearly runs him over. A car crashes right next to Mike, and underneath the rubble is a man that died... from a gunshot wound.
Fiction: Mystery - Rated: T - English - Mystery - Chapters: 9 - Words: 42,283 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 9/24/2010 - Published: 9/5/2010 - Complete
Playing the Game 3: Mafia by agentkirb reviews
3rd in "Playing the Game" series. Mike finds himself in a rut in his latest case. Desperate times call for desperate measures, our introvert detective winds up in the last place he ever thought he would be: his high school reunion.
Fiction: Mystery - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Crime - Chapters: 8 - Words: 35,585 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 5/26/2010 - Published: 5/9/2010 - Complete
Playing the Game: Kidnapped by agentkirb reviews
Sequel to "Framed". Consultant Mike Anderson takes on his first case with HPD. A businessman's daughter has been kidnapped. As he struggles to get used to the world of solving crime, he also struggles with events that happened in his past.
Fiction: Mystery - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Suspense - Chapters: 9 - Words: 21,419 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 1 - Published: 1/6/2010 - Complete
Playing the Game: Framed by agentkirb reviews
Let the games begin" said the mysterious voice over the phone. Mike Anderson, game programmer, returns to the city of Houston after 15 years of pursuing his career. Now he finds himself in the middle of a murder investigation where he is the prime suspect
Fiction: Mystery - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Suspense - Chapters: 7 - Words: 19,881 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 11/2/2009 - Published: 10/28/2009 - Complete
Summaries in Fan Fiction by magique reviews
An essay on the "do's and do not do's" of summarising fiction. If you're struggling to write summaries that capture readers' attention, this may be useful. Can also apply to non-fandom works.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,061 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 3 - Published: 5/13/2008 - Complete
Secret Lives of Ice Cream People by McAwsome reviews
The icecream man gets revenge
Fiction: Humor - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 354 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/19/2007 - Complete
How to Successfully Complete a Successful Story! by glitterjewele reviews
Can’t manage to finish the stories you start? Contracted writer’s block? Need a little help with summaries? Stop dodging flying vegetables. This is for you.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,843 - Reviews: 345 - Favs: 960 - Follows: 49 - Published: 9/29/2004
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Mission: Omission:: Of Enemies and Rescues reviews
When detective Lionel Vestroya goes missing after an undercover operation, it's up to his partner-in-justice Elliot Aspire to find him. Problem? Elliot's assigned a new partner, one he's not going to particularly like...
Fiction: Mystery - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Adventure - Chapters: 4 - Words: 6,794 - Reviews: 18 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 4 - Updated: 5/14/2013 - Published: 9/6/2011
Is This The Sum Of My Life?
Is It REALLY?
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 286 - Published: 5/5/2013 - Complete
The Girl in The Great Black Hat reviews
If you've ever had a friend with a great black hat, and never knew how to reach through to them.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 588 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 3 - Published: 6/13/2011 - Complete